Elf's Black Fantasy

New readers who are scared away by the so-called "testing drugs" can come in and take a look. . . (There are a few spoilers I have read two-thirds of it so far, and I feel that it is a very high-end work among the pm books I have read in the past two years. Although it is not as good as the White Moonlight (Axu Licking Xiaoyou) that I have in mind, I personally feel that the author's writing style and plot are not much worse than those of Tingshu's author. Why are the results so disastrous? In the end, it is still I blame the author himself... I am a fan fiction author from an external website, let me analyze it from the perspective of an online author - the title and cover of the book are not pleasing to the eye. First of all, the title of the book is dark fantasy, the setting is more of a comic book, and the protagonist has a pretty decent outlook. (I like this very much). This will dissatisfy many secondary readers who come to the dark novel. Why are you selling it? The shark is okay, but I made a round land shark with a subtle composition, which is not cute or handsome. It is very low. The last one is the most important and the most critical point of poison! The main one is the character of Frost Leaf, and the other is the time traveler Eevee. Personally, I can accept the double-wearing setting. Yes, but Ibrahimovic's character, especially in the early stage, is very unlikable and can easily make people feel annoyed. Of course, characters with similar personalities can be written. If the author can add a plot in the early stage where Ibrahimovic desperately saves the protagonist under certain circumstances, the readers' tolerance for this character will be greatly increased, instead of being like a shameless relative living at home. Pure disgust. Shuang Ye, who poisoned countless people, was put at the end. To be honest, I was shocked by this character twice. I couldn't read it until I read it the third time. Anyway, this character disappeared soon. First of all, is there really something wrong with her behavior? , The protagonist has a dark background, and as a police officer, Shuangye's hatred and distrust of the protagonist are completely logical. What I want to say is, what is the meaning of this character? Maybe the author wants to write her as a person who is slowly influenced by the protagonist's changes. Br>The patience of online readers is always the lowest, because they have too many choices, and they will give up if they feel unhappy for a moment. For example, the existence of Shuangye is like a beautiful girl. It is reasonable, but it is forbidden. Just take a cute dolphin show as a case. Live, if the character is constipated in the toilet, and then the camera depicts her being constipated from multiple angles, then this character will definitely be cool... Is this a problem with constipation? Tsundere characters (frost leaf is a variant?) Are difficult to write, and the character of Louise in Zero's Demons will be scolded by readers. The painting has various bonuses such as voice acting and graphics. To put it bluntly, non-villains who are not good to the protagonist will be labeled as "toxic" in the eyes of most readers. It may be a bit nonsense to write this long review after the book is finished. I just hope that new readers can be more patient.

This is one of the rare Pokemon fan novels with a special episode as the background. The author's description of Pokemon battles and tactics and moves are eye-catching. The description of the bond with Pokemon is not a cookie-cutter good baby, but flesh and blood with different characteristics. Personally, I like Iron Han Han Swampert, haha. Moreover, the author's writing skills have improved rapidly, and his character portrayal is also at a high level. It only took me a few days to go from a tentative attempt in the literary wilderness to my current obsession. I would like to give the author a special boost. Although I don't pay much attention to it now, please stick to it. You will get monthly tickets and subscriptions. It also gives a boost to readers who were persuaded to quit at the beginning. The rest is really exciting. In terms of content, I started to become a fan when I was playing the battle tower.

