Immortal Idler

Newcomer? Collect it first, then read it if you don't want to rush out.

I am writing part-time for the time being. If my grades are good, I will consider switching to full-time. Updates will be at noon and evening. Post a post in this post. Anyone who wants a role or has role-related requirements can post it in this post. Zhanbai will reply with the result after considering it. 😁

I was so embarrassed when I wrote the chapter about Xu's mother's illness that I spent five hours and checked a lot of information before writing two thousand words. It dragged me to death. I'm really not suited to write about illness. 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

I have been busy with work recently, so the updates are not very stable. I will make sure to update once for the time being. I will have a day off on Sunday and update throughout the day. I will post a few chapters as I update them. 1. An additional chapter will be added if the collection reaches 1,000. 2. Reward the hall leader for adding two more chapters, and the helmsman for adding one more chapter. (Tentative, I will update if I take leave!!!) 3. An additional chapter will be added if the recommendation votes exceed 2,000. (Tentative, it will be revised later) 4. If the investment reaches 100, an additional chapter will be added (only this time.) Note: If you can't keep up with the time, you will find time to make up for it later.

In the future, the issues that some book friends are concerned about will be announced for everyone's reference.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Wish the first order a successful start🙏

There's nothing we can do about it. If you give birth prematurely, just give birth prematurely. Hold on, bro.

Read this novel from the perspective of a female liberal arts student. The author's writing style and writing skills are very good, and the description is quite accurate. This cannot be questioned. At least the writing is pretty good for this type of novel. Personally, I feel that the emotional drama in the first few chapters is a bit heavy, and the emotional outpouring is a bit heavy. Just a quick mention, it's okay for the author to hate scumbags, and scumbags are indeed hateful and hateful. However, when writing, we still need to be more objective and implicit, let readers see for themselves, and let readers spontaneously feel that scumbags are really hateful and hateful. For example, you can write about how good the male protagonist is to her from an objective perspective, instead of using the male protagonist's perspective to write, oh, how good he is to her; you can also write more specifically about how the scumbag clings to her. Let me talk about my feelings after reading the previous chapters, emmm, how should I put this? I know that little loli is a scumbag, but the male protagonist's reaction, emmm, why do I feel like a scumbag? The scumbag has a falling out, and the male protagonist talks nonsense and wants you to be too high. He has the mentality of a 25-year-old man, and feels that the male protagonist is not mature enough. (This is just a personal opinion. I am also a novice online writer. I don't want to praise you. I hope you will succeed as soon as possible and achieve great results.) Already collected and invested. Come back when you have time and continue learning. Short reviews will also be constantly updated. Welcome to visit again and look forward to correcting my humble work. Let's work hard together!

Some readers are really ugly. The first sentence of the introduction shows that it is the skeleton of a traditional fairy tale. If you point out your mistakes, I will learn from them. Is it necessary to scold them so much? As a result, since I got off work at 5 o'clock, I really haven't been in the mood to code at all. 😥

Thank you Queen for your 2 monthly passes. I love you. A total of 4 votes have been submitted to me, which is very embarrassing. In addition, I was delayed by something today, and one chapter has not been updated yet. I want to go to bed early and update it tomorrow. 😁

Sorry everyone, I've been delayed for the past two days due to some things. I'm very sorry. Try to make up for it in these two days.

Brother, your writing speed is great! I'm still stuck at 50,000 words!

Congratulations on putting it on the shelves. After it is put on the shelves, you will belong to the street gang. Code well and contribute to the motherland 😌

Poison point 1~ The flow of breaking off the engagement at the beginning has been used to death. Poison point 2. Pretending to be cool is fun for a while, but if you don't have the strength or background to pretend to be cool, you will be easily stepped on. Poison point 3. The protagonist of the Qidian book now knows how to use his brain. How come there is such a *** protagonist who has no strength and toughness?

Come on, the author's efforts are visible and the book is okay. Writing novels requires perseverance and enthusiasm, and also requires encouragement and support from readers. Even if it is just one sentence, if you have saved it, keep voting.

Qi Ti Yuan Liu is under one person 🙂

Someone who traveled from the earth will give his cultivation resources to others? And when you are still trash?

After working overtime, I will update in the evening. Sorry.

Brother, I signed the contract successfully 😁 Do you understand what I mean 🥺

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Liver-bursting? 🤓

You can leave a message, you know? Have you been depressed these days?

I've been very busy with work recently, which makes me very annoyed. Many times I really don't have the energy to make up for it. I haven't made up for it before, and I have to owe it again today. I'm too sleepy today, so I'll go to bed first and make up for it tomorrow. 🙂

Hold on, this book is full of fun

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~