Becoming a Master Starting with The Rising of the Shield Hero

The beginnings of the Shield Hero and Qin's Moon arcs felt like a major turn-off. If you can't accept that, just start with the Naruto arc. In general, the early parts of the novels have many plot holes that can't be filled in, so they can only be filled in later.

For example: Kaguya Otsutsuki (Naruto) Ability: Immortality (can only be sealed, can absorb any ninjutsu, and can recover from any damage) White Eye (can see the other person's meridians, nerves, and acupoints, and can detect things one kilometer away) The Rinne Sharingan (a dojutsu unlocked by consuming the fruit of the Divine Tree, capable of performing Infinite Tsukuyomi and Ame no Minaka).

The protagonist's role in the Shield Hero arc is minimal, indicating a lack of plot control by the author. Entering a tragedy without completely overturning the original story is essentially just torturing the protagonist. Furthermore, the protagonist's name is incredibly awkward; choosing such a childish and cheesy name is truly a lack of skill.

To be honest, the beginning was weird. The protagonist's character design is problematic. Why is the Heroic Spirit Kaguya-hime or something? Is it a Heroic Spirit from another world? A legend? Or some legendary figure? What abilities does it have? What class? What Noble Phantasm? What stats? Isn't this a dimensional summoning type story? What does it have to do with Heroic Spirits?

It doesn't feel like a ninja at all; it feels like a shut-in. It's so fake. You should have written it like Madara Uchiha, instead of writing it like a saint just to pad out the word count. It's so frustrating to read. 🤫

Your protagonist is supposed to be a war god, but all I see is a delusional otaku. In chapter 12, how could someone invincible become so "incompetent" and angry just because a few kids are slandering each other?

Sorry, I can't keep going. I was treated like a servant by Kaguya at the beginning, and my character's personality collapsed halfway through. I can't accept it because I easily empathize with the protagonist. Also, did the previous Infinite Tsukuyomi expire?

The writing is a bit poor, the plot is a bit silly, but otherwise it's fine. I'm not going to read it anyway.

First, why is the protagonist portrayed as a killing machine, someone who has slaughtered tens of thousands of people? Second, why is the protagonist, despite being so much stronger than Kaguya, constantly being led around like a dog?

Seeing Saiyans instantly made me lose interest.