Black Technology Entrepreneurship: I Really Make Mobile Phones!

Please don't make mistakes, and don't ask me about technical logic anymore. I understand. What else should I write about novels😦.

The battery of the iPhone 4 is 1800 mAh. The main battery can be fully charged to 6000 mAh in about 300 seconds, which is less than seven or eight minutes. The question is, it takes less than half an hour to fully charge the battery of the Realme GT5240W and the phone is still hot. How can I solve the problem of "steelmaking" of the phone if it charges so quickly? What should I do if it becomes a lighter and burns people?

Since it is a novel focusing on black technology, the focus should be on black technology, not business war. It is not that it cannot be written, but it is too long. The focus should be on the birth of black technology, the birth of products, market feedback, plus user experience, and the description of social media. The current way of writing is simply putting the cart before the horse. If you write about business war, just write about business war, market integration, company development, and employee treatment. But if your setting is rebirth plus system, then writing so many business battles will not make much sense. For example, if you remove rebirth and just write about system, will this book have basically no impact?

Fully ordered, 169 chapters so far. First: The description of the villain mocking the protagonist in an incident is long and detailed, and the protagonist's retaliation and slap in the face are often summarized in two sentences. You are a novel. It is here to make readers happy, not to annoy readers. It would be better not to write if it is not a complete slap in the face. Second: The interaction between the protagonist and the supporting actor (the government) can be said to be touch-and-go, with no sense of interaction at all. He is obviously a top scientific and technological talent, but as a result, the government's technology has been acquired, and the protection intensity has dropped significantly. These are technical talents, and talents are the most important! There is obviously a department to protect the protagonist, but the result is that the protagonist does not know anything about the protagonist (the protagonist was involved in the photolithography machine incident). It is obviously a technology that affects the world (gas battery), but the secret department does not check in, and the protagonist, the developer, does not keep secrets and can go abroad freely. It was obviously a meeting organized by the government, but a rubbish (host) appeared during the interview, and nothing happened afterwards (the government did not respond, and the protagonist did not retaliate). This is the golden body of the protagonist. All departments of this world government are blind (patent office, confidentiality department, exhibition organizers) and there are too many details to complain about. Third: Can the supporting actor Zhao Tiezhu stop writing! It's okay to write before your career is on the right track. After your career is on the right track, you have to spend a lot of time describing the small actions and appearances of various supporting characters, such as the description of Zhao Tiezhu's scars that appear every time. This Zhao Tiezhu makes me extremely disgusted. Every time something happens, it is always related to a woman. His facial description is still that of an uncle. A senior executive with a rich love history is as if he has never seen a woman before. Every time he goes out, he is either looking for a woman or on the way to find a woman.

It's too watery, the plot is average, black technology, more than a hundred chapters, and it still starts with a waste battery, crazy epithets that shouldn't be described, watering it hard, is this progress like 10,000,000 words?

The author deliberately suppresses the sales of mobile phones. In the real book, the Orange mobile phone has that technology and price, and its sales exceed 50 million units every minute. Just look at the sales of Xiaomi and Huawei! The author might as well increase the technology research and development point to the tens of millions level, that would be reasonable! As a result, the book said that the Orange mobile phone was launched with a million dollars, but the annual sales volume was only 10 million, which is unreasonable and unhappy!

If the author wants to write about a male protagonist who has feelings for his family and country, don't write about a female protagonist from a foreign investment bank!

How can I put it this way? It's cool but not cool. The writing is good, the plot is relatively reasonable, and the details are rich. However, the author is a bit too self-indulgent, which leads to a messy rhythm and poor storytelling. Summary: It's a relatively sumptuous meal in a small restaurant, but it's a bit sour. It can be seen that the author is trying his best to describe a part of the real business war, and even a complete world view. But there are too many supporting characters that have nothing to do with the main plot and it seems watery. There is also a lot of sensational writing, which makes it a bit awkward to watch. The second problem is that some plots may be unavoidable in real business, but too much ink is considered abusive in a cool novel. The third problem is that the scenes in the middle and later stages are too spread out. Each section wants to describe it in detail and incorporates too many data and report formats. As a result, the entire writing style is like an investigation report on industry history, with a messy timeline and a relatively invisible protagonist.

