Time Travel Is Coming, Brother

As a funny martial arts article, first of all, I think the author should clarify the meaning of funny. It can't be funny for the sake of being funny. Funny should also be in style. It doesn't mean that it is vulgar or interesting (I may have said it a bit too much, Wang Haihan). The author is a newcomer to the book, and his handling of some small plots and fragments is quite eye-catching and unconventional. However, in the overall coherence, we can still see obvious newcomer characteristics - the plot is not logical enough, the language expression is lacking in writing, the character design is not very pleasing (mainly me 🤭), and even the main line of the article is very unclear. It is recommended to set an outline of the article before writing, and then a detailed outline. In this way, the independent small theaters can be arranged and connected in a reasonable and reasonable manner, so as to avoid writing whatever you want and not making enough transitions and falling into chaos. Most of the comments are complaints, maybe because I am an old bookworm and have high requirements for newcomers... To be honest, I can't even read many of the recommended books😂, but my standards have not changed no matter what the book is 2333 Everyone has come from the beginning, and the purpose of practicing writing is to improve yourself. I hope the author can persevere, and the writing and plot will not be a problem~ Come on (●'◡'●)ﾉ❤