My Wife Is the Best in the World

The most awesome thing about this protagonist is that he knows ancient poems and classics that most of us don't know or remember, and he can quote the classics without any hesitation. But I just don't know the common sense and knowledge that most people know.

I'm just a younger brother who watches for free, so I won't complain. Laijing

After reading Chapter 72, I felt that Yan Yu would die in front of the little monk. Are there any spoilers later? If so, I won't watch it.

As a man, I really can't stand this kind of man who doesn't even go to the wedding night. He is such a loser. I can give in to him no matter what he does. He is a brainless person and a weakling. The only thing I can't stand is that the protagonist is a waste in bed, especially during the wedding. At this time, I can't stand this waste. Goodbye. It's too toxic.

The male protagonist is too pure, he is not so flirtatious and untouchable.

I read more than a dozen chapters and subscribed to one chapter just to say, "What kind of rotten fish and shrimps did you write?"

The first time I wrote a book review about him, I read Chapter 106 and couldn't stand it anymore, so I was ready to give up. Tell me how you feel: Very bad. Let's talk about the reasons. The author might as well look at the reasons why we abandon books. This should be the reason why most comrades abandon books: First, the story environment is unreal, that is, there is something wrong with the novel's worldview. Generally, historical texts, even time-travel historical texts, pay most attention to respecting historical facts. The historical facts here do not mean that they must be pure history, but the social customs of the time period in which the characters in the novel live. Historical events conform to the historical original as they should be and are not tampered with, so that people can be immersed in the scene without being distracted! You are traveling through an imaginary historical novel, which avoids the trouble of restoring historical events and characters, but social customs are a huge pitfall! Feudal society must have the words and deeds of feudal society figures! 1. If you don't let your men touch the bridal chamber, it would cause a scene in modern society! 2. The King of Huainan was in charge of the military and political power of the government. As a dynasty that has been passed down for hundreds of years, the real number is unlikely. In the history of Chinese feudal dynasties, only the two Han Dynasties had real vassal states. However, since the enactment of the imperial edict, the rights have greatly shrunk, and only then can the two Han regimes survive for a long time. There were real powerful vassal kings in the Jin Dynasty, but the consequences were the Rebellion of the Eight Kings! Since the Wei and Jin Dynasties, there has never been a powerful vassal king who was in charge of military and political power at the same time. How could the King of Huainan be in charge of military and political power in a feudal dynasty that had ruled for 600 years? Although it is fictional history, the most basic historical logic still needs to be paid attention to. Second, when writing history, don't involve Jianghu or martial arts! Don't exceed the capabilities that humans can achieve. The plot of jumping as far as a basketball court and the ringing of the Vajra Buddha's phantom defense bell belongs to non-human abilities, and it will be a drama immediately! If I want to see martial arts, I might as well go to fantasy, cultivating immortality, and martial arts! Third, the character is immature, out-of-touch, and funny. The protagonist's character is very hated by people. It's not that the characters in the book hate him, but that you write it so that the readers hate it! With an unpopular protagonist, how can there be any desire to continue watching? I'm not here to torture you! Fourth, maybe it's my personal preference. I don't really like to read stories about people who fight for supremacy over the world and sit on the throne after traveling through time. After entering the dynasty and serving as an official, they ended up sitting on the throne of the emperor. Watching Ge Ying! I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. .

At first glance, this book is a novice, flowing prose. If you look closely, you will find that the author has a clear structure of the whole text. I think the context of the whole book should be very clear in the author's mind. However, the writing style seems to have changed quite a lot. It may be different styles in different chapters. If you only look at the first part, in fact, it has all the shortcomings you mentioned. But in the later part, I feel that the writing direction changes and it is suddenly different. It is probably from the beginning of the conquest of the Qinglian Sect to the wine tasting in the North and then to the front of Dingding. Except for the general characterization and the poor connection between the family characters, it feels like an epic chapter to me.

Is this your first time writing a novel? I think the portrayal of the characters is very delicate, and the story is well written, with ups and downs, and it's very comfortable to watch and not embarrassing. Z

Damn it. . You haven't finished this book yet. You haven't finished it since I graduated from junior high school to the time I graduated from Niu Mo University to when I started working. You are really n 👍