The previous rhythm is a bit off, a good business article has so many irrelevant plots. It looked so cloudy and foggy. It's almost on the shelves, and we're just starting to sell mobile phones. It would be better if it could be compressed.

I just finished reading it, and I just want to ask if you wrote it wrong? What about your system? Apart from making an appearance, there is nothing more to come. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, focus on technology. If you don't know how to write sensational scenes, focus on data. I don't know how to read other people's pure business articles on various marketing and company structures? Too high for you

The author is very naughty, so the protagonist is also very naughty. The science and technology articles are about trade, the trade articles are about patriotism, the patriotic articles are about love, and love is about people's hearts. Any two or three themes can be connected together. The result is that the author becomes a big pot of stew, and he insists on getting together again. Many of the supporting characters have evil intentions, and the protagonist, like the author, has both wants and needs. It's very uncomfortable to see people flying

It's quite good-looking, not laggy, and the technical descriptions aren't given in one stroke, making it more immersive.

This book gets worse as it goes on, and its biggest flaw is the heroine.

Did the author get confused when he wrote it, or did I just not understand it? The Orange can be fully charged to 10% because of the gaseous lithium battery, but it does not mean that reverse charging takes ten seconds. Even if you discharge it so fast, the iPhone 4 is not a gaseous lithium battery. If it charges 800 mAh in ten seconds, will it not explode and turn into a grenade in an instant?

It's too long, and too much ink has been spent writing those data and plots of those supporting characters. Brother, this is a novel, not a written report! There are also some small poisonous spots, the back is wet with sweat, the heart suddenly shrinks, and the pupils shrink. These are exclusive to other Dragon King novels! It might be good to add less boring plots. Just like if you opened 2,000 stores for business development, do you have to write a separate page for each store? This is a novel, not a lecture

Author, do you want to read your book? You'd better re-read your novel from the beginning. You got into the trap from the initial black technology, but now you are writing more and more confused. How long has the black technology been gone? For example, what is written in today's chapter, what I want to express, there is no introduction and no highlights, it is all clichés. What I read is a novel, and it is a pleasant article. Writing it is enjoyable and reading it are two different things. Maybe you wrote it very freely, but I couldn't understand it in the fog, and the various plots were incomprehensible. Don't be too obsessed with rationality. If I really want to see the rationality, I will just read my professional book! I really hope you can read your own book and don't write crookedly. It's really not fun now! The heroine is also baffled! I hope your articles will get better and better!

Forcing a low price is the most unreasonable. A mobile phone dealer only earns dozens. Who will sell your mobile phone to you? You can make more money selling Chinese cabbage than this. The first mobile phone I bought, Honor 3c, was 999 online and sold in mobile phone stores for 1299. There were so many mobile phone stores at that time, how could you open so many without making money? I'm afraid I can't even pay the rent. You can also check Huamiov's salary. Their revenue depends on how many employees they have. At a minimum, it accounts for 10% of revenue. There is also value-added tax, which is the largest tax in my country. It accounts for half of the total tax and is collected at 17% of the total value. It can be shared among the supply chain. The more value you create, the more you pay. Qualcomm also charges 2.5% Of the total phone price for communications patent fees, and Nokia and Ericsson also charge them. Just counting these few points, it is simply a loss-making business. It's not about making small profits but quick turnover, it's about selling more that makes small profits.

It's too watery As for your system, it started to come out once, but it didn't come out again This is more than 200 chapters, and it's still a technology,

Products made by exploiting workers purely by relying on low-cost manpower and time advantages are something to be proud of?

