Pokemon: The Invincible Kirby

I'm popping in to show my support for the adorable Snorlax!

My investment yielded 52 points, congratulations!

Anyone here? Want to check in?

Human nature is inherently good at birth; isn't the author even more of a villain? If you don't update, I won't read it. Let's see what you do then.

I clicked in because of the beginning, and it turns out it's about Snorlax! Not Star Kirby! Luckily I read the beginning, otherwise I thought it was another Snorlax book that I like! 😒😅

Their worldview is ruined. It doesn't look good. I'm giving up.

Pokémon is already a niche genre, and coupled with its flawed world-building, resembling an otherworldly fantasy, writing a successful story is far more difficult than writing a typical one.

Dear author, your new book is great, please update!

I think it's alright, but I don't know why it's not popular. Apart from the author not replying to others, everything else is OK? I haven't updated in the last couple of days, so it might be abandoned. It just died again after a while, sigh :-( I'm planning to move it to the abandoned section (my personal group).

Briefly, here are my thoughts... 🙂