Becoming a Master Starting with The Rising of the Shield Hero

The beginning of the Dunyong Volume and the Qin Shi Volume feels like a lot of dissuasion. If you can't accept it, just start with the Naruto Volume. Generally speaking, there are too many pitfalls in the early stages of the novel to fill, so you can only make up for it later.

Give a chestnut: Kaguya Otsutsuki (Naruto) Ability: Immortality (can only be sealed, can absorb any ninjutsu, and can recover from any damage) White Eyes (see the other person's meridians, nerves and acupuncture points, and can detect things one kilometer away) Samsara Sharingan (the pupil technique opened by swallowing the fruit of the sacred tree, able to cast infinite moon reading and sky no middle) Blood Successor's Snare (existences that transcend the Blood Successor's limits and Blood Successor's elimination, including the Samsara Sharingan and the Path-Seeking Jade, are also a type of Blood Successor's Snare) Ninjutsu: Levitation (the ability to move freely through the air) White Eyes·Coercion (making the enemy faint or die through the air) Byakugan·Illusion (Use the Byakugan to control the enemy's will) Natural integration (integrate with nature and control the natural environment to attack enemies) Infinite Tsukuyomi (The illusion of the Rinne Sharingan turns the sky like daylight, and cannot be resisted except by Susanoo and those who have been reincarnated in the land with the Rinnegan opened. Those who are caught lose consciousness and will be trapped in the illusion forever) The Birth of the Divine Tree Realm (Summons the Divine Tree, wraps and connects people in the infinite Tsukuyomi state, absorbs chakra and eventually turns into White Zetsu) Huangquan Hirazaka (the ability to travel freely through space, no seal required) Heaven's Royal Center (Transfer the world you are in and the people around you to the "Heaven's Royal Middle" space in an instant) Expanding Tao-seeking jade (summons a huge Tao-seeking jade, annihilating all matter) Kill the Ash Bones together (change the structure of the bones, use the bones as weapons, they will collapse and be destroyed as soon as they come into contact) Chakra fruit creation (turn the absorbed chakra into fruits or elixirs, which can be taken to restore and enhance one's own strength and increase lifespan) Yasogami Air Attack (concentrates the ultimate chakra in the palm of the hand, without any flaws or flaws, forming the strongest physical technique that integrates offense and defense) Rabbit Hair Needle (turn the hair into sharp thorns, and use the white eyes to hit the enemy's weak point, sealing the opponent's actions) Interested book lovers can make a Servant Card

The main character of "Dun Yong" is always in trouble, which shows that the author has insufficient control over the plot. If you don't subvert the entire plot when entering a tragedy, you are abusing the protagonist. What's more, the main character's name is too embarrassing. It's really unskilled to choose such a middle-class name.

What can I say? The beginning is weird. There is a problem with the setting of the protagonist. How can the heroic spirit be Kaguya or something, a heroic spirit from another world? Legend? Or some person who is famous throughout the ages, and what abilities does he have? Job agency? A treasure? Is the ability worth it? Aren't you the dimensional summoning type? What does it have to do with heroic spirits? When I saw Chaldea in Chapter 35, she looked like a black man with a question mark face. It was nonsense. The protagonist still feels like a borderline ob. His personality has not been shown yet. It feels very toxic. On the whole, it's just a mess, all put together, which feels inconsistent and looks awkward. . . . . . . . . . .

It's not like holding back at all, it feels like an otaku, it's too fake, you should write it according to the character of Uchiha Madara, instead of writing the water character like a holy mother, which is so frustrating 🤫

The protagonist of your setting is a god of death who participates in the war, but I only saw a middle-class otaku. In chapter 12, an invincible existence in the world would actually become so angry because of a few children slandering each other, "incompetent"?

Sorry, I can't hold on any longer. I was treated like a servant by Kaguya at the beginning, and her character fell apart in the middle. I can't accept it because it's easy to assume the role of the protagonist. Also, has the shelf life of the previous Infinite Tsukuyomi expired?

The writing is a bit poor, the plot is a bit silly, nothing else, I won't watch it anyway

First, why is the protagonist set to be a murderer or the kind who kills tens of thousands of people? Secondly, why are the protagonist and Kaguya so powerful that they are always being walked around?

Seeing the Saiyans instantly makes me feel bored.