The Villainess Is Devoted to Cultivating Immortality

Cultivation is about cultivation level, not gender. I hope the author can create a grander setting and not be confined to ancient feudalism.

Ever since the female lead's father had his soul swapped, the story has gone increasingly off-track. Has the author let loose and started writing whatever they want?

The author needs to pay more attention to details; otherwise, it will feel like reading a draft.

Actually, I'm not particularly interested in how Su, this reborn person, became stronger; after all, her temperament is what it is. Looking at the situations of these two families, the only thing I don't understand is why, even in the cultivation era, there's still gender inequality (the Su style is essentially no different from the Fei style, the only difference being the difference between…

Why does the cultivation technique he practices seem like a furnace cultivation technique?

At first glance, the synopsis says the female lead is focused solely on cultivation, so please, please, no male lead, no romance, no dependence on a man, and please, no romance novel! I'm fed up with those stories that start with the female lead's struggle for independence and self-reliance, all focused on cultivation, but then the moment the male lead appears, she's already in a relationship, and her character changes completely.

This is a domestic power struggle novel, I didn't feel any cultivation of immortality. It's just a constant battle of wits with the female lead, and she's not very bright. For a cultivation novel, focusing solely on family life is too boring.

I think the outline is great, but the writing style feels a bit strange, like a diary entry.

The author isn't very old, is she? The writing style feels both childish and mature, and the language is very well organized (✪▽✪). However, the characters' mental states seem to fluctuate wildly. Take the section about the protagonist and her father, for example.

To be honest, those who say that water-elemental people are weak and can only be used as furnaces have probably never seen the sea! Haven't you heard of tsunamis and floods that destroy the world?