Lord of God and Heaven

I am a newbie, so flaws in my writing are unavoidable. I hope that all readers who read this work can give me suggestions, and I will take them seriously.

The starting point is a bit too high. The starting point is the Emperor of Heaven, the first person under the Emperor of Heaven. The focus later on should be Ten Thousand Realms, otherwise it will be boring if the layout is too small. The pace is also a bit too fast. Xiaoya's daily life could be more descriptive and warm, and the inheritance journey could be more cruel. I don't have any fun at the moment. It's a pity to throw it away if it tastes tasteless.

The reason why no one invests is probably because you have stopped updating for more than 7 days during your coding period.

Come and check it out, there are more than 30 chapters, I have written 20 chapters, and there is not a single bubble in the book review area

This work is very good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

More careful consideration will be given to the details, but the lack of punctuation somewhat affects the reading experience. It is recommended to review it after writing. Collected, come on!

Is there a system? Is there a cheat? Is it a post-apocalyptic story? Is it a decisive killing? Is it a stallion? The villain dies because he talks too much. Does he like to be cute when fighting? Is his IQ online? People who threaten the protagonist should act in advance to prevent danger before it starts, but the danger is nipped in the bud. Only articles like this are good to read.

Come on, the author's writing is great, I have saved it.

I think it's very well written! Keep up the good work!

It's so difficult for newbies. Let's cheer together. Save it. Welcome to visit again.

Soldiers have invested in "Taoyuan Bandit Suppression" and collected it permanently. Let's work together 🤝

Well written. Collected. Welcome to visit again. Give me some suggestions. Thank you.

I'd say it's amazing. After finishing a chapter, I had to kneel down.

Congratulations ^_^♪ on finishing the book! The investment income has been received, stick to the end and finish from beginning to end, thank you for your hard work!

Come on, don't listen to those who don't feel back pain when they stand and talk. Let's encourage you.

After reading the first chapter, I feel that you take people with different professions and personalities for granted. For example, the police, almost no police will say that my son is celebrating his birthday, so I should take a break from work. When you want to express fatherly love or other content, you should consider the actual situation more.