My Wife Is the Best in the World

At first glance, this book is a novice, flowing prose. If you look closely, you will find that the author has a clear structure of the whole text. I think the context of the whole book should be very clear in the author's mind. However, the writing style seems to have changed quite a lot. It may be different styles in different chapters. If you only look at the first part, in fact, it has all the shortcomings you mentioned. But in the later part, I feel that the writing direction changes and it is suddenly different. It is probably from the beginning of the conquest of the Qinglian Sect to the wine tasting in the North and then to the front of Dingding. Except for the general characterization and the poor connection between the family characters, it feels like an epic chapter to me.

Damn it, you wrote a novel and rambled on from chapter to chapter. It made me feel so uncomfortable. You bought a chapter for a review and gave it up.

. . . Don't just use foreshadowing to block the readers' mouths, can't you write it more clearly? What you see in Yun Qingxi is really an explosion of negative energy. Earlier, you felt a lot of emotions about the death of a brothel maid, and then here you directly watched her being killed, and you said that, forcing people to die, really want to die, just say a generous burial and that's it? Do you still consider yourself a modern person? The image I created before suddenly collapsed. Anyway, my mood exploded after watching it.

I accepted the slightly poisonous part before. After all, the writing was witty and funny. I couldn't bear to see a drunken concubine forcing two people to death. I couldn't stand it. You were forced to feed us shit💩 When you were drunk, you forcibly redeemed the concubine. When you were sober, you felt there was something wrong with this woman. She was forced to death. I accepted it. Even if there is a problem, don't you think the protagonist's personality is very conflicting? It was a book shortage. It was not easy to find a good book. As you eat, there is a lump of dog poop underneath. This is simply disgusting.

I still have recommendations for this book. Is Qidian so blind now?

To be honest, I really can't grasp this degree well. Either it's too wild, or it's too serious, and it's uncomfortable to watch.

The title of the book is "The Best Lady in the World". After reading seventy or eighty chapters, it's still in name only. I don't even recognize her. I'm also drunk. Although the heroine is specified in the description, I'm still not sure about the specific one. I really want to ask where your wife is?

Lao Na has been poisoned and died. Future generations please be careful.

Join me in shouting, "The Empress is the best in the world!"

"A Serious Book Review" The writing style, in general, is pretty good. When filling in the poems and sentences, it can be seen that the author still has some writing skills. The starting and turning points are relatively smooth... But the dialogue... Seems to be inconsistent with the writing style (not the overall style). Sometimes it seems that the force is too strong, and most of them can make people smile knowingly or not be aware of it, but again Some parts are a bit embarrassing to watch, and serve the plot too much... The plot is less than a hundred chapters long. As far as I'm concerned, it's a little loose. The author is obviously too greedy, and many pitfalls can't wait to be exposed... But in terms of themes, it seems too perfunctory... For example, the imperial examination... Hurry up and take the exam... Characters, At first glance, the characters are all the same, but in fact they are all the same... The male characters are always deep, and the female characters are always unruly... It's not bad, but there are too many characters, and you will feel like you have seen them before... Moreover, the male protagonist is too craftsmanship and is seriously out of touch with the background of the times... "Everyone is drunk and I am sober" is okay, but being too sober is self-isolating... And the author is for this person The setting is to forcibly demote the characters... Isn't it embarrassing or distressing... Summary, the writing is passable, the plot is protracted, the author's pictures are big but the writing is insufficient, and the characters appear a little loose... But there are many bright spots, if the writing style matches the time, it can be regarded as a good work... Patients with obsessive-compulsive disorder who pay attention to party data are not recommended to read... Ps. Hey,, humid,,, if I change my number, you won't know who I am, hahahaha

It can't work, it can't work, it's really poisonous, the previous story line is a mess, Shanghai subway? Twenty lines?

Author, you are actually still updating. Do you want to update until next year😂

Seriously, if the author writes the plot, he writes the plot. Why does he write so many personal things? We all belong to the same ethnic group. Let's not talk about anything else. Just being politically incorrect is not correct. What do you mean when you write about these personal things to sow discord between ethnic groups? If you criticize Japan, I won't say anything. After all, where is the history? But if you say that the Chinese ethnic minorities have ulterior motives, it's true! Write the plot well and don't include any personal information!

I'm still looking forward to the foreshadowing of Monk and Yan Yu, but the relationship between the protagonists is too confusing. There is a childhood sweetheart Wei'er, a swordsman from Bailian, and an African brother. There are only three of them in less than 100 pictures, and they are all defeated by the protagonist's personality charm. Can I ask for the single female lead not to be a stud?

I feel that I have been reading this book for so long and I have been catching up on it. No matter what others say about stallions or whatnot, I have been reading it. It is very well written. But the most important thing is that I don't want to see Wanyan leave lmz again, it feels very sad. I'd better wait until the author reconciles and then read it. I hope the author can see it.

When you see that this book is for free, click here and read it. The first 200 chapters are fine, but you got drunk and took a concubine even if you didn't want it, and you even forced the master and servant to death. What the hell?

