The Wizard Is Dying

All the way through the latest chapter, I saw at least four or five genres of common routines mixed together, but I couldn't read it at all. The feeling of pleasure was completely lost. I had a vision on the spot of the hot spring stay that it was like a Japanese comic hero's stay in the forest. All the poisonous points of the routines came together and the magic potion at the beginning was hidden After the beginning, a racing scene to the dormitory and a fight scene with Caesar should have been written with a sense of smoothness from one shot to the end, but they were directly fragmented by random cuts. In some places, the logical connection of the context was unclear. If these contents were not overhauled, I am afraid that half of the people would be dismissed.

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After reading the second and third chapters, I always felt that the protagonist was stupid. Shouldn't you first understand the basic situation before traveling through time? As soon as his eyes darkened, he went to drink tea with a woman he had no friendship with. He also asked about how to improve his spiritual power, but a wizard sister didn't ask, but went to seek advice from a person who even he noticed was a bit weird. If this was a dark current, the main character would have no scum left.

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I originally came here to see the wizard stream, but in the end I only saw the mentally retarded stream. The protagonist takes the initiative to express his friendship to the beautiful squad leader as soon as he travels through time. It was clear that the relationship between the two was ordinary before. Then the defeated general of the protagonist's sister held a grudge and directly removed the protagonist's results after failing the test. The problem was that when the defeated general was tested, everyone present knew the results, and admission staff from other colleges were also present. This is not what Shi Lezhi is. For example, the village official election was forcibly appointed and removed on his own in the presence of the leaders above, without consulting the leaders. And everyone present knows about black box operations. Is it necessary to be so cunning?

Do you know? Cowards, incompetent, losers, short-sighted, generally use the excuses of "shooting the first bird with a gun," the tree is more beautiful than the forest, the wind will blow it, etc... To comfort themselves. I don't know how it happened. Nowadays, whether it's TV or novels, everything is turning life upside down. Those who work hard, show themselves, and are unyielding become villains and losers in life And those who are timid and timid in doing things become pig feet, but become winners in life. There are many pig trotters in novels nowadays, regardless of their talent or talent, as long as they enter any sect, they have to "low-key" hide their strengths and be an "ordinary" person. Then what? "A", powerful, kill. "B" worked hard for his dream, and killed. "C" tried to build connections for his own future, but he was killed even if he didn't pull the pig's feet. This is the "low-key" nature of pig's trotters. Anyway, you have to "low-key" to eat, drink and eat. Oh, there is also the pig's trotters that are "low-key" and "cannot take care of themselves" when they enter the sect, and then suddenly, the life skills are maxed out, which is a slap in the face, not happy, and then the top brass all regard the pig's trotters as a treasure. What causes a pig's trotters who "can't take care of themselves" to have full life skills and never take care of them. Whether pig's feet could be spies has never occurred to me. Nowadays, there are pig-footed "low-key" people who pretend to be useless, but end up blaming others for being blind, destroying their own school, and claiming that the school is biased. Are they really disgusting? Eat as much cake as your belly has, pretending to be pure, and end up blaming others for not being full. Final words. Those low-key pig feet are all as awesome as those people with a monthly salary of more than 2,000 yuan, a car and a house, relying on "dad". Summary Book friends! Remember, keeping a low profile will not get you out of Jack Ma.

The author is great, can you see it? At least tell us about your vest

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's not that I'm criticizing you as the author. There are too many flaws in the systematic writing. At most, you can just live a life of hooligans. There is almost no hope of becoming a super god.

No, give up! Can write one line, one line

Stop talking, zombie men are handsome

I think Pig's Feet can be a bit more harem-like. The writing in the front is relatively soft, but the writing in the back is not bad. The writing by these girls is very interesting and allows the protagonist to develop feelings, but it cannot be brainless. Personally, I think the current female characters are enough. The one called Lilika is super cute.

The author is great. Have you changed your vest or have you closed your pen?

It's pretty. Come on! ! Update quickly! ! ! !

After raising it for a long time, I tried to persuade him to quit at the beginning. Shouldn't the protagonist disguise himself first and then collect information?

If you didn't look carefully, you would think it was the wizard dying. Just thinking about dying, what else is there to write about, is it necessary to seize the body?

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