Reborn: The Road Through the Martial World Is Long

Lu Yao and Xiao Yu

Regardless of whether the plot regarding the Prefectural Lord will take a turn later, or whether I'll eventually come to like him, I don't particularly like the Prefectural Lord character right now. Because she failed not only as a mother, but also as a lord.

The author's writing is excellent, and the story is captivating, featuring many intelligent, adorable, beautiful, and outstanding girls. Some similar novels, even without a romantic pairing, still have numerous handsome and capable men surrounding the female lead, helping her through her troubles, while simultaneously introducing a villainous female supporting character who suffers unrequited…

Mingwei, pat on the head, it's okay. You can listen to readers' opinions on trivial matters, but for everything else, it's best to make your own decisions. Write what you want to express and describe; after all, everyone starts like this. Only by writing what you truly want to write can you persevere.

Why does the whole thing seem to suggest there's no male lead, and even the men with detailed roles are scumbags? And the whole thing reeks of lesbianism!

I've only read a few chapters, but I already feel that the characters in this book are very aggressive. It used to be okay, but in recent years I feel that readers are becoming increasingly hostile. What's going on? Is it because the country is developing so well that there are so many weirdos and monsters online? Are people venting their frustrations in real life online? Or have people's views been skewed by the internet?

Group number: 719 Don't swallow my group 871 Don't swallow my group 609 (I'm being swallowed so many times)

Suddenly, an idea struck me, so I'm writing down some suggestions. To change the readers' negative impression of the Prefect from the early episodes, we need to focus on his behavior towards Lu Yao. For example, we should pay attention to his protectiveness, his cuteness, his jealousy, etc. The key is to show that the Prefect is giving more to Lu Yao. That's all I can think of for now; I'll add more later if I think of anything else.

Finished reading it, it was great! Keep it up, author! The little interactions were lovely, everyone was so funny. I had some suggestions, but I've forgotten them after reading it. I'll post them later when I remember. Keep writing!

The author should write according to their own ideas; there will always be kindred spirits. Writing a book is not about writing for "people" to read, but about "writing for people to read." Of course, if you are writing for profit, then follow the editor's recommendations. If your writing is good enough and you have support, you can make money.