I feel that the character of the protagonist is a bit twisted. He treats reality as a game and wants to clear every plot, but most of the time he is still playing soy sauce on the side. In order not to deviate from the plot, the main character is beaten to death in order to let them grow up like the original work. This feels disgusting. Even if the protagonists do not play a decisive role in this incident, I think it will not prevent them from growing up. And the preparation before each event is completely like playing. To sum up, the protagonist has no role in the subsequent plot, even if he is so powerful

The author, I'm sorry, as a member of the limited exemption army, I don't have the qualifications to say anything, but I looked uncomfortable and came out to complain. First, as a pm fan, you mix all kinds of special chapters, games, comics, and animations together. It looks very awkward and uncomfortable. Personal suggestion: Try to write the plot of the anime + the setting of the game. Generally, most people don't read pm's comics, so you won't have a sense of immersion when you write it. The special episode can only be used as an interlude. Second, the protagonist's character issue. As an adult traveling through time, the thoughts and ways of thinking of adults are very different from those of teenagers (please bear in mind). Moreover, the protagonist's character is serious and steady at one time, and childish and brainless at another, which looks very contradictory. Third, pm has grown too fast. One of the big complaints is playing in gyms. A pm who is over 20 levels can actually fight against the main players who are over 60 levels, and he even beat them! ! Gym leaders usually use similar new PMs for gym competitions and will not use their main force to teach newcomers. People who can be gym leaders have basically experienced hundreds of battles (with a few exceptions, such as Hualan Gym), and they can actually use words such as panic and panic.                                       The problem of character design, whether it is that the protagonist has no memory of his previous life, his parents, or other plot characters are very ambivalent towards the protagonist's inexplicable attitude and are very discouraging. It feels like the protagonist's predecessor's parents are the big bosses behind the pm world. Many plot characters will come out to be nice to the protagonist and please the predecessor's parents (after reading more than a hundred chapters, I was persuaded to quit, and I don't know what will happen next). Personal opinion, please comment! I hope the author can write better in the next book!

I have read more than 800 chapters, so let me comment. First of all, this is one of the few elf stories written on qd that is in line with my personal taste. The score is about 7.5/10. The plot of Heiduo's identity change at the beginning is actually quite interesting. Some people may think that Frostleaf and the time traveler Eevee are poisonous points, but in my opinion, it is precisely these characters that make the protagonist who has just arrived in a strange environment and experienced a huge change in his life gradually get on the right track. During the Charmander period, he was a bit squeamish and could be lovable and grew up to be a reliable twin mega-spray, and his appearance is always online -w- Of course, this book also has shortcomings. My personal taste may be to prefer pure family friendship with all members without cp, or 1v1 with bg. Most of the main audience for Pokémon stories are for the bond between Pokémon and trainers, not for flirting with girls, and it is not a harem story (.) Previous In the first half of the chapter, the protagonist meets various girls and describes their eroticism. From the perspective of female readers, there is some discomfort... Mainly because it is not a large chapter description that cannot be skipped. Although the heroine Xiaolan was finally chosen, and I have not yet seen the development of the emotional line after adulthood, I suggest that the author next time writing the heroine should not choose and choose after describing several female supporting characters. If you want to decide, decide early, even if the emotional line is not developed at all in the early stage. ... Stock buying articles will really make some readers lose, especially if they involve the splitting of the official allocation of the original book (I am particularly disgusted with the splitting of the official allocation, but this book does not involve it, so it's okay...) In general, it is a rare article on the qd platform that I can read in one go and read it without interruption.

After reading the full text, it can be regarded as a masterpiece of elf. The writing style of the emotional drama is not bad, but overall it is a little lacking. In many plots, it can be seen that the author wanted to exaggerate emotions, but I always feel that it is not done well enough, that is, the "explosive points" are not obvious enough and tend to be dull. I I think it has something to do with the plot of the unit and the overall foreshadowing and characterization of the event. It does not mean that you have to write the "explosive point" and then go out of your way to describe it. The author can consider doing more foreshadowing and characterization in the previous chapters; in terms of plot, while sorting out the timeline of the original work, It's quite comfortable to watch while expanding the protagonist's own main plot, but because there are too many plots to write, many chapters feel a bit rushed, and there is a suspected "rushing" feeling. Overall, it is quite complete, and there are no big poisonous points. The character design of the protagonist is good, and the interaction with the elves is also very vivid. I read many comments saying that I don't like Aunt Moon Eevee, but I personally think this setting is quite interesting. Without this Moon Eevee, the large chapters in the early and middle stages may not be so interesting. It's just the personal opinion of an ordinary reader. I'm sorry if there's anything offensive or wrong.