After reading more than three hundred chapters, the protagonist Liu Dagongzi, if you say he is funny, he is funny, if you say he is smart, he is also smart, if you say he is stupid, he is also stupid. . . But he is indeed a very smart person who knows how to analyze the current situation and make choices. The story has always been quite exciting, but I always feel that Young Master Liu always gives people a feeling of oppression (perhaps it is also the image created by the author). Although the good equipment he obtained and the things that benefit the people are actually guaranteed to make a profit or benefit the country and the people, on the surface, the first impression given to readers is quite aggrieved. If there are any good things, he will bring them out (such as the weapon blueprints that Zhang Kuang wants, etc.) And keep people monitoring everything in his life (it is reasonable to say that the emperor has this organization, but it will be a bit frustrating to think about it together) But having said that, Young Master Liu still has some of his own ideas and goals. Come on, author, I just don't want to complain about it, and continue to look forward to it ps: some female protagonists currently have too little sense of presence. .

It's not a masterpiece, but overall it's pretty good. The author's writing skills are obviously young, but he can also see improvement in the later chapters. As for being poisonous or something, yes, but it's okay for me. I hope the author can work hard

There is a problem with the book review. Why does it say that no words can be written in this chapter of my book?

How should I put it, why do I feel like I need to cultivate the rhythm of immortality? . .

I always feel that the chapters have too many twists and turns. Fortunately, my brain circuit is sufficient 🤫🤫🤫🤫

The most awesome thing about this protagonist is that he knows ancient poems and classics that most of us don't know or remember, and he can quote the classics without any hesitation. But I just don't know the common sense and knowledge that most people know.

I'm just a younger brother who watches for free, so I won't complain. Laijing

After reading Chapter 72, I felt that Yan Yu would die in front of the little monk. Are there any spoilers later? If so, I won't watch it.

As a man, I really can't stand this kind of man who doesn't even go to the wedding night. He is such a loser. I can give in to him no matter what he does. He is a brainless person and a weakling. The only thing I can't stand is that the protagonist is a waste in bed, especially during the wedding. At this time, I can't stand this waste. Goodbye. It's too toxic.

The male protagonist is too pure, he is not so flirtatious and untouchable.

I read more than a dozen chapters and subscribed to one chapter just to say, "What kind of rotten fish and shrimps did you write?"

The first time I wrote a book review about him, I read Chapter 106 and couldn't stand it anymore, so I was ready to give up. Tell me how you feel: Very bad. Let's talk about the reasons. The author might as well look at the reasons why we abandon books. This should be the reason why most comrades abandon books: First, the story environment is unreal, that is, there is something wrong with the novel's worldview. Generally, historical texts, even time-travel historical texts, pay most attention to respecting historical facts. The historical facts here do not mean that they must be pure history, but the social customs of the time period in which the characters in the novel live. Historical events conform to the historical original as they should be and are not tampered with, so that people can be immersed in the scene without being distracted! You are traveling through an imaginary historical novel, which avoids the trouble of restoring historical events and characters, but social customs are a huge pitfall! Feudal society must have the words and deeds of feudal society figures! 1. If you don't let your men touch the bridal chamber, it would cause a scene in modern society! 2. The King of Huainan was in charge of the military and political power of the government. As a dynasty that has been passed down for hundreds of years, the real number is unlikely. In the history of Chinese feudal dynasties, only the two Han Dynasties had real vassal states. However, since the enactment of the imperial edict, the rights have greatly shrunk, and only then can the two Han regimes survive for a long time. There were real powerful vassal kings in the Jin Dynasty, but the consequences were the Rebellion of the Eight Kings! Since the Wei and Jin Dynasties, there has never been a powerful vassal king who was in charge of military and political power at the same time. How could the King of Huainan be in charge of military and political power in a feudal dynasty that had ruled for 600 years? Although it is fictional history, the most basic historical logic still needs to be paid attention to. Second, when writing history, don't involve Jianghu or martial arts! Don't exceed the capabilities that humans can achieve. The plot of jumping as far as a basketball court and the ringing of the Vajra Buddha's phantom defense bell belongs to non-human abilities, and it will be a drama immediately! If I want to see martial arts, I might as well go to fantasy, cultivating immortality, and martial arts! Third, the character is immature, out-of-touch, and funny. The protagonist's character is very hated by people. It's not that the characters in the book hate him, but that you write it so that the readers hate it! With an unpopular protagonist, how can there be any desire to continue watching? I'm not here to torture you! Fourth, maybe it's my personal preference. I don't really like to read stories about people who fight for supremacy over the world and sit on the throne after traveling through time. After entering the dynasty and serving as an official, they ended up sitting on the throne of the emperor. Watching Ge Ying! I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. .

Is this your first time writing a novel? I think the portrayal of the characters is very delicate, and the story is well written, with ups and downs, and it's very comfortable to watch and not embarrassing. Z

Damn it. . You haven't finished this book yet. You haven't finished it since I graduated from junior high school to the time I graduated from Niu Mo University to when I started working. You are really n 👍