Cloudbound Train

Although it's a bit messy to read in one go, I'm really looking forward to the unfolding of the story. I feel like I haven't seen this type of Western fantasy novel for a long time. I hope the author can write better and better!

You can probably get an idea of ​​the level by comparing the word count and comments.

Even Western-style fantasy is not so messy. It is completely discouraged writing. Everyone writes from the first-person perspective, making it impossible for readers to connect the characters in each scene coherently. Maybe after reading more than a dozen chapters, I still have to go back and see what the relationship between this person and the protagonist is. No matter how good the setting is, it can only be defeated. As for the issue of writing style defended by the author, it is not accepted. There is something wrong with the architecture. Even the writing of old-style Western fantasy novels would not use such a short scene change method.

Breaking through 3 million words! [Celebrate][Celebrate][Celebrate] One step closer to the end! ! Keep up the good work! ! !

Treasure author! The writing style is so strong. Some authors want to write about young people, but they often write inexplicably. This book attracted