I Have a Black Market in Another World

#Phany#### Different World# The large text looks very relaxed, and I feel like I can read many chapters in one go. Plot comment: Combining the game, cultivation, rebirth and other settings, and also involving the economy, it can be seen that a lot of effort has been spent. The big book looks interesting without being vulgar. In terms of character design: The protagonist has a handsome and handsome feeling, which is quite attractive to female readers. Although there are some flaws in the writing style, other aspects also make up for some shortcomings. Overall, it is very good. I would like to make some pertinent suggestions: (Only my personal opinion, you can consider it as appropriate) The description of the scene needs to be strengthened, the sense of substitution is not enough~ You can deepen the depth of the book, I believe it can develop better and further! You must keep writing, Boring Army will always pay attention to Dada~ Recommendation index:☆☆☆ Da Da's book has been included by Boring Army~ Please continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

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Selling dog meat for sale? ? Is there a black market system for joining other people's families to brag? 🤔

The style is out of place. Good subject matter has been spoiled. The dialogue between the two uncles and nephews can be funny, and it only takes one or two sentences to express it, but if the two uncles and nephews keep talking to each other endlessly, it will be superfluous. This will wear down the reader's patience. Also, the author's overall view must be stable and his positioning must be accurate. Since we are a fantasy book about cultivating immortality. The dialogue between the protagonist and the supporting characters must be rigorous. It cannot always be described in a funny tone. After all, we are not an urban novel. Author? I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. My evaluation must be objective, please consider it

This name. . , Ono Ono's is with a Japanese person

When you come to a strange place, you don't just try to understand the situation, but you go to fight with the gangsters who have a backstage. If the author hadn't renewed his life, he wouldn't have survived for a day.

I am also speechless. You sell this kind of thing and set up a stall openly. The black market system is just called a black market and has nothing to do with the black market.

Come on, author, collected and rewarded

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What nonsense is written? I can't stand it at all.

Do you have any misunderstandings about the black market?

I think there are a lot of complaints and it looks a bit messy.