Black Businessman Little Taoist Priest

The writing is too contradictory. I just traveled through the past, and I was scared on the way out. I met a ghost when I went in. In the end, the ghosts said no more and went their separate ways. The protagonist actually fought for a stranger, and the second one even tried the legendary method on earth to deal with ghosts. You are so confused that you want to reincarnate early. You are just an ordinary person who has just traveled through time. In the first few pictures, you are trying to commit suicide. Then he tried his best not to accept the money, saying that he was afraid of affecting the popularity of the incense, so how could you get along with other magicians? There is also the fear that the incense will not be good. People only care about whether you have real skills. Receiving money will help spread your reputation, and you will feel more at ease when you pay. The writing is weak, I can't stand it, it's inconsistent and unreasonable.

Chapter 5: Money should be collected. Otherwise, how can you make money? Giving favors does not mean giving everything away

The book is very good. But it feels like the author is blowing a gun. . . . A fantasy world of firearms. . . . It's not as good as resources and one's own realm.

This crappy mall has no sense of existence. It's so expensive that I still buy a bunch of useless junk. Just like the title of your book, the protagonist is betrayed by a gangster and has to risk his life for something. What kind of electric shock stick can I buy? This thing can't kill anyone in modern times, and it's even more useless in the age of gods and ghosts

The story has no main line, just write whatever comes to mind!

Seven cards were defeated. . . The introduction of Goldfinger is unclear. The protagonist is silly and silly. The world is confused.

The Taoist priest is real, but the black businessman didn't see it. The story keeps advancing without any pause, a little suspenseful, and the writing is very vague. The protagonist should be a neurotic person. There is no connection between the two chapters. There is a lot missing. I have read more than 20 chapters and it is like this.

The protagonist has no knowledge at all about catching monsters and killing ghosts, and neither does his master. You also said that the imperial court ordered their monastery to suppress ghosts in dozens of villages. You are coaxing ghosts. Well. There is no mood to keep readers reading.

The author was afraid of death at first, so why did he go to the border? If we preach, why don't we do publicity? At least you're not running around, you have parents at home and don't travel far, your brother is still here, and he's in such a dangerous world, why don't you care? It's incomprehensible, very contradictory, the story is not reasonable at all, it's just wandering around, and it's not developed! Is it just for the sake of surfing?

Huang Sanpang called the protagonist eldest brother, which really pissed me off. Can't I respectfully call him senior brother? In ancient times, interests were the most important thing. Taoism had Taoist rules, which were too nondescript.

Just a piece of weed, you can taste it if you are free.

It's no wonder that I'm on the streets, plug-ins are useless, and even the cultivation methods are useless.

It's boring, there's another wanderer, and he's armed with an electric baton and a gun. The ridiculous plot requires it. This reason is too omnipotent, but it's just that the author is coaxing himself to play, and the readers are still acting out the drama.

I've read Chapter 24. The writing is a bit poor, the dialogue is awkward, and the plot is barely understandable.

Zhou Tai! If you don't protect Sun Quan, what are you doing here? !

I've read Chapter 59 and asked if this book is intended to collect the twelve zodiac signs! We already have Rat and Dog, what's next!

I don't know how the 5-year-old peach wood sword was made, and the talisman is used as a source of income (Chapter 2). It feels like the time is very wrong ♬(ノ゜∇゜)ノ♩, did it just pass through? Or has it been passed down several years ago?

Three steps and a monster, two steps and a monster, how do you let mortals live?

What will the religion be called in the future?

Let the author rewrite it. No more firearms. And computers and stuff.