All Worlds Begin with Douluo

The author is having trouble with the spider. . .

Most fan fiction without a female protagonist is a dead end. Don't look at the majority of eunuchs in the comment area. In fact, there are only a few people. There are still a lot of people saying that I am reading the plot and not the women. In fact, if you think about it carefully, you will know that these people are the kind of people who wish for the author to die. If the plot is well written, then write an original one. Fan plots are like that. There is room for originality, but it cannot go beyond the original setting. How good can you write it? In the end, I was either a eunuch or using my love to practice writing.

You can read this book before Chapter 70, but you don't need to read it later. It's just rubbish. The protagonist was decisive in killing in the early stage, but in the end, he was cowardly and held back at every turn. Shrek Academy and the time traveler have been causing trouble, but the protagonist just taught them a lesson, put them back, and continued to raise them. People want to take away your college, kill your people, and take away your girl, but you actually say that they are just a middle school boy and there is no need to argue with them. I couldn't stand it when I saw one place, that is, the protagonist went to Lanba Academy. The protagonist had 4 titled Douluo. Even if their strength could not be exposed, they were still 4 Contras. One of the grandsons of Contra was in Lanba Academy and was not released by Liu Erlong, but the protagonist actually came to negotiate. And finally. The protagonist's spirit is clearly stronger than that of the 100,000-year-old soul beast, but he ended up being transported through time. The reason I saw so many of them was just to see how bad this book could be.

Hey, the front was fine, but there was an inexplicable time traveler in the back. This time traveler tried to kill Tang San many times, but Tang San didn't kill him and let him go multiple times? You've already read the novel "Wanjie" and you're still worried that there won't be a powerful god to fight Tang San later, or what?

Let's just say there is no heroine. Do you think anyone will watch?

Overall, the writing is okay. It's not particularly poisonous, just keep it for now!

Chapter 60 is really poisonous. Author, do you know what is most important in the auction house? I tell you, eyesight is the most important! Her surname is Zhu, and she is a Nether Civet Cat Martial Soul. From this look, she should be guessed that she belongs to the Xingluo Royal Queen family. How bold is this auction house to dare to auction her? ? ?

When I was just writing about Douluo, it was okay and I could read it. I thought it would be good to just change the world and write about it like this. Suddenly, when writing about one person in Chapter 104, a bunch of people were crammed in, especially when writing about Li Hansha. There were too many private things, especially when comparing martial arts training and Qi training.

I originally read the title "No Heroine", but after reading about 30 chapters, I found that there is still a heroine, and she is still Ning Rongrong. Personally, I don't like Ning Rongrong very much, and Ning Rongrong's talent can be said to be the lowest. If there is no fairy grass in the original work, Ning Rongrong can only cultivate to level 70. Even if there is fairy grass, it has only evolved to the ninth level, and there are only nine soul rings. If it were not for the original work, Ning Rongrong would have no possibility of becoming a god. Moreover, the author yourself said at the beginning that he only wanted to practice Taoism. There is no heroine, and there is one just a few chapters later. Your face will snap.

Didn't you say there is no heroine? ? Can you be more sincere as a person? It's poisonous! !

The protagonist traveled through time and became Tang San. At the beginning, there was another time traveler who directly intercepted the protagonist, lived with Xiao Wu, and then worshiped the master. Then the time traveler was named Xiao Li. He wanted the protagonist's Xuantian Gong, so he provoked the protagonist, and threatened the protagonist with twin martial arts. He asked for Xuantian Gong and worshiped the master. Isn't this just asking for death? And if Xiao Li, Master, and Xiao Wu were not beaten to death by Tang Hao, what if they were left to grow up to deal with your son? Isn't this outrageous? , In addition, the introduction said there is no female protagonist, but I heard from the comments that there is already a female protagonist. I think it is the stallion of the heavens, right?

It's inexplicable. It doesn't matter if one person travels from Douluo to traveling through it. It doesn't matter if he travels with a bunch of people. He also tolerates amnesia. Suddenly, Li Hansha appears out of nowhere and is as powerful as the protagonist. He takes the amnesiac protagonist as his disciple... This is a rhythm that forces readers away. The author has completely entered the mode of entertaining himself.

I'm getting more and more speechless. I've subscribed to this book. I've read this book in more than ten or twenty chapters. The first seventy or so chapters are okay. After the soul hunting, I have nothing to say. Forget about the inexplicable time travel. After all, I gave an explanation. That Li Hansha is really inexplicable. I don't know why, but it gets even worse later on. The time traveler I released was just causing trouble everywhere. It was obvious that they had bad intentions against the protagonist. But, why, I just let them go back. Let me go, I saw At that time, I thought that this early-stage mini-boss should be completely taken away from the box. Good guy, just let him go. I really can't see it being like this all the time. Just kill it when it's time to kill it. It's better to replace new characters from other worlds and go around in circles all the time. The latest Xiao Wu is also a trap. He knows the other person's time traveler and his poor character, but he doesn't have any precautions at all. Even if he makes a gift for the elders of his sect, it's okay. There is no emotion anyway. Killing and taking the soul bone is better than doing nothing at all.

After chapter 70, the author let himself go, but after chapter 104, he had no idea what he was writing 😒

How to say it? The first part is well written, but the second part is really... The time travel is inexplicable, confusing, and seems very sudden and difficult to accept. Also, I am too tolerant of those people from Shrek Academy. I would have beaten them to death a long time ago. They are as annoying as flies. Alas, if you hadn't written well before, I would have slipped away long ago. Hope something can change

It's too poisonous. After it was put on the shelves, it was as if the author had changed and he wrote without using his brain at all. He went to get a soul ring and in the middle of it, he wrote dozens of pictures under one person. How disgusting?

Another silly protagonist.

It's disgusting since it was put on the shelves. I'll be poisoned if I can't bear to watch it.

How many words can you write for one person?

Wang Sheng broke through level 10 at the age of 11 and level 20 at the age of 12. . .

I'm so speechless. What's the difference between this and the original? Why bother adding poison to a plant? Shouldn't it be to add life? And they are all time travellers, so why are they still following the original story? Shouldn't he have some brains?

How could this be written in 1.9 Million words! Don't know what it means

When you see more than 500 chapters, it means that not many people have read it. However, there seems to be a problem in the previous chapter, but the first chapter is great.

I'm not interested anymore after seeing Tang San through time travel.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

The batch of rose rings equipped with music are similar to the original ones, but they are a little older.

This title is poisonous, you can make it easier for the author, Earth

Are there so many Shennongs in the comment area? The author can update to 1.9 Million words, 666

How to block novels with the word Douluo?

Traveler, the first martial spirit is poisonous like snakes. Don't read it. It's rubbish. Isn't it good to awaken the Blue Silver Grass early