The Infinite Time Travel of the Moon Son

I haven't watched much of Kamen Rider, and I feel that this system of transforming people is very incompatible with half-demon. Is there any clearly divided power system that is visible to the naked eye? This thing just feels like it's floating, and the progress in strength cannot be seen. It seems to be stagnant, and the strength system has no future. . . The same goes for pig's feet, which have no sense of presence Does anyone know what level Kamen Rider's strongest expressiveness is?

I feel that this world of giants is a mistake. It obviously has the strength to push forward. But in the end, it has been playing house with various people. The only giant test is to use the bone marrow of giants. Just beat the giants directly. Is it necessary to go through the plot and other things? Does it have anything to do with the protagonist? Even if you just go to the laboratory and find someone directly, wouldn't it be useful? Are there all kinds of restrictions?

Dear author, please remember to place an advertisement for your last book~ Otherwise, I won't even know that you have published a new book.

Only the third update? At least six updates are required.

It feels like the rhythm is about to break, the monster turns into a Kamen Rider. . . This setting is not easy to neutralize. Are you fighting like a monster? Or in the form of Shadow Moon? If the character abilities of tokusatsu and anime are not combined well, they will be completely different. I think it's best for you, the author, to think clearly, and either bite the bullet and write it down the way it is, or you can choose to write it down by removing either the monster setting or the Shadow Moon setting. Otherwise, your book may be very thorough. Now that there is not much development about Slippery Ghost, you can delete and rewrite the article about Slippery Ghost, otherwise it will be too big to be published. Since it is the child of the moon, does it refer to shadow moon or monster? Don't think about balancing, unless your writing is very strong and you won't destroy the setting, otherwise it will be difficult to develop the subsequent text. Just like your last book, you added Esdeath in the early stage, and I won't say much about the result. The book is written by you, the author, and I am just writing down my own thoughts. You are free to adopt or not adopt them.

I don't understand why the score is so poor. In my opinion, this book is better than most anime novels from Qidian.

Dear author, should you consider opening a chapter to explain the power of Kamen Rider? After all, there should be some people like me who have never seen Kamen Rider. When I first came up, I was completely confused about the Emperor Stone, the Sun, etc.😰

I was shocked when I saw the name of the new chapter. I thought there was another book in progress. Fortunately, it was just a misunderstanding.

I was confused when I read the previous chapters, because I couldn't understand the first ones, so I was too lazy to read the later ones.

This book actually conflicts with the style of many animations when it comes to knights. Some of them are very interesting, and some of them are particularly inconsistent. Moreover, the early storyline is almost a piece of water, and there is no urge to read it. The storyline is also broken up by some worlds, and it is not very attractive. Some worlds are actually well-written and beautiful, but they are so fluid that they feel like they are not worth watching 😅

I think the development of the subsequent plot is much better than the previous one. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not give up casually. This will be irresponsible to the author for insisting on writing the book until now. At least give this book a perfect ending. Moreover, the author has also gained a lot of writing experience and will definitely write better and better in the future. Don't worry! Hope my suggestions are helpful to you.

The author could try to write Suqing, and then the protagonist becomes an adventurer. The adventure cards in it seem to be able to increase the ability value and the like, and enhance the strength of the pig's feet.

Dear author, will the next one be in the Fate series? (P. S. Will it be in the world of machine combat?) 😄

You guys always give me the illusion that knights are very popular.

Giant Plot Failed Farewell

Rikuo Nura, the destroyer of worlds, saw something in his eyes.

Make up for the full order. Come on, author💪

I also feel that the settings of Persona and Slippery Ghost are extremely inconsistent. It is recommended to modify it 😥

Can the author write a description of the clothing? We look confused.

If you can, go to Inuyasha for a walk.

I feel like Mask and Yokai are too incompatible, so I might consider giving up on one side, otherwise they will really look completely different.

The author no longer updates ╭(°A°`)╮

Well written, but the content has become seriously distorted... It has been distorted since the beginning of Slippery Ghost. Maybe the author likes it so I didn't pay attention, but I haven't read it and am too lazy to make up for it, so I pay more attention... This book has been crooked since Slippery Ghost, and it gets worse as it goes on. I personally feel that one giant and one slick ghost are two minefield gambling dens, especially since there is no transformation at the end? Then why don't you call it the Lord of Demons and Monsters instead of Son of the Moon?

Coming from Unlimited Swordsman, I would like to say, come on, author＾0＾~! ————Your little fanboy*^O^*

There are a lot of monster and supernatural anime. If you don't write about them, you have to create something with a different world view. It deserves to be unpopular.

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