It was originally a limited-edition movie. When I saw the introductory special chapter, I was worried about writing a good special chapter. I was embarrassed in the early stage. The description of the three women in Rockets and the supervision later made me think that I would accept them as younger brothers or harems. I originally wanted to give up, but I continued watching because of the limited exemption. Go on, and it turned out that the rest of the book was so exciting that I couldn't stop reading it. The plot and descriptions of the characters were much better than before. Moreover, it was one of the few books that was well written about battles and interactions with elves. Unlike some elf books and pet control books, the routines were all the same. It feels like when I play a game, conquer, see the panel values are good, level up, evolve, show off and slap in the face, it is not a cookie-cutter feeling. Although the description of the subsequent plot is not the best, it really gives me a feeling like when I first watched Chongmei and Tingshu, not Pretend for the sake of pretense, slap in the face not for the sake of slap in the face, not deliberately dark and dark (whispering BB: Favorite Saigao) Reading the comments, there are many people who gave up because of the previous article. Really, I hope to continue reading, you will find that the popular poison has changed into a niche with different tastes. It is worth watching.

I think this book is okay. The PM article with the special chapter as the background was a bit uncomfortable and confusing at first. But I read a lot, and there are definitely some bad things, but they are not that bad. Many people say that Ibrahimovic is not good, but I think it is not bad. Wouldn't it be nice to have a fellow countryman who can make jokes with me? Besides, books depend on your own taste. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. I can't say it's good, but it's just how good it is. If another person says it's bad, it's very bad. ，，，，

Although it is a good review, I have temporarily abandoned the article Although it has been temporarily abandoned, I actually have a good review Orz In general, up to Chapter 213, this is an excellent elf novel. The most important elf cultivation and battles in the elf novels are well described, and the degree of anthropomorphism of the elves is also well grasped. Some elf novels always feel too human-like. However, the main character's warm-hearted style with occasional hints of frivolity is somewhat out of line with the dark plot of the special episode. The protagonist looks like a normal Pokémon character, but the background is a dark Pokémon character, which makes people feel frustrated invisibly. The plot is a bit loose, and some of the foreshadowings were revealed without feeling, and the excitement was not enough. If the author switches to a normal Pokémon background in the next article, or the popular Pokémon invasion real-life background, the results will definitely be much better. Because I basically just read the book review section now, and I was surprised to find:? ? ? The beginning is indeed a bit draggy, but is it poisonous? Are those in the book review section misogynists? This obviously means that readers are less led along.

It's so beautiful, Ibrahimovic can find a male Ibrahimovic for her, just kidding😜

It's over. When we meet, we part. Although I was originally looking forward to the following plots such as Pearl, Diamond, Platinum, Black 1, 2 White 1, 2, This is just a personal opinion, but congratulations on the completion. Compared with a bunch of other Pokémon (Pokémon) articles, it is a very logical work, and it is still a rare special article. I hope to have the opportunity to meet again in subsequent works.

The battle scenes are described very well, and can be ranked high in many Pokémon novels, but the plot description is average, and many places are a bit baffling. I give it a recommendation vote.

Even if you are a kind person, you can lead the elves to raid the Kalos under the guise of eradicating violence and punishing the evil Kalos. I feel that it is only effective in Kalos, so if this is really written, go and help the Kalos. Their wallets need to lose weight.

