The Suspended Sword of Shu Mountain

The author's writing style is very good, but it is taboo to write about an abusive protagonist in an online article and describe a female supporting character with unhealthy views in large amounts of ink.

This is called Xia. Those so-called martial arts and fairy novels can only be said to be fantasy novels disguised as Xia. They are all the same routine novels. It depends on who can change the skin better. Updating tens of thousands of words a day is no different from the toys coming out of the factory. That's why online articles are often talked about. 70% of the articles on Qidian. Com include fantasy, martial arts, fairy tales, etc., Without writing, 27% can be read from the past, 2% have good writing, 1% are excellent works with ideas, and 0.1% Or even 0.01% Are excellent products. I have read thousands of novels for more than ten years. It was not until I read this article that I realized for the first time that there is such a great talent in online writing. A combination of martial arts and fairy tales. Even if there are no immortals, there is an ethereal fairy spirit everywhere. It can be said to be a martial arts classic in recent years. The narrative reminded me of "The Legend of the Demon Cat", where I dreamed back to the prosperous Tang Dynasty, and in the later period, I saw the desolate scene of the Tang Dynasty being in turmoil and fragmented. The background is similar to that of Water Margin 108 when the magic star comes to the world. But this novel combines the immortals with the human world, and it is up to humans to break the seal, and destiny cannot be violated, releasing monsters, monsters, and monsters. The background of the immortals and demons is perfectly integrated into the narrative, and the whole article has a mysterious and romantic color. Not to mention the Tang Dynasty legends mixed in with each other. It is simply inseparable from the eyes. I followed it for several days and nights. It was so interesting. Actually, when I read the end, I thought of the soundtrack of Legend of Sword and Fairy. A few worldly songs are quite suitable, provided that the protagonist ends up far away from the hustle and bustle of the temple and wandering around the world Although I can't wait to read the whole novel, I still hope that the author will not be in a hurry to update and the quality will drop. Polish it patiently and don't let down such a good novel.

I read it in one day. The author is such a talented person. There are few books in which the protagonist often disappears, but the overall character is well portrayed. At least after reading the whole story, the words and deeds of several elders are clearly visible. Many of the mottos of the master and Taifu Xu are really enlightening. As for Yichan, in fact, Senior Brother Qin had already written about this person thoroughly, so the subsequent actions were all expected. Many details in Chang'an also showed that she and Bai Fu were not the same people. In addition, I think the author should find a balance between narrative and popular science. For example, Taifu's talk about landscapes is very good, but writing too much about it does not have much effect on the development of the story. After all, it is not a paper about archaeology. I guess the author wants to show us some historical and cultural studies, which is good. I find some parts very interesting, but I think most readers would prefer to see the interaction between the characters and how the plot develops. The plot is still a long way from the troubled times. I guess the normal situation should be the start of the Anshi Rebellion? No matter what, the troubled times are the climax of the whole story. I hope the author can continue this quality and write the power struggle for hegemony well. I guess one of the heroines may be Princess Qingluan. Also, I really hope that Li Xuexuan can become the final heroine. Even if the author does not consider her, please try to give her a better ending. Finally, I hope that more readers can see this work. This is indeed an excellent work.

Watching Yang Yichan's plot gave me a little brain congestion

The author's writing is really good and very detailed. I feel that this book can actually be regarded as a historical grouping. If I had applied for history, I would have gotten better results. I can learn from the author.

I'll just say a few words while I wait for the update. The following contains some spoilers This book is considered a masterpiece among recent martial arts. Seeing Chapter 290, this woman really disgusts me. However, the protagonist in the author's novel is still very immature and needs to experience things like deception and betrayal to shock his growth in order not to appear abrupt. (Just like the scene at the beginning where he helped his junior brother to cheat and was framed due to human sophistication, the master and the brothers all saw it clearly. The most fundamental thing is that he did help his junior brother to cheat. The protagonist couldn't understand it and was still angry. This was well written) Besides, this Yang Yichan was so greedy that he lived in Shu. At first, he was unable to show off because he was living under the fence of others and was weak. But later on, as he started to practice martial arts and was protected by his senior brothers, and when he saw the "vast world" outside the mountain gate, his heart became wild. I have read so many martial arts novels, and I feel that this is a very standard "green tea" in martial arts novels. Although this character disgusts me, the author writes it well. Even when Yang Yichan was having "green tea", she was still filial to her father, and her image was quite full. (But here I don't quite understand why she and her mother are so close. Her father worked hard to raise her up alone, but her mother ran away early and left the father and daughter alone. Her reaction should be very "resentful", rather than being very close after confirming her mother's identity. She also didn't react well when her mother scolded her father for being useless. Appropriate, but it can also be understood here that she is indeed the same kind of "green tea" as her mother, with a high heart and looking down on the honest and inactive knight-errant like her father.) I personally feel that it is a bit too hasty here. The relationship between her and her mother can change from weak to strong, but the plot does not progress very fast and there is no need to go into detail here.

The first 800,000 words are all paving the way for the protagonist's growth and rise. It would have been okay 10 years ago, but now with such a slow pace, it still abuses the protagonist and persuades most passers-by to quit. What a pity😓

The author does not need to worry, development is a circle. When the starting point of the novel reaches its peak, it is time to get tired of reading. The traditional style of novels will slowly come back. Just wait and see when.

Hello author. I prefer to read Chinese classical literature or history, gods and monsters. Writing martial arts novels is no longer popular in the era of online literature, especially traditional martial arts. Nowadays, martial arts has taken on a new dimension in online literature, incorporating some elements that older writers did not have. I read the first chapter. The writing has both traditional elegance and the characteristics of modern online writing. The wording tends to be classical, and some parts of the description have the style of online writing. I have also written articles and novels, and I feel deeply how difficult it is. But when I write, I mostly write a few paragraphs when I feel like it. When I start writing, I agree not to place too much emphasis on fame and wealth. Full-time writers may consider this aspect very important. Your article appropriates poetry, which greatly adds to the ancient charm of the article. I rarely study poetry. This is good. The martial arts novelist Liang Yusheng comes to mind, but Liang Yusheng wrote many of his poems in his martial arts novels by himself. If you can do it, you are undoubtedly a skilled person. The writing is naturally a characteristic of this era. I personally think that this kind of traditional martial arts with the characteristics of online writing combines the author's innovation with the characteristics of the times (after all, many readers commented that the world of our generation is different), and has great room for development. Many works by those senior martial arts writers can be called classics and can withstand the waves. It would be a blessing if today's online literature works can do this! Please write for what you want in your heart. Even if it does not meet the taste of the public, your talents are insufficient, and times have changed, you must still write for what you want in your heart and your supporters. Write whenever you have time. It is very difficult for this kind of author. My humble work "The Legend of the Chivalrous Heroes" is not for promotion and promotion, but communication is acceptable.

To be honest, the writing style and plot are all top-notch. But seeing that Yang was really incompetent and forced to feed me, I was disturbed.