The Moon Child's Endless Transmigration

I haven't watched much Kamen Rider, and I also feel that this cyborg system is very incompatible with half-demon. Is there any visible, clearly defined power system? This thing feels like it's floating around; the progress in strength isn't obvious, it seems stagnant, and the power system has no future... The protagonist is the same; he doesn't have much presence either. Does anyone know what level of performance Kamen Rider has the strongest?

I feel like this world of Titans is a mistake. It clearly has the power to overwhelm everything, but instead it's just playing house with various people. The only test for gigantification is using Titan bone marrow. Why not just fight the Titans directly? Is it even necessary to go through the entire plot? What does it have to do with the protagonist? Even if you're looking for a lab, why not just find the person directly? Why all the restrictions?

Hey author, remember to do a little advertising in your last book! Otherwise, they wouldn't even know you've started a new book.

It feels like things are about to fall apart. A yokai turning into a Kamen Rider... This kind of setting isn't easy to reconcile. Should it be fighting as a yokai? Or as Shadow Moon? If the abilities of tokusatsu and anime characters aren't combined well, it'll be a hodgepodge. I think the author should think this through carefully.

It's only the third watch? It should be at least the sixth watch.

I don't understand why the results are so bad. In my opinion, this book is better than most of the anime-related novels on Qidian.

Dear author, could you consider dedicating a chapter to explaining the powers of Kamen Rider? After all, there are probably some people like me who haven't watched Kamen Rider before. When it first started, all that stuff about the King Stone and the sun completely baffled me. 😰

I was completely confused by the earlier chapters, and because I couldn't understand them, I became too lazy to read the later ones.

I think the later plot development is much better than the earlier one. I hope the author keeps up the good work and doesn't abandon the story easily. That would be irresponsible to the book you've persisted in writing until now. At least give this book a perfect ending. Besides, you've gained a lot of writing experience, and you'll definitely write better and better in the future. Don't rush! I hope my advice is helpful to you.

This book, in terms of its knightly style, clashes stylistically with many anime. Some of these clashes are quite interesting, while others feel particularly out of place. Furthermore, the early plot feels rather disjointed, failing to entice readers to continue. The story is also fragmented by some worlds, lacking strong appeal. Some of the worlds, if well-written, are actually quite engaging, but the excessive flow makes them less interesting. 😅