Land of Embers

Very beautiful😊

Quietly bb... 1/3 Of the novels I have followed have not had very good results...                               (￣▽￣)... My own immature opinion or suggestion: readers still hope to get some lighter joys from the novel (such as truth, experience, fun, novelty or other things). In this way, it will be natural to follow it, and the most intuitive feeling is not tired. (Perhaps this will put higher demands on you, the author. After all, while writing the words you want to write, you also have to understand the readers' feelings. Well, actually, I'm not very clear about the changes...) The reason why I say this: Maybe it's because you, the author, have always been devoted to it. Describing the world in your own mind, but taking it too seriously to the point of being a bit highbrow, or setting the threshold for readers a bit high... So I don't really hope that you can go on without the company of many readers. That would be difficult and not easy. Bib again... In fact, I guess Prince Earl, and many people who have read your book but rarely or have not left comments, actually don't want to comment... As for me, the biggest feeling is that I can't interrupt... (Or it's not easy to interrupt, always It's so difficult... This is the longest comment I've ever written, so I can't fit it into 150 words and need to be moved to the official comment area. ) Because we all know that you are writing seriously, but we don't want to say words that are not helpful to you who are so serious. So people who understand generally vote silently for it, but it doesn't solve the problem... For example, this time I have been planning for a long time, hesitating, and carefully choosing my words to say what I want to say not only to you, but also to the author who I have followed before but the result is not very good, but I have not been able to say it. (... That's the end of this sentence...) So, before you subscribed to tuchao for the extras more than the main ones... I think this is a sign that everyone pays more attention to you, cares about or is curious about your own private thoughts and feelings. Because I like your writing, I believe there is no reason not to say that I don't have something in common with you. And it is precisely based on these many commonalities that readers feel: It turns out that I am not the only one like this... So, in fact, it doesn't matter if you let the pigeons out occasionally, but it is a problem if you don't dare to let the pigeons go... It doesn't matter if you reveal more personal thoughts and meanings, there are always people who are together... 😏 I'm afraid that you don't dare to let the pigeons out, and you don't dare to let the readers feel more of your thoughts... ... It's just random talk, Haihan.

You started practicing with a maid. Is this why you finished the book after 300 chapters?

As title. Anyway, give it a try

Who copied it, you or Silent Crown? Do you really think you are a fool by reading this?

I feel a sense of silence after looking at the introduction. Please leave four recommendation votes 😁

I wish everyone a Happy New Year. I have quit copywriting in Zhengzhou in the past two days. After returning home, I can write with peace of mind. I don't know if I can still write in the same style as before. Anyway, thank you for waiting! Happy New Year everyone and all the best!

August has passed and perfect attendance has been achieved. It will depend on the situation in September:)

It's so pitiful. This snake is whining.

Thank you [I won't tell you that I miss you] boss for the tip!

Happy New Year everyone, may all your wishes come true in 2020

Indeed, I cried when I saw it, woo woo woo woo

Rich words and phrases, complex sentence patterns, and virtuosic compositions. This literary youth-style writing technique was probably a trick at the beginning. Lacking the aura of a master, few readers can resist the headache and explore the plot that may be exciting or boring under the heavy cover. Shouldn't reading novels be an easy task?

Christmas Da Si Ming, we like you🥰 We like othsg, and Femur Xiu We like Yan Qiu Qiu and Yan Jiajiu

If you want to write like this, you need to have extraordinary writing skills, very clever emotional rendering, and good scene description. The emotional rendering is very good, but not enough. It was originally written to be unpopular. The protagonist at the beginning is burdened with a huge secret and has no talent. There is no outstanding point (any important knowledge, or very powerful computing power, or there are cheats). This is enough to persuade him to quit, and Come on, that fat pig boy. Although the protagonist killed him quickly, he still persuaded him to quit. If you start like this, you must use writing to attract people at the beginning. Although your writing skills are good, it is still not enough. The protagonist's lack of talent means that he has no strength. If you are too discouraged, it also means that he may appear in the future. Nowadays, people look down on poorly written plots like the protagonist. Although you may not be able to write it, readers think it may be enough Theoretically, the author can arrange the plot arbitrarily on the basis of logical self-consistency, but there are requirements for writing power, and unflattering plots must have a high rating. Only writing power can attract people, and a flattering plot can attract people even if it is poor writing power Your writing power is good, but it is not enough to write such a plot Don't write a plot that you can't control. This is what my teacher told me on the first day, and it is also the rule of writing.

I always feel that the connection between the upper and lower sections is very abrupt. The upper paragraph clearly talks about something else, but the next paragraph directly cuts to something else. I once suspected that the content in the middle was harmonized. 😅

This introduction says that I have a maid. . . This introduction is poisonous

This book is so bleak, I didn't want to read it when I saw a maid. Don't really like this setting. The maid has an ordinary and good-looking face. Is there something wrong with her speech?

By the way, what did the young master in the first picture do to the heroine?

Come on! (๑ `▽´๑)۶

I just watched it, can you open the character sheet?

Happy New Year's Day (｡ò ∀ ó｡)