Weird Office

Writing a book is not easy, come on! ... If you have a glass heart, please ignore the following text. If you want to read real suggestions, please be mentally prepared: 1. The title and introduction of the book are both qualified. Let's start directly from the text. First of all, there are many typos in it. It is recommended that the author go back and revise it carefully. There are also frequent occurrences of words similar to "(๑• . "•๑)" Are punctuation expressions, but in the eyes of many editors, these are just random use of punctuation marks and are demerit points, so they were finally removed. 2. The character of the protagonist is ambiguous. How did he open his office? Where did his Taoism come from? Wait, he actually has a master? The answers to these questions can actually be summed up in one or two sentences at the end of the first chapter, otherwise the reader will be confused and confused. 3. I feel that the author's social experience is a bit shallow, and the portrayal of various characters (including the protagonist) is too facial and childish. It may be useful to novice readers of the same age, but it will be a minus for readers with some experience. 4. Corresponding to the above, there is also some logic. At the beginning, when the two customers got their ears and noses, shouldn't the first reaction be to call the police? What the hell is a private firm? ! Obviously the author chose the wrong reason for this. If there were strange footsteps as mentioned in the introduction, it would be better to call the police but the police would not accept it. 5. The story is still good. We must seize this advantage and try to use it to cover up the previous shortcomings. If any of the above is offended, please send me a letter! Finally, I wish the book will be signed as soon as possible and become a big hit!

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Come on (›´ω`‹ )I'm new too

It's old to mention this topic, so I'll add it to your collection 😃

It feels good, come on, author (ง •̀_•́)งCollect it first

Do I have to open a special chapter to explain the background? 🤫😂😂 Actually, I want to explain the background story slowly.

I wrote about the setting of the Nine-Character Mantra in the work. If you don't understand it well, you can read it.

I just found out it was supernatural. I was scared most of the night. Overall it's not bad, maybe... It's better than that Maybe it's because I'm clumsy and can't express my feelings Anyway, keep up the good work

I like your cover. It's more personalized. I also made the cover myself, hahahaha.

Collected. Come on, let's go~ I'm sorry that I occupy the third floor alone, hahahaha

Personal opinion: I feel like I don't understand what the system is, and I was quite confused in the early stage. I can't understand many things. I always feel like a lot of things haven't been written out, and it feels like it's too fast. The above is purely personal opinion. Come on, author!

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