The Largest Brand of Cultivating Immortality

Very beautiful😭

Interesting, cool cover, cool introduction, and new story!

The cover is overly excellent and induces comfort

Thank you for the big reward, thank you very much 🙏

Why does your cover smell like coconut_?

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The cover and introduction are very nice, and the writing is smooth. Although I don't really read 2D, I think it should be okay.

It's okay, you can pursue it. Not too toxic, suitable for readers with fast browsing speed. Relaxation is the current major development trend of online writing. First of all, the author has chosen the right writing direction, but I have a small question about the classification. I personally feel that the results of this book will be better if it is published in Xianxia. Why come in the second dimension... After all, the second dimension is now the world of fan fiction. Here are a few personal opinions, please ignore them if you don't like them: 1. The plot is too confusing. The first chapter was okay, but in the second chapter, an inexplicable studio suddenly pops up. The purpose is to explain how the protagonist traveled through time. This is completely unnecessary. The protagonist has already traveled through time, and no reader will worry about how he traveled through time or the miserable situation before the time travel! 2. The plot after the second chapter actually went backwards. The protagonist started writing after traveling to another world. This made the first chapter completely useless and the readers who watched it were very disappointed. It is recommended to continue writing directly from the plot of the first chapter. As for some settings and so on, they can be revealed in a long and gradual manner. There is no need to be too anxious. The first thing readers value is the story itself, and various strange settings are secondary. That's it.

Um, this cover. . . . Coconut juice😅

When I saw a related work, I should be majoring in hotel management, which is much better than my web front-end. I studied poorly, and what I studied was covered by other majors. I couldn't find a job at all, and I lost my direction. I suggest that junior students (those from vocational high school or ordinary high school, I don't know) should choose the major they like instead of choosing a college that they reluctantly entered. The school may not necessarily take you seriously, and may think you are a burden.

This fellow Taoist, I am amazed when I see your bones. Your talent is extraordinary. You will surely become a god with one book.

On top of that, it's a bit formulaic and has some creativity. Overall, it's an easy read that can be read. (￣(●●)￣)Wish it would be available soon

Brother, is your book just taken off the shelves? 😰

Sorry, there have been some things going on at home recently, so I haven't had time to comment. Long wait. Read the book...

Look at this cover and then look back at the coconut milk in your hands

I thought I saw coconut water

Very good work! Collected! Learn, learn! Come on and start a new book! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

I don't need to put my books on the bookshelf anymore. I've finished it. Thank you for your hard work!

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There is no new book in sight, so I'm going to read it on the reading list. 🤣

Great God, you are so arrogant🌹🌹😄😄

Master, my brother gives you a big hug 😳😳 Accept it.

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