I'm Not That Kind of Xu Xian

The male protagonist has always been scheming. When I read The Legend of White Snake, I thought it was about emotions. But it turned out that it was not. The layout was too big and I was too tired to read. The book is still okay, but I really don't want to read it anymore. I'm leaving.

Personal opinion: emmm read chapter 60 and decided to abandon the book. How should I put it? There is no tension in the writing. I wanted to write about the ups and downs of my son-in-law, but also the ordinary feeling, but my strength did not allow it, resulting in a messy plot and unattractive writing. Now there is no delicate writing style like Jian Lai, the sword warrior in the snow, nor the typical pretentious writing style of the son-in-law. Look at the chapter where Xiaolan's mother chases and beats the protagonist. It's just a bland narrative, is it funny? No. In fact, the author wanted to write it to be funny, but the effect was not achieved. There is nothing funny, no philosophy on life, and nothing refreshing in the article. The writing is not eye-catching either. Unremarkable in every way. Plot: Chaos. This is obviously not a daily novel, but it also contains many subplots, and the context is too messy. The only advantage is: this is a White Snake fanfic. Generally speaking, this book is a bit better than the traditional routine. But it's not a masterpiece. It's just an ordinary novel. Spending money to book everything will not give you a good deal and a feeling of value for money. But it won't make you feel bad. Bland, ordinary. Online novels are different from traditional novels. The audience is also different. This writing style is difficult to comment on. However, when I was fifteen or sixteen, I loved reading short stories about the third young master of the Tang family. Now I feel a little disgusted with the writing style of the third young master of the Tang family. Because the audience for his books is the same every week. As I go to high school and college, my academic qualifications increase, and I get older, I feel that Tang San's books are no longer suitable for me to read. So compared with Douluo Dalu, I choose this book. But the writing style of this book is not eye-catching. On the contrary, there is a feeling that I want to be eclectic, but I really don't have any strengths in one aspect. It's the same sentence, I can read it, but I still choose to give up. A benevolent person has a different opinion and a wise person has different tastes. Let's read Chapter 30 and see.

According to the current plot, there is no need for the White Snake to exist, because Xu Xian does not need it, and the Green Snake is even more excessive, procrastinating, and dragging down Xu Xian. If it is really about getting married, it will definitely be Xiaolan. It feels a bit forced to fit in with the plot. As mentioned, there is currently no reason why the White Snake and the Green Snake can become Taoist couples.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, it feels more and more like boiled water. You say you can't stand it, but it is still eye-catching. You say you can keep reading. It doesn't have the pleasure of reading at all. There is no climax or waves, and the emotions are average. Xiaolan's emotions are okay, and the others are just like boiled water. Every time I go to the underworld, I write words like boiled water. I don't know if it's water word count. Anyway, it's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away.

This directory makes me laugh to death. Scroll down and it's going.

From chapter 21 onwards, the author begins to let himself go

There was a time to realize immortality, but the opportunity was fleeting!

This book is very readable and very satisfactory. It completely exceeded my expectations and is updated very quickly. Thank you to the author. This is the most satisfying novel I have ever read on Qidian. The author also has a very good attitude. I asked a lot of questions, but he didn't feel annoyed and answered me seriously. The characters created in the book have no flaws, and the plot design is also very exciting, without any big logical loopholes. Every time I see an update, I can't wait to open it and find that each chapter has different surprises. I will read it often in the future. I will vote for recommendation every day. I will also recommend it to my friends. When it is released, I will also give you the first order. Thank you to the author! Take good care of you!

After seeing Chapter 219, I was really convinced to quit. Both humans, immortals, and Buddhas will be under the jurisdiction of the Netherworld. The reason is that Cui Yu is the most fair and just. ? ? ? What a big face this is! ! !

This book is crooked! The early stage is really good! I don't know when it started, but it became more and more crooked! ! More and more unreal! It feels a bit like the author's self-absorption and self-fantasy! Goodbye!

Let's take a look at the table of contents 😂😂 waveforms

It started out okay, quite novel. Then it felt boring. That's only about eighty chapters. I feel like I'm just thinking about it. It's not that you can't think for yourself, but if you think too much, you'll look like a fool. It is not the story that drives the plot development, but the eroticism that drives the plot development. Abandoned

It feels a bit confusing. I should be able to read it, but the protagonist's values ​​are somewhat different from mine, so I gave up. This book is not considered poisonous.

Single heroine? Or a harem? Let me explain first, I support harem, only children choose

Who changed Bai Suzhen's picture into Orochimaru? 😡😡

After reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist has done almost nothing. He is hitting here and there with a stick. The logic is very confusing and very naive. It feels like the author wants to express something, but nothing is expressed. Summary: A very rubbish piece of writing.

Looking at the avatar arranged by the author, I found that Xu Xian was cheated by a native Xu Xian in his previous life. Xiaobai has already lost his virginity because of the white snake.

Sign in, 😁😁😁, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Traveling through Xu Xian and not meeting White Snake, then why don't you just write a chicken feather?

After reading chapter 90, the author has not decided on the personality of the protagonist. The protagonist's temperament is changeable, and the protagonist's behavior seems very strange when various plots develop. I have endured it for a long time, and other plots, such as Xiaolan, Fat Tiger and the widow, Yan's Mansion, these lines are not concluded. It is really uncomfortable to write other lines, because it is not the main line, either you can't remember it, or you feel itchy to read it. It can be said that if you stop reading at this time, you will not open it again. . .

Xu Xianzhi is still good to read, but this book is sloppy. The author has no outline at all. He writes whatever comes to mind. I am speechless. Things happen one after another like that kind of urban soldier novel, and the protagonist is witty. .

If you quickly look through the table of contents, it's like a snake crawling. The author is thoughtful😄😄

The recommendation vote has been cast, can it be refined?

I feel that my ability to accept is very strong! The protagonist doesn't even know what he's writing! After reading more than 50-60 chapters, I still have no idea what the protagonist wants to express! Just write whatever comes to mind

Let's take a look first. If I had half the skill of Xu Xianzhi, I would keep watching.

I asked why there are so many collections. The maximum monthly ticket is 500. It turns out that it is a novice novel. It has no logic, the contradictions are blunt, and the protagonist is a second-rate person.

According to the understanding of the TV series, Xu Xian is a container, and his existence is to make Bai Suzhen become an immortal and give birth to Wen Quxing. So is Wenquxing his? If the deficiency is not replenished, Xu Xian is too weak and cannot bear Bai Suzhen's tonic, which means it will be difficult for him to practice.

Opening a new book! "Sanghi without Pupils"

Single broadcast hilarious non-AI

I've read more than forty chapters, but I still don't know what the author wants to express.