The pricing of mobile phones is completely unreasonable and the brand system is chaotic. Mr. Lei's mobile phone is already recognized as the king of cost-effectiveness. The protagonist has so many advanced technologies that he doesn't even dare to buy it more expensive than Mr. Lei. The low price of the third generation has killed your brand tone. How can you support employees and engage in research and development at this price? It is obvious that the mobile phone has higher technological content, better user experience, and the cost is higher than others. In the end, it is sold at a lower price than others. It is purely disrupting the market. Isn't it okay to create a sub-brand like Mr. Lei? The performance and experience of Orange 4 is better than that of Orange 3, and the price of the new phone is lower than last year's old phone. I really want it to be released as soon as it is released.

The writing is okay, but the author writes that the company is really doing charity. 3% Profit. He also said that if there is a slight fluctuation, he will lose money. He also took a big order from the military... You might as well just give the company to the military. (The above is from Chapter 157.) Depressed. The subscription is overturned again.

There is a bit of ink, and what you wrote is that battery technology has attracted the attention of the National Security Bureau. With such great technology, you can get a lot of loans from the bank, but you have to write about a wealthy foreign woman. It is really out of place.

After reading this in one breath, I felt it was okay, but it started to get confusing later on. Come on, author, don't be overwhelmed by writing, and organize the outline carefully.

Not bad, I hope to see more interesting black technologies

The author has overlooked one thing. Real society is a real society. Novels are novels. In reality, Chinese products are expensive and people will criticize them. In the novel, the price is high and the protagonist is awesome. Who do you want to show it to because you want us to resonate with it? It has no effect at all and has the opposite effect. You are originally a black technology. Why do you write so depressing novels? The money you should earn must be even more expensive than foreign ones.

High technology cannot be equated with cheapness. If you are the first to invent it, if you can't make money, how can anyone enter this industry? Only if you say product iteration, the industry's complete price will come down. You have developed so many black technologies yourself that you can't even reach the first echelon, and you are still a third-rate product. How can it sell so well with such a poor performance? A mobile phone that came out later than you has a higher sales volume than you. The protagonist has no reflection at all. If you say that you will only do high-end and leave the mid- to low-end to domestic manufacturers, will you think you are righteous and disrupt the market with the latest technology and the lowest price?

I hope that the plot will be coherent. Don't write about materials in one chapter, mobile phones in the next chapter, and airplanes in the next chapter. These are not group portraits. They feel like a catalog, like writing an outline. 😅

The character positioning in this book is actually a big advantage, but the shortcomings are also obvious. The characterization of the characters is too random. Zhao Tiezhu is the same, and so is Gong Yun. The heroine is a bit abrupt and chaotic. The book has the potential to be a hit. All the settings feel good, such as employee No. 4 Xiaomi, and the charity he represents, and Orange's level 8 engineer design It makes people feel good to set these, but there are too many loopholes in the plot. With the size of Orange Holdings, you are on par with Alibaba, Tencent, and Huawei. The only AI in the world that is open source can beat 10 Alibaba, not to mention there are so many descendants of the company. I feel very awkward when I look at it. In addition, you are forced to interact with the country. Bundling, this is stupid. You are right to rely on the state, and you are right to contribute to the country. However, the state and private capital are contradictory bodies. What you write is too harmonious and weakens the state side. Of course, all the books I have read have this problem, and basically none of them can handle this relationship well. It is better to write less about the state side in the future, and stay calm. The secret should be good, but one more thing, the development of science and technology is actually linked. When you have a very awesome technology, others can easily be inspired and catch up quickly. Technology is actually a breakthrough in cognition. The following plot can allow other companies and other countries to catch up. Otherwise, if you play alone later, the book will be unfinished.

He is chattering in almost every picture. Is he the protagonist or is Chen Mo the protagonist? The author describes him in more detail than Chen Mo.

I haven't read it for a long time. I subscribed to the latest chapter and I actually picked up the plot from last month. The conscientious author took my special conditions into consideration.