Man, after 4 months and 580,000 words, I finally signed the contract hahahahahaha. Although the book has been signed to this extent, it is almost equivalent to being scrapped, but it is meaningful. This is an encouragement to me. Persistence has paid off, even if it is insignificant in the eyes of others, but compared to the first four months when there was no harvest, I am already very satisfied. Now I am so happy~~~~~ Love you (˘ ³˘)♡~🌹🌹💋

It's so fucking toxic. The mini dragon is worth 10,000 yuan. The protagonist, a Rockets soldier, can buy a round land shark with one bet. This is so worthless. It's like the national treasure panda in reality, selling for 10,000 yuan on the black market. . . 😅😅😅😅

I really don't know what the point of arranging such an opening is, just for such a bet? I think it would be better for the protagonist to go to jail than to have his destiny in the hands of others, like a puppet.

Is there something wrong with the author's mentality? While I don't really want to have too much contact with the protagonists of the special episode, I keep pushing the number of words towards them. Is it interesting? You are either exposed to the plot, or you are regarded as a passerby, like a slam dunk master, writing a bunch of awesome characters, but in the end you have never played against them! The book is not a big hit, and I think about the word count every day ~ How much useful information can there be in this book apart from the psychological descriptions that repeat nonsense and the settings that have nothing to do with promoting the plot? Ready-made example: In Chapter 409, we started preparing to go to Silver Mountain, but in Chapter 419, we were still talking about the setting, and we didn't even find a camp. We talked about the ranger setting in Chapter 5. The result was that we had less than one chapter of the plot and no interaction.        ，，，？

Apart from anything else, the writing style is really not very good. There are some places that don't need to be written, but they are written. Just like when giving an order to the elf, just "attack" is enough, but you just add "do it", which seems retarded. I hope you can refer to the writing style of other people's good works. I still like the story.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel like this is an urban novel disguised as an elf 🙂

I don't understand the use of carrying that Eevee

From being poisoned under surveillance to Ibrahimovic being poisoned, I really think the ideas are all good, but I just can't stand it anymore.

I really like the writing. The only flaw is the heroine. Xiaolan's emotional line comes out of nowhere. It's really a pity if it's not Takixing. It's rare for someone to like Takixing's character, so it's really a pity.

How can I put it this way? The description of elves in this book is okay, but the description of characters is really not good.

There is nothing wrong with the setting. I think the reason why so many people criticize me is mainly because of the audience. Most people who read Elf fandom come here for the light-hearted novels. The author's foreshadowing and foreshadowing from the beginning are too complicated. It's different from what many people expected when they opened this book, so...

No one started to like me as much as I did, so I went to Ibrahimovic to force him to quit.

There is a tendency for the battle strength to collapse in the later stage. In the special chapter, Zhulan's strength still cannot match Liu Bo. Liubo can press the two dragons of time and space to the ground and hammer them. Zhulan cannot do anything to the two dragons of time and space. How can Zhulan's Fierce Land Bite Shark (90) level be close to Liu Bo's Messenger Bird (91)? Blowing Bamboo Lan I'm exaggerating. The previous dream debuts were only (85), and Chiye's Baiyinshan leveling was 80+ for the whole team. Even Chiye is not as good as the regional champion. This book strengthens passers-by (50+), gym leaders (60+, 70+), and champions (80+), but does not strengthen the protagonist group. The performance of the special chapter champion's own elf is not particularly outstanding, and the second set is overdone and seriously fragmented.

After reading the comments, fellow Ibrahimovic is not a failure or a poisonous point. As a time traveler, I am really touched to meet fellow fellows in a different world. I feel less lonely and alienated. The Lord of Mysteries has Lao Huang giving Xiao Ke a golden finger and a fellow goddess investing in it. Isn't it a masterpiece? I originally thought the book was not good after reading some reviews, but the book is really well written! 😁

My evaluation is that this is a good book, but some people in the comment area really don't want to say more, and they keep shouting and licking. There are always people who feel that the world should revolve around one person, making mistakes without realizing it, and leaving them speechless.

I just read Chapter 17. This chapter almost poisoned me to death. Fortunately, my poison resistance is higher. I don't know why there are more chapters later. If anyone has read it, please tell me.

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