Konoha Bunhao

The protagonist is too ignorant of himself. How can a person who cannot refine chakra have the confidence to directly call the senior figures in Ninja Village by their names? There is no humility in his behavior and language. It feels like the author didn't consider the world setting. . This is a fan fiction, not original, it looks very funny

Ninja combat intelligence is very important. The protagonist writes down all this when writing a book. In the future, when the protagonist becomes stronger, the enemy will not be able to get to the bottom of the intelligence analysis of the protagonist.

The devil fruit requires the Phoenix, the pirate has the immortality of Barbarossa and Kaido The king has Cheng Yaojin to make unlimited waves, and now I, Luo Ke, am seeking death infinitely in Naruto's "Resurrection of Blue Flame" I resisted the nine-tailed beast without any wrinkles on my clothes. He turned to everyone and said, "Do you think I am fooling you?" Everyone was shocked: Don't look at it 😂

The theme of gaining strength after writing a book is okay, but the problem is that there is no power level limit. I mean I can write the book I like. As long as it is completed, I will have strength. If the second book directly writes One Punch Man or Dragon Ball, wouldn't it be the finale? So limit yourself when writing. The analogy is that One Piece has been written at the beginning, so in the second book, one should first increase one's own physical strength or skills or the use of physical strength. When writing Ip Man, Huo Yuanjia increases the physical strength and skills. The third work can be written endlessly, increase memory, exercise mental strength and physical fitness in perfect harmony, otherwise you will suddenly gain strength and your reactions will not be able to keep up The fourth work can be Fist of the North Star or Saint Seiya Golden Zodiac, you can gain basic strength, sixth sense or Fist of the North Star Combat Awareness In the fifth part of the metaphor, you can write the Japanese Koga style, which can increase the protagonist's ninjutsu foundation and fighting style, and the typical ninja fighting style The above are all metaphor references. The author can think about it for himself, because the power is filled up too quickly, what else can be written? How old are you? Geniuses are mostly synonymous with dying quickly. It's not too much to live until the age of 12-15, right? Then write about the plot experience of the original work, friendship, family, and daily life. Take your time and write it. In this way, you should be able to write more than 5.6 Hundred chapters. Otherwise, you will gain power too quickly and it will end in 2.3 Hundred chapters Personal opinion

Take a bite out of me: Water escape, a lot of water to escape

Main heroine Tsunade I like Tsunade the most

Well, I think adding some more exotic fruits. Many people in the natural department wrote about them, such as Thunder Fruit, Burning Fruit, Shining Fruit, etc. They are so bad. I feel that elementalization is basically invincible. Without domineering power, you can't hit it at all. I think you can choose the main fruit and the secondary fruit can be integrated into it. For example, the Phoenix plus Burning Bird has two modes (blue and red). Red kills enemies in a large area. Blue heals a large area. It's endless fun. I'm just joking. The author writes according to your own words, haha.

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If you have this ability, I think you should start writing JOJO and get the ability of the ultimate creature. All the problems the protagonist encounters are no longer a problem. He has super learning ability and can freely change the characteristics of his body. The so-called blood stains can be freely combined. Wooden Release and Sharingan are all sprinkled with water. The author is more generous and can even get the physique of Otsutsuki. Look at the settings of the ultimate creature and the abilities of all creatures. No matter how* Otsutsuki is, he is also a kind of creature.

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I think that if the protagonist transforms into an elementalized Burning Fruit, he will be burned by fire escape, cut by wind escape, and will definitely be restrained by water escape later. Even if thunder escape and earth escape are normal damage, they will be completely suppressed, right? In Naruto, the attributes restrain each other and reinforce each other. What you wrote is equivalent to the protagonist's Fire Style not being able to restrain Wind Style, being incompatible with Fire Style, and being restrained by Water Style. Doesn't it mean that in addition to not being afraid of pure Taijutsu, it is not as good as the normal attribute Fire Style?

Why do you have to be a ninja to fight life and death when you have the ability? Why do you have to go back to ninja school to study? You are already a well-known writer. Is Anjing's development bad? Does being a ninja benefit the protagonist more than Anjing's writing a book?

Oh my gosh, I just read the introduction. If the protagonist finishes writing, make out in heaven...😱

I'd better take up the first post first.

You must never tell me that the things dropped in battle can be seen by other people besides the protagonist. In that case, I can only say goodbye.

I feel like if the main character were a problem child, in a perfect world, this genre wouldn't be invincible, right?

Damn it, I finished it all in one go. I'm really upset that I haven't fully enjoyed it yet.