Starting from a Perfect World

As the title states, first of all, I am not a troll, I simply don't want this one of the few high-quality fandoms from Qidian to collapse. First of all, the beginning of this book is quite good. Infinite flow often starts from the low-level world of martial arts, and it is often inseparable from the poorly written martial arts themes such as the golden bell, the iron cloth, and the shirt. The author starts the martial arts journey with a single person, which is the only one in the starting point. The plot development is not bad and the author's writing skills are acceptable, which also makes this book an instant hit as a novel by a new writer. But as of this writing, the shortcomings have become as obvious as the advantages. The author may have experience or immature writing methods, which has caused the protagonist's strength to rise too quickly. In other words, at just over 400 chapters, he is already at the peak of strength in many infinite worlds, and is forced to join as an old man. The excitement of many novel worlds such as Tomato lies in the early and middle stages. We often comment on the works of many great masters but they are anticlimactic. Therefore, with such a high strength of the protagonist, he can only join it as a grandfather, giving guidance to the children of each world, but there is really nothing exciting to say, and there is no plot to describe the progress of the protagonist's strength. Finally, and currently the most critical issue, is the ambiguous positioning of the protagonist. Many new writers who write Infinite Flow make a big mistake, which is that the protagonist writes in front of his grandfather and turns it into an adventure chronicle of the children of the planes. Always remember who the protagonist of the novel is. What readers want to see is, after all, the protagonist's own process of becoming stronger through training in one world after another, not the adventures of others. Occasionally, the plot of the grandfather giving guidance to the son of the plane can be used as a small part of the transition to adjust the tense plot, but even if one of the 10 chapters appears, some readers may criticize it, not to mention that you are almost writing Lou Cheng as the protagonist recently. I strongly recommend the author to end those chapters about Lou Cheng as soon as possible. I like the book Martial Arts Master very much, but I can't stand it now, let alone other readers. No matter whether Lou Cheng is an important supporting role or not, he is called a supporting role. It is enough to lay a foreshadowing. A lot of ink is spent on people other than the protagonist. From the perspective of writing scores, it is called unclear primary and secondary, failing. Therefore, it is strongly recommended that you end it immediately and do not write any more. If you continue writing, the book will become useless. Of course, don't write too much about the anime world. Why is the second dimension a niche category? Because the otaku boys who love watching anime are a small minority after all, and some of them are diverted by various Western fantasy games and stallion harem stories, so writing about the world of anime is thankless. Many anime plots lack a sense of immersion because many readers have never seen them. In addition, it may not be the protagonist's own adventure, which wastes a lot of pen and ink, but no one wants to watch it at all. This book is already on the verge of collapse, and I sincerely hope that the author will not be too stubborn. The above is not easy to type by hand, I hope the author can see it. Readers and friends with different opinions are welcome to discuss it, and I sincerely hope that this fanfic, which was quite good before, will achieve good results in the end.

You, the author, are very poisonous. You can write about anything, but you choose to write about fighting. He actually became Nalan Yanran's master, why is he so showy? The book review area has become a mess because of you, and there are more and more lickers. I don't subscribe to this world. If I write about this boring world next time, don't blame me for giving up.

Quite disappointing. Starting from around 700, I started the first volume. I don't feel that way anymore. The system is gone too. The author is equivalent to changing the protagonist and rewriting it all over again. . Not interesting. I thought it was a cool article. Look at the previous volume. Including the early Yishi volume, they are all very interesting. But around chapter 700, the tone completely changed. Afraid of hands and feet. To steal chickens and dogs, you can only steal chickens from God's perspective. . . Disappointment.

After reading the comments in the past few days, there are those who hate Nalan first, then those who hate Tian Nalan and Xiao Yan, or some who hate both. The author really doesn't like it no matter what he writes. It's just a re-creation, and the author can just write it according to his own wishes. I don't hate or like Nalan Yanran. She may have been domineering at first, but later she regretted it. She was not particularly annoying from the beginning to the end. I had no idea about breaking off the engagement. At that time, I was only a middle-aged boy. "Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty." How passionate! It's not like a comment section, where you can argue about who is right and who is wrong with just a cliche plot!             Xiao Yan walked out of his small hometown and entered the sinister Dou Qi Continent. In order to save Yao Lao, save his father, and become stronger, he always struggled on the edge of life and death, and finally reached the pinnacle of the continent. The moment he closed the book, he was very reluctant to let go. This is probably the difference between paper reading and online reading. I don't think it matters if I criticize Xiaobai's writing, there are very few good ones, and I don't feel any regret when I encounter Doupo. It is ridiculous and sad to pay tribute to the youthful time that is easily lost here.

This plot gave me the feeling of watching Naruto back in the day, dragging it on, dragging it on, the plot is squeezed bit by bit like toothpaste. It has been almost ten days and the plot of Emperor is still not over. Visually, it is not even halfway there. Emperor has not yet attained enlightenment, Heaven has not yet been established, and it is still in chaos. Is it perfect to write it again with Emperor as the protagonist? In my reflections at the end of Volume I, I said that the more I wrote, the more twisted it became, and I couldn't live up to the foreshadowing and hasty ending. But in this volume, it's still the same, I'm still struggling. If you can't control it, dig less holes and push the plot more. At least the readers will feel comfortable watching it and are willing to follow it.

Before Chapter 727, it was a masterpiece. After Chapter 727, yes. . . Parallel import I no longer feel the same as before. The author has forgotten his original intention. I would like to give the author a suggestion. System＞Taoguo＞The other side. Set it up like this, and then write with this mentality. You will find that others don't talk about water anymore. Reflect on it. Hope it will be adopted.

When I see the word "plot", I feel like it lowers the overall level and gives the impression that you are playing a game.

Update, the author will update as long as there is nothing wrong. If you don't update, you will really be ganged up on the table to update.

I gave you three recommendation votes and will update three chapters now.

The novel is good, and I can read it here because I have never read the novel "The Honor of One Life" and I don't have a sense of immersion at all.

Panlong, Yang Shen, swallowed them till they felt like vomiting. . . .

Steady, author, be sure to stay steady and don't drift! It is recommended that you take it out once a day, and don't feel uncomfortable reading chapter by chapter. Four chapters at once is so enjoyable!

I think the writing style of this book is actually really good, at least there are only a few of the other Zhutian novels I have read, but the shortcomings are also obvious. The protagonist upgrades too quickly, and the level is very vague. Sometimes it feels really boring, but it only has more than 200 chapters. How can I exaggerate that it is really good? There are indeed many people who like to watch this type of movie, but most people still want to watch the protagonist slowly become stronger.

This author is a bit short and weak. He is not diligent.

Why can't I vote for a monthly vote?

I just want to ask if the author cut corners and why I feel like I read every chapter so fast.

I've saved 13 chapters, come on 😁

Is there a group? I never knew where the group was

I've given you the monthly pass! Explode quickly! Just five updates a day will be fine(◕ˇ∀ˇ◕)

I have had a private chat with the author. The author will finish this book. But with the recent Chinese New Year, his job is quite special. Everything comes together. The family celebrates the New Year at the beginning of the month. The author told me that he might not have time to write until after the Chinese New Year. Well, I'm not sure whether I usually find time to write one or two pieces, but I probably won't. The main issue is my job. I have to protect my job first before I can write a book. Otherwise, writing a book is indeed unstable. Thank you for your understanding.

The novel written by Shuidong cannot justify itself. Taiwu Tianzun penetrates the universe of billions of light years with one finger, but the Supreme War in Zhetianli cannot even destroy the planets within a thousand light years. Beidou, Ziwei, Gouchen and other ancient stars that appear in the sky are all within a thousand light years of the earth. If Zhetian Supreme had one ten thousandth of the power of Taiwu Tianzun, he could destroy all the so-called Ziwei, Gouchen, Feixian, Eternal and other ancient stars in Beidou with just a hint of breath. You don't need to be born to absorb blood food. You can directly absorb the divine life energy of all ancient stars in the Beidou restricted area. There is no need to be born and go to other ancient stars to absorb the divine energy of life. One finger can penetrate the universe of billions of light years. Is a thousand light years considered a distance to these supreme beings? Why bother to be born to absorb divine energy? It's not like you can't take action in the penalty area. When Ye Fan's holy body is fully developed, these supreme beings can attack from half a universe away. And if the Supreme can destroy the universe, why did Gai Jiuyou's decisive battle with a Supreme in the Forbidden Zone only destroy a small part of the starry sky and have no impact on the main body of the entire universe? There is no so-called disaster that affects the entire universe. Three hundred years have passed, and the supreme war involving more than ten supreme beings has not had any impact on the universe. Besides, if the Supreme One really has the power to penetrate hundreds of millions of light-years with his finger, all the ancient stars that appear in the entire universe will be annihilated in ashes the first moment the Supreme One takes action, leaving no chance of survival. Shui Dongzhong's description of combat power has too many bugs to explain. The novels written by Shuidong are not rigorous at all, and there is no need for discussion. Whether it is strong or not, and whether it is awesome or not depends entirely on the author's mouth. When you read the novels written by Shuidong, you can see the grandeur and characterization. Its logical rigor cannot be discussed at all, and various logical confusions often occur.

Let me take a moment Lin Yang, who was about to go to Yuxian Ridge, suddenly felt something strange and raised his head to look at the sky. Shi Hao, who was thinking wildly, noticed something unusual about Lin Yang and asked doubtfully: "Xuan Tian? What are you looking at?" "An enemy is coming." Shi Hao followed Lin Yang's gaze and saw that the cloudless sky just now opened a huge gap, and the overwhelming mist poured out from it and fell onto the land of Sin State. "You go evacuate the creatures, and I'll go find out." Shi Hao only had time to hear this sentence, and Lin Yang in front of him had disappeared. At the same time, the supreme beings who came to watch the trial conference because they were invited by the Immortal King finally noticed it, and they all looked up at the top of their heads, where the crack appeared. In the sky, a giant hand covering the sky and sun appeared from the cracks penetrated by the mist. Under the endless pressure, it struck hard in the direction Lin Yang was coming. In an instant, it crossed the endless distance and was about to strike Lin Yang. Only then did Lin Yang react. The Emperor of Heaven steps into time! Under the influence of the power of time, the giant hand only slightly slowed down, changing its palms into claws. The huge palm held the seemingly small Lin Yang in its palm, and then retracted into the crack. Lin Yang rushed left and right in the giant hand, but could not break through the palm. Just when Lin Yang was about to exchange his real body and clone, a figure appeared in front of him. "I thought I would never see the real master again," Lin Yang said in surprise. "Immortal King Xuantian, this is our first meeting. Some people asked me to give you a... Message!" The person opposite said this and suddenly Before he finished speaking, the other party had already attacked and fought with Lin Yang. In an instant, the aftermath of the terrifying battle broke out, but was firmly blocked by the huge palm. Every move the two people fought on the giant palm was a terrifying magic that could kill the true immortal. Countless stars were swaying under the fluctuations. The faces of all the supreme beings under the Sui State turned pale and they could not suppress their trembling. Only Shi Hao and Meng Tianzheng were slightly better off. The war lasted for nearly a month. Finally, everything calmed down and there was no more terror. A figure fell from the crack and hit the ground heavily. It was Lin Yang. I saw fist marks on the corners of his face, and his eyes turned into panda eyes. At this moment, he was slowly getting up, and a sound came from the crack in the sky that resounded throughout the nine heavens and ten places "This is the consequence of slow updates!"

Book lovers can write about the world they want to see, and I will consider it if it is suitable. Well, you need to read the copyright of the article, the kind with a higher reputation, otherwise many book friends may not have read it...

When I saw Nalan, I just felt sick. I felt that I had fed the dog with thousands of points. I regretted subscribing. If you don't want to write about Dou Po, if you must write, then you should be a quiet passerby and collect your things. Xiao Yan Nalan, if there is any controversy about the divorce, you can read the original work. I don't see anything wrong with both parties, but your Nalan way is wrong, which makes things ugly. If it is wrong, it is wrong. Why wash it? This thing can still be washed, and there is something about his character. Isn't Xiao Yan's character good enough? Nalan's character is good? You, Nalan, didn't come here to break off the engagement because of Xiao Yan's character, so why are you talking about his character?

This is the author himself😁

Regarding the setting of the Taoist Realm of One Life, I understand it from the author's perspective. The author first sets the peak of combat power in one life as the other side. The path and fruition is the realm of the concept of "transcendence from everything" that people on the other side should pursue, so there is the step of "doing minus and seeking emptiness". But to be honest, Daoguo is quite attractive at first glance. After all, what big man doesn't want to transcend everything? But in reality, as a goal, if there is no struggle, wouldn't it be enough for each other to cultivate by themselves? Therefore, Squid has set a limit of "only one quota per era", and then it seems "reasonable" for each side to fight for life and death. But to be honest, this is not very friendly to readers and pig's feet. The lack of fighting is more about calculation, and in the later period, it only focuses on realm and abandons the advantages of skills and talents (no matter how good the skills are, they become Chinese products that are too lazy to cultivate). This is probably where the squid's book is not attractive enough.

I heard that the author is about to finish. Brothers who see this post can just go and order ten chapters. It only costs one dollar. Those who have a monthly ticket will get one chapter and two more recommendations, so that the author can write a million more words. The one I posted below is to ask the author to end the covering of the sky quickly, the post 2 is about the prehistoric calendar, the post 3 is about the dragon talisman, the post 4 is about the emperor, the post 5 is about the emperor's domination,

Female fans are gathering here😜😜

You dare to do this with this first book. Who dares to follow you when you open a new book?

Does anyone still read this book? From the scene between the water and the sky, I basically skipped and watched it, and now I barely watch it at all. It's really a waste of time to finish it quickly. If I wasn't still looking forward to your next book, I would have deleted this book by now.