Pets Arrive in the Real World

No wonder no one is watching. Every time there is a fight, the pet runs away and the owner comes in. Is this a beast-control novel? Isn't this a royal novel? ? Just change the name, call it Reality Pet Online Master

I read the last chapter of this novel in one sitting and am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot. Come on!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading Chapter 40, I summarized the shortcomings 1. There is no distinction between priority and pet flow. Don't always write about people 2. The power system is unclear and the hierarchical relationship is not written. What is the relationship between ordinary and elite? Three, there is a golden finger but I can't use it Four, there is no way to upgrade pets, it's all blurry Five, it's basically daily life, there is no thrill of upgrading, no sense of satisfaction.

It's written in a mess. Goldfinger doesn't need to look for pets with good qualifications to find resources. Such a powerful ability is completely useless. Is this a pet novel or an alien war novel? They all reflect people. I don't see anything outstanding about pets. The adventure in the alien world is not just pretending to be an official on Earth. Luo Liba is completely off track.

Did you abandon the transition to the front in the middle? It still feels a bit messy, but overall the writing is okay. . Let me list the questions below~ After the wild wolf boss is killed, the description of the protagonist's subsequent behavior is a bit unreasonable. Anyway, when people finally kill the boss, they will touch the corpse or something. The data perspective is the golden finger of the protagonist, or does everyone have it, or everyone has his or her own talent, but the protagonist's talent is very rare There is also the transition part of the plot. After the plot of the wolf, he picked up an orangutan and went home, and the things that should be clearly written later were not written (clearly describe the changes in the orangutan and the reason why the slime turned into an egg). There is no beginning or end, and it jumps directly to the plot of the invasion of the later dimension, which is puzzling Of course. . Maybe the author also has reasons that are difficult to explain. If the chapter has been deleted, please make a note later. If the application is not returned, you can open another chapter and briefly outline the plot. In order to make it easier for readers to understand the author's story, thank you for your hard work 😃

After seeing Chapter 22, I don't want to read it if I join the official list. Personally, I think it might be better to join the official list.

Such a miserable result, Liuzhao

The power system in the book is a bit confusing. I hope the author can unify it or list it in a single chapter. Finally, the author hopes not to be a eunuch.

It feels pretty good, it's my favorite type, but can you check it out? There are a lot of sentences that don't make sense and typos. I'm not complaining, there are so many.