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It's well-written, but the "golden finger" (cheat code) aspect is a big problem. I don't know why, but I inexplicably dislike golden fingers. Also, there's too much filler. I'll add it to my favorites and wait for about a hundred chapters to see how it goes.

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I think many people left because of your system. The system itself isn't the problem; the key is that these days, talk-and-talk systems are out of fashion. Most people don't want to look at intelligent, thoughtful systems. If you had a panel-based system, or even a rigid "ding~" style system, it would probably be much better.

It's frustrating to watch; it feels like the protagonist is restricted in every way.

You've gone off-topic. This world of elves is mainly about elves; you've focused too much on describing the female lead.

If you disregard the original characters, it's not bad. The original characters are poorly written, especially Sabrina; her aloof persona is ruined, and she feels like an Aqua.

Why is it called "Fat Dragonite"? Isn't the name better? In the lore, we can fly around the Earth at high speed. We shouldn't discriminate against us Dragonites just because of our game attributes.

1. The system couldn't stand it anymore (personal opinion). 2. This water is not ordinary water. 3. That's all. 4. Evaluation of this book All others are SSS. Only the system is F 5. Author, please reduce the system's screen time; I really can't stand it anymore. Everything else is great, but the system is the only thing I can't stand.

A cute little nine. (≖‿≖)✧

I think it'll be a hit. It's right up my alley.