Clearing the Turbid Sea

Uh-huh, it has been updated to chapter 41. I read ten or twenty chapters yesterday and it will probably be gone in two days. By the way, when will my cameo appear 😃

Putting aside the contradictions that I am picky about, from these two chapters, I can see that your writing level has improved. You can actually use humor. It's good. It was Butterfly Blue and Shrimp Writing that made me feel this way before. In Blue Epic, you depict human nature and desire, and this book depicts humor. Are you ready to abandon human nature? There are bad people everywhere, and there are people who are afraid of death. If you combine the two, I think this book will become a hit~~~ I strongly recommend that you cancel those boring titles. The setting is very good. You can't help but let people tell lies and do bad things.

Is this book going to be cool? What's wrong? Didn't pass the trial? I think it's okay

It ended suddenly, caught off guard, and showed signs of rushing to the end. Then in the closing remarks, I actually saw the famous name, and I was ranked first 🤫. Let me talk about my feelings about the last book. The biggest reason for the poor performance is that this kind of story-writing novel has no audience at Qidian. The second reason is that the world view and settings are not grand enough. The settings in Qidian's popular Western Fantasy are quite attractive. If you say that you want to move towards the mainstream, you might as well read more of those popular novels. In the past, I was very disgusted with that kind of novels. Most of them got A after reading for a long time, and then I lamented that it was too difficult to find a good novel. It took me a few years to understand that everything exists for its own reason. For novels such as The Pillar of Eta, Lord of Mysteries, you don't have any baggage to read it. It is simply refreshing. Reading and reading it every day can be regarded as a kind of life embellishment. Speaking of which, I would like to share my personal opinion. I think your novel is filled with too many tragedies. From the title of the novel, I can see that you hope to depict the ruthlessness of history and the solemnity after the ups and downs. But humans are all perceptual creatures, and human nature pursues truth, goodness and beauty. You have put too little emphasis on truth, goodness and beauty. Describing truth, goodness and beauty does not mean that you have fallen into a cliché. I won't say much more. In fact, I don't have many requirements for this kind of novel that mainly writes stories. I just need to finish it. I have read many such novels over the years, but most of them failed to make it to the end. Finally, I hope your new novel can reach a higher level.

I read it twice before I dare to give some suggestions. . First of all, this dream setting is a failure in my opinion. Since someone can go out, there must be people who can go out. If people outside have known about this illusion, the outside world will not be so unfamiliar with the illusion. First of all, this is a failure. Why should it be set that people can go out??? Why not set it as a way to find out? The fantasy world is great, but there is danger in it. All your relatives and friends are outside. No matter how beautiful the place is, you always want to go out. Referring to Sword Art Online, no matter how good a game is, it is still a dream and must return to reality. There is also an unacceptable contradiction. Some people have been here for a long time and have not left. Will they starve to death in the real world? I reminded you at the beginning that the setting must be reasonable. There is also the idea that morality is law. The setting is very interesting. It means that there can't be bad people in the fantasy world? Because when you do something bad, a compulsory title appears on your head. Taking risks is important, and so is human nature.

When will the new book be released? What is the name of the book?

You once had a dream, but in the end it gradually fell into mediocrity. This is the case for most people in the world, just like you and me. No, you are better than me. Now I have no dreams. I just want to find a beautiful wife and spend my whole life in pain. . . It has been four years since I graduated, and my salary is around 3,000 to 4,000 yuan a month. I am single. But I am quite happy, I have a good attitude, I have many friends, I don't dare to go whore, there are still some KTVs where you can ask a princess to drink. If I hadn't reached the age where I have to grow up to get married, I think I would be quite happy. If you feel bad, you have to find a way to vent. If this book doesn't work, then read the next one. If the next book doesn't work, then read the next one. If you write well, you won't be afraid that no one will read it. If you write well, you won't be afraid that no one will read it. You just write what you want to write, and it will be good when you write it. For example, I like to practice calligraphy. I am happy when I write beautiful fonts, and I don't show it to others, or others think I am stupid. Now I am very I don't use writing much anymore. It's all about computers. It's not useful for practicing. It doesn't help my life at all. But I'm happy if I can write good-looking characters. I've been practicing calligraphy for more than ten years. The more I practice, the more ugly I feel. The more I understand calligraphy, the more I feel that I can't write well. People who don't know how to write horizontally and vertically think it looks good, but they are still not satisfied. Can you understand this feeling? The same goes for writing. When you feel that your writing is getting worse, it is actually increasing. When you feel that your writing level is good, it is actually still far behind.

When I opened Seven Points and read the closing remarks, I was quite sad. To be honest, based on my years of reading experience, your writing level is much better than some of the top ten pseudo-masters. I really want to advise you to write what most viewers want to see, not what you want to write. If the next book is too bad, you will probably lose confidence completely. According to the introduction of your next book, I think you are not writing about online games, but about traveling through different worlds. The world of dreams, the redemption system, adventure, and online game settings are a bit different. The equipment in online games comes from killing monsters, and the strength is linked to the level and skills. How do you set this? People enter dreams and cannot get out. What is the setting of death? Or is it like Sword Art Online, if you die in the game you will die in reality? If your settings are inconsistent with common sense, I think I might not be able to stand it. . . In fact, I really want to read a simple and ordinary book. There is no golden finger or harem, but a real experience in life. There is a lyric in Pu Shu's Ordinary Road, The only answer is until you meet ordinary.

It seems that the protagonist is Gu Xingge. He finally looks like a protagonist. The update is too slow. . Only one chapter in two days.

Who is the goddess in the final ending, and who said the phrase "The end of the abyss", is it Xuan Yuan? Was Lu Moting killed by Hua Qingguo's ability, but he was so powerful that he died after a while?