The Wood Release User in the World of One Piece

I didn't want to read it after seeing the introduction. There must be another one who blackmails Akainu. I really don't understand what's wrong with Akainu. It's enough for a real soldier to be blackmailed so miserably.

First, it is okay to set a special race for the protagonist, but it is too weak. He can kill a hundred ordinary people as an adult. Author, do you think this makes him strong? In One Piece, ordinary people are trash, and the three Luffy brothers were able to fight dozens of them when they were young. Secondly, the protagonist still has his parents alive, which I personally feel is very bad. Family relationships are rarely described in the One Piece world, because family relationships can create weaknesses, so it would be better to just set him as an orphan. Or the protagonist's parents are powerful and dominant, but they can easily conflict with the original work. Thirdly, there are too many descriptions of Haki. Readers all know what Haki is, so they can just go through it. There is also the history of the Straff clan. I personally am not interested in those at all. Instead, I find them verbose and annoying. There are some details that I won't go into. After all, newcomers and new books are all problems that can be avoided by paying attention. I have read books for more than ten years, and now I can't help but look at everything with a strict eye. I feel very awkward about the smallest problems. I personally don't like to read those popular mainstream novels. I want to write a book but find it too troublesome. I am a lazy person. Let me mention a few things that I think are worth noting in fan fiction. The characters in the original works cannot be messed up: this is particularly important. For example, Akainu will not let the pirates go, Shanks will not kill innocent people indiscriminately, and Sengoku has a high IQ and will not do stupid things. Big names will not pay attention to small fish and shrimps. Like some novels, the protagonist offers a reward of tens of millions to attract the attention of the four emperors during the Warring States Period. Don't! Fighting scenes: Don't be too detailed and don't go over them in one stroke. If you look too closely, you will feel like you are watching martial arts, and if you don't describe it, it will become an alternative city. If they are evenly matched, the fight will last for several days, after all, One Piece fans. Heart-blooded manga: One Piece is a hot-blooded comic. The protagonist who is too rational has no sense of involvement. It has to have the feeling of fighting even if you can't beat it, and doing it even if you know you shouldn't do it. Go back and read what you have written before, otherwise you will end up digging a hole but not filling it, ending in an anticlimax. I think fan fiction is more difficult to write well than original work, because fan fiction has reference to the original work, and readers will compare it with the original work, and some loose points will become poisonous points. I write so much just to have a novel that I like and can read. Finally, I hope the author will work hard.

I am a student member, and now my daily membership is stable at 4,000+, but it almost reaches 5,000 every day. Update time is double eight o'clock in the morning and evening. It was supposed to be about the time it was put on the shelves, but now that I think about it, I just want to mention it. I don't know if there will be an update one day! 1. One update will be added for every 5,000 rewards. 2. When the first 10,000 rewards appear, in addition to the two updates worth 5,000, an additional update will be added. The number of words is still short at the moment, please add the rules later!

Wooden Release is a privileged dog ability in Naruto. It can absorb any chakara and self-proliferate. Those who can only use Chakara are restrained to death, just like the Northern Ming Shen Gong and internal power. However, after leaving the world of Naruto, the practicality of Wooden Release has been severely reduced. It cannot absorb true energy, internal force, magic, fighting spirit, domineering, and fruit abilities. It is not as useful as the druid's control of plants.

The Wood Release without Yang Release is Yamato level, and the Wood Release of the big pillar is + Yang Release and Xianjutsu.

Can you give me your feedback on my book? For example, what is not well written, what needs improvement, etc. Of course, don't talk about changing the protagonist's name (ಡωಡ)hiahiahi Just comment on this floor. I will read your opinions carefully and I will change what I can.

The word count is too few, please come back with more words.

A lot of civilians died because of Luffy, and Luffy was not a good person.

Jieyin really couldn't stand it. Do you have time to form seals when masters compete with each other? If you write about pirates, write about pirates well. You can get the Mumu Fruit because the protagonist has watched Naruto and can learn from the moves to develop the fruit's abilities. You make a seal. . . Maybe you wrote this book just for fun? If so then it doesn't matter. You can write whatever you want. If you want to write a good book, you have to think about it seriously.

Fire's consciousness is to be a pirate? 🤫🤫🤫