Pets Arrive in the Real World
现实宠物来临
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 945k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
455Chapters
1.4kRecommendations
5.4kFans
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No wonder nobody reads this. Every time there's a fight, the pet runs away, and the owner steps in. Is this a beast-taming novel? Isn't this a human-taming novel? They should change the name to "Real-life Pet Online Human Taming."
I read this novel in one go to the last chapter, and I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story. Keep it up!
Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง
After reading 40 chapters, here are the shortcomings I summarized. First, the focus is not clear; if you're going for a pet-centric storyline, don't keep writing about people. Second, the power system is unclear, the hierarchical relationships are not explained, and what is the relationship between ordinary and elite? Third, having a cheat code but not knowing how to use it.
The writing is a mess. The "golden finger" (a powerful, overpowered ability) doesn't need to be used to find good-quality pets and resources; such a powerful ability is completely wasted. Is this a pet novel or an otherworld war novel? It focuses on people; I didn't see any outstanding features from the pets. There's no otherworldly adventure either; it's just rambling on about showing off and being an official on Earth, completely off-topic.
Did you skip the transitions in the middle? It feels a bit messy, but overall it's not bad. Below I will list the questions. The description of the protagonist's subsequent actions after the wolf boss was defeated is somewhat illogical. No matter what, after finally defeating the boss, one would usually loot the corpse, or at least keep it (it's very valuable).
After reading up to chapter 22, I stopped reading once I joined the official team. Personally, I think it might be better for independent players.
Such a dismal result! Leaving a comment.
The power system in the book is a bit chaotic; I hope the author can unify it, or perhaps dedicate a separate chapter to it. Finally, author, please keep up the good work and don't abandon the book!
It feels pretty good, it's my type, but could you please proofread it? There are so many awkward sentences and typos. I'm not just complaining, there are a lot of them.