Reborn: The Road Through the Martial World Is Long

Lu Yao and Xiao Yu

Let's not talk about whether the plot about Fu Zun will be reversed later, and whether I will be really good. At least I don't like the role of Fu Zun now. Because not only did she fail as a mother, she also failed as a palace official. As a mother, she can not be close to Lu Yao, ignore him, and even hate Lu Yao a little. After all, she was born by the same disgusting person, so she can understand. But there is no denying that Lu Yao is his biological son, the Shaofu of Mingzhou! Ever since she left Lu Yao to an outsider, ever since Lu Yao entered the ancestral temple, Lu Yao has been the upright Mingzhou Shaofu! As a palace master, he is even more unqualified. A "personal disciple" who has not passed the apprenticeship test and is not even recognized by the elders, can he compare with Mingzhou Shaofu! On the day Lu Yao returned, she didn't go to see her biological young master first. Instead, she stayed in the courtyard and taught her "personal disciples" Moreover, the doctor the senior sister invited to see her was also an honored guest. As the host, she did not go to receive him in person. Is this the way Mingzhou Mansion treats guests? If word spreads, not only Lu Yao will be laughed at, but the entire Mingzhou Prefecture will also be laughed at. I finally know why Ming Gui fell in love with Qin Ye. She is blind~ Not just blind, she is simply blind! (Based on the updated plot, please don't drag me out to whip the corpse later)

The author's writing is good, the stories are good, and there are many smart, cute, beautiful and outstanding girls. Even if there are no CPs in some similar novels, the heroine will be surrounded by many outstanding handsome men to solve problems, and then bring out the love instead of the vicious female partner to find trouble. The heroine of this book is still young and I don't know what she will be like when she grows up. Excellent people are attracted to each other, but they don't like to be involved in too many emotional disputes. Judging from the previous performance, this book should not be the case. Every character in this story is very vivid. I like the heroine the most. I want to finish the story.

Mingwei, touch your head, it's okay. You can listen to the opinions of readers on matters that have nothing to do with elegance, but for other things, you should take control of it yourself. Write what you want to express and describe. After all, it is always like this in the beginning. Only when you write what you really want to write can you stick to it. If you can stick to it, don't be afraid. The readers will definitely agree with you. Although I am a casual reader, more of a Buddhist type, I am very optimistic about you and I am with you. Come on!

Why do you feel like the whole story reveals that there is no male protagonist, and the man with a detailed role is also a scumbag, and there is a lesbian atmosphere in every line? !

I've only read a few chapters, and I feel like this book is the same. The people in this chapter are very violent. It used to be okay, but in recent years I feel that readers have become more and more hostile. What's going on? The country is developing so well, but there are so many ghosts and ghosts on the Internet? Are you unhappy in real life and come to the Internet to vent? Or are people's views biased by the Internet?

Group number: 719 Don't swallow me 871 Don't swallow me 609 (I can't survive being swallowed)

Suddenly I was inspired to write some suggestions. To change the readers' bad impression of the early Fu Zun, we must pay attention to Fu Zun's behavior towards Lu Yao, such as being defensive, cute, jealous, etc. The Fu Zun must pay more to Lu Yao. I'm thinking of this for now, I'll talk about it later if I think of it.

Just finished watching it, it looks great! Come on, author! The little interaction was very loving, and everyone was very funny. I originally had some little suggestions, but after reading them, I kind of forgot about them. I will post them again when I think of them. Come on, code!

The author can just write according to his own ideas, and there will always be close friends. Writing a book is not for "people" to read, but "for people to read." Of course, if you are looking to make a profit, then if you write according to the recommendations given by the editor-in-chief, with sufficient writing style and support, you can make money.