Taiping Arrest

I also like martial arts, it's well written, I support it, it's worth collecting!

Great book! Use your balls to push books! Except write slower! The finished book will be awesome! Awesome!

Let me just say, those who write about martial arts are better than those who write about fantasy. I have received it and will read it. It is very charming and the description of the fighting scenes is worth studying. It can be seen that the author is very careful.

In fact, I really want to write a novel that has the feel of "Cowboy Bebop" or "Warriors of Chaos", with jazz or rock in the text. A group of people get together, there is no absolute protagonist, there is no absolute good or evil, and a group of people eventually leave because of unraveling their knots. If you want the book to have a "temperament", whether it's misty, violent, or decadent, as long as it has that kind of temperament, I feel like writing this book is worthwhile.

​​​Actually, I'm used to reading time-travel novels, and sometimes I wonder what would happen if I traveled to ancient times? I suddenly discovered that if you were reborn in a wealthy family through time travel, you would inevitably struggle for power and power, and you would need to be sophisticated in human relationships; at the bottom of society, no matter what, it would be extremely hard and powerless. So based on such an idea, I started to write a story like this. No matter it is a comedy or a tragedy, I will try my best to write it equally wonderfully. Because it is my first time to write a book, I was not sure about the rhythm and charm of the book in the early stage, but I am slowly making progress, and I hope I can go further. Thank you for reading!

Congratulations on the launch, persevere, work hard, and come on!

Congratulations to the author, thank you very much. Thanks to your help, your investment will be profitable 😁

The biggest feature is the traditional martial arts, the writing is antique, which is different from the novice pretentious writing that is popular in the current Internet literature, and there seems to be more than one protagonist. Ha ha. What I appreciate most is that the writing has a golden ancient style and is very delicate. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The writing is excellent, but the paragraph division is not very satisfactory. Whether viewing it on the APP or on the website, I often find that the paragraphs are too long and a bit ugly, and the page feels not too neat. That's all for now. After all, the article is not too long and I haven't read much of it. I hope the author won't be offended if I didn't hit the mark.

... What is the rhythm? Who is the protagonist? Personal? Place? What's going on? What to do? Each supporting character's vision opens the map?

I found out that someone pretended to be me and criticized Brother Fuguang's "Sword and Legend". It really made me laugh and cry. Fortunately, I was reported and blocked, 😅😅😅. I don't know what to say. I never criticize other people's works with malicious intent. I hope someone who discovers this fake one can report it directly or tell me. Thanks!

If you have any questions about the novel, you can ask it. This is my first time writing a novel at the pace of an online novel. Sometimes, it is a bit difficult to grasp the unfolding and plot development of the plot, and I am relatively slow to get started. So I hope you can give me more opinions. I will accept them with an open mind and strive to give you a better reading experience.

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Great cheers. Already collected and hope to visit again (*¯¯*)

There are only benches here, so just sit down! 😁

I would like to recommend my novel "Martial Arts: Lin Moves Nine Heavens" 😭

Why is my sofa floor missing?😒

Just to introduce these few poems, I read

There is something wrong with the chapters of the book. I jumped at it while reading it. Could the author please sort it out? . .

It's well written, but the chapters are too messy, and there are question marks all over it.

What the hell is Lihuo... Can the author please take some care of it? It feels so uncomfortable to read.