I Am a Member in Konoha

The starting point of the whole book is the Sannin Era. I personally feel that the Sannin Era can lay a good foundation for the Shippuden Era. Moreover, due to the subsequent changes in the Sannin Era, the Shippuden Era has emerged from another era. Generally speaking, this book gives me the feeling that it is better than other Naruto time travel stories. Most of the others are derivatives of the original work, but there is not much difference from the ending of the original work.

That's it for the holiday season. Everyone is celebrating the festival

Although there are Naruto bugs... Well, I can't count them all.

The Hinata family! To be honest, Hinata, who is known as one of the three major pupil arts and the most wealthy family in Konoha after the Uchiha, is really not worthy of his name. The strength of the whole family is just a helper.

Because it is my first time to write a book on Dian Niang, many situations are not very clear. I hope that readers can give suggestions. If there are any incorrect settings, I will correct them in time. At present, the most common topic raised by everyone seems to be about the intelligent system. Some people say that the intelligent system is a poisonous point in Dian Niang. I really don't know about this. If everyone feels that this is not good, I will make some improvements in the future. Finally, thank you all for your support. Thanks~!

He opened the Sharingan at the age of one, developed the Mangekyou at the age of two, learned all about school beauties at the age of three, graduated as a genin at the age of four, joined the ANBU at the age of five, was a Kage at the age of six, defeated the Six Paths Madara at the age of seven, destroyed the Otsutsuki clan at the age of eight, and was invincible in the world at the age of nine and began to travel through all realms.

In addition to Ningci's hatred towards the clan because of Hizashi's death, Hizashi was also dissatisfied with Hinata, who was far inferior to Neci, being able to become a clan clan. When it came time to really do it for Hizashi, Hizashi didn't stand up. After Hizashi was reincarnated in Suitou, he didn't have any objections to Hizashi. The caged bird is originally beneficial to family separation. Without the caged bird, family separation would not be able to go out. As for the Zong family, the Zong family doesn't go out at all. Whenever they go out, they will be attacked. They stay at home and act like rice bugs. In fact, they are like caged birds. Hinata has caged birds regardless of the branch family, one is visible and the other is invisible.

The Hokage's money is two yen, big brother, the exchange rate. Your special piece, one hundred thousand dollars is embarrassing to look at 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😡😡😡😡😡

Another point is that only Kiri in the five major villages will kill his comrades. They are pure ninjas who will do whatever it takes for the mission. The one who pays the most attention to bonds is Yun. If you read the original work carefully, you will know that each generation of Yun ninjas has deep bonds and sacrifices to save their teammates. There is a lot less intrigue than Konoha. Even if there are human beings, there are deep bonds. The two who could perfectly control the tailed beasts before the Fourth World War were both Kumo ninjas, so the author wrote too poorly about Kumo ninjas...

It can be seen that the author's writing style has a bit of a "fighting spirit turning into a horse" feeling. I want to complain a little bit, but I don't know where to complain, and I feel uncomfortable holding it in.

😅🥵 To be honest, the age of the protagonist is a little inappropriate for the plot you wrote. It looks awkward and the sense of involvement is too poor. .

This book has not escaped the trap of misappropriating abilities. The Hyuga family knows the bones of the dead. The first is that the plot is unexplainable and cannot be used in large-scale battles. Secondly, no readers will find it exciting to steal abilities. People who watch Naruto are very mature. Even with the help of golden fingers, logic is needed, or you are an enhanced type, enhance soft fists and physical fitness to evolve white eyes. Either you are a creative type and can learn non-attribute ninjutsu or medical ninjutsu combined with soft fist without leaving the characteristics of the Hyuga family. Otherwise, if you just change the family, it won't matter if you have all the five middle schools. If you characterize the Hyuga family at the beginning and guide readers' imagination and expectations, it will end at the end. This kind of book is destined to have no good results, and you will lose the most attractive thing.

If the protagonist picks up Tsunade, then all the plots will be completely different. The simplest thing is that as the male protagonist, you can't watch your brother-in-law being killed. Basically, he is the undead Hokage of the Nezuki Tree. Without the fourth generation, nothing will happen! What about the next plot?

After reading Chapter 22, this book is a bit awkward to read.

In my opinion, the reincarnation eye obviously has nothing to do with Otsutsuki's bloodline. It is more like the bloodline of the sacred tree. For example, Kaguya did not have the Nine Magatama reincarnation eye at the beginning. It only appeared after eating the fruit of the sacred tree. And in my opinion, one of her descendants inherited the immortal body of the Otsutsuki clan (Otsutsuki Hamura) and the other was the sacred tree immortal body (Otsutsuki Hagoromo). And the Byakugan is not as bad as everyone says. In both Shippuden and Boruto, there have been simple Byakugan with special abilities, such as Kaguya's pressure, and there is also a Byakugan who can see into the future and forget who it is. I think the Tenseigan is more like an evolutionary branch of the Byakugan. I think there is no problem with my understanding this way. If there are any unreasonable points, book friends and authors are welcome to point them out. In order to make the author's writing more beautiful, I also feel comfortable. 😁😁

What a good routine. The protagonist is a waste in time travel (in the eyes of others), then the golden finger is in place, there is a girl who cares about him, and then a rich second generation (Uchiha) provokes him, he successfully pretends to be a slap in the face, and attracts the attention of the genius girl (Tsunade), and then there is an interaction that is enjoyable to see.

A 5-year-old chuunin, a 7-year-old jounin, a 12-year-old kage, with the reincarnation eye + corpse bone pulse, superb water release and flying thunder god, and has affairs with many girls. . . . . . This book is quite good.

Kaitian is not only a secret technique, but also a secret technique of the clan. In the original work, Neji was able to use it completely through his own understanding. According to your sentence, it is a ninjutsu that even many Hyuga Chuunin cannot learn. You seem to belittle the backfill.

I feel that this author's sense of time is particularly confusing, when Senju Tobirama passed the throne to the Third Hokage. The Third Hokage looked like he was in his teens or twenties. In the original work, the Third Hokage and the Sannin had a photo together. In the photo, the Sannin looked twelve or thirteen years old, while the Third Hokage already looked in his 30s! Then here comes the problem! Senju Tobirama died when Tsunade was a few years old. How did Senju Tobirama take the protagonist of the same school as Tsunade as his apprentice? ? ? Is this a corpse scam? Or forcibly renewed his life?

There are no senior brothers or masters in Hokage, only teachers and seniors. Students or teammates who are also teachers call each other by their first names.

What the hell is click-1? (ŐдŐ๑)

As expected of someone who came from a certain furnace, his strength improved so fast that it was unreasonable. At the age of seven, he was already at least a jounin. It seemed that he would reach the sixth level at the age of twelve.