Technology Ring

The subject matter is good, but the writing is too bad. It feels like a composition written by primary and secondary school students. I am really speechless. I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

The novel is downgraded, has no logic at all, and is not as good as one written by primary school students.

Authors who write scientific articles, please ask the protagonist to learn more first. Knowledge is priceless. With assistance, he should study deeply, otherwise he will always be a waste. Otherwise, the waste does not deserve system assistance! ! Not worthy of technology

I can't bear to watch it. The relevant units are missing collectively. They are facing provocations and resorting to tricks. Just for the sake of word count... The logic is completely unreasonable. How can it be smoothed out in the future?

Judging from the fact that his family took out a loan to buy a house in his name at the beginning, he must be independent in the later period, otherwise they will definitely interfere with the protagonist's career, damn, most parents will not harm their children, but the loan to buy a house is too fucked up. If they can't afford the repayment, the bank will only look for the protagonist, the protagonist will look for the parents, and the parents will look for the grandparents, but most of the pressure will be on the protagonist. This is one, and there is another small problem, that is, there are restrictions on buying a house. After buying a house, it will be difficult to buy a house. It is already difficult to buy a house, and it is made more difficult. Do you want your children to be single for the rest of their lives? It may be a bit arbitrary to break up such a family early, but I like to prepare for the worst, and based on these behaviors, the probability of this outcome is high.

Why do you keep thinking about all mankind? Do the United States and the West share technology with you? Childish

To be honest, when writing science fiction novels, even if you are brainless, you have to be able to make sense logically. What's more, if it's about science and technology, it has a certain scientific development logic. You can fantasize, but you can't just make nonsense out of nothing. No matter how awesome the 3D printer is, the raw materials must be the same. If you create something out of nothing, even a great cultivator wouldn't dare to write like this?

Virtual reality headset, do you have content? What is your helmet used for if there is no content? Block the wind?

Let's just write about the development of science and technology. What you write about business competition plots is bullshit. To put it bluntly, business competition is capital competition. Once there is technology and capital, the country will basically protect it. The most important thing is that businessmen pursue profits rather than desperate efforts. If a person has a lot of assets and one line of business is not working well, he or she can change to another line of work. The method of doing so is generally capital suppression. If they cannot suppress it, they will find ways to cooperate. If they cannot cooperate, they will change their line of work. Don't write about assassination anymore. You can withstand a headshot from a sniper rifle from 800 meters away.

I really can't stand it anymore. 😤 I won't talk about the advanced 3D printer-printed figures at the beginning, nor the basic artificial intelligence. They have already written about the intermediate artificial intelligence. They can't make a mobile phone but can only be an assistant or something? Just use a virtual reality helmet to get started. Are you a fool? Such a high-level technical government did not participate? Besides, the helmet doesn't need a system? Don't need a chip? Will the government allow you to issue these things at will? There is a problem with the logic level!

The writing style is so immature, it feels like a middle school student writing a composition!

Others are golden chapters, you have three chapters to persuade them to quit

Chapter eight, chapter nine. Full-body armor costs tens of thousands of dollars. Even though you are 3D printed, others will still be suspicious. This book can directly set the tone for me as a mindless white text.

Is there such reckless science and technology writing these days? The steps are big In addition, in the previous chapters, here, here, and here are used too much. You and I only listen to novels, sometimes he is here, and sometimes pig's feet are here. . . . So embarrassing

This is the worst book I've read about technology. Chapter 10: Persuading people to quit is poisonous

I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is kidnapped and assassinated by the rival company every three days, including kidnapping and assassinating the protagonist's relatives and friends. The protagonist is passively defensive every time, and even his relatives and friends are forced to be taken into captivity by the company and they don't take the initiative to attack. They know who did it but don't deal with the other party. The reason is that they don't take the other party seriously.

The daily output is usually several hundred or hundreds. I can't figure out how you dare to accept an order of 100,000 yuan with this kind of output? Are you asking people to wait for a year?

Saw the 1st picture. I always feel like my intelligence has been thrown to the ground and rubbed hard.

If you don't study, you will just want to install X if you only have assistance. Just a 3D printer, just grind and grind and sneak around. Stop writing as soon as possible

I read the first few chapters, they are poisonous and I can't stand them anymore, pig's feet are so naive.

Why do you keep thinking about all mankind? Do the United States and the West share technology with you? Childish

Does the author have a grudge against the protagonist and wants to kill him every minute?

The author is a junior high school student 😒

It's so poisonous that I can't even finish a few chapters.

Did you write about a transvestite? How did you come up with the idea for figures? Any gadget with a bit of technology content can make money. . .

Watery and Poisonous When will Qidian be able to give the novel a rating and a star rating so that future readers can avoid lightning?

The careless and unreasonable plot is passed over in one stroke, all Yaya

The following means abandoning the trap, and the robot was created in Chapter 5.

Immediately persuade you to quit at the beginning, paraquat is not that poisonous😒

Change your outline. At least don't make logical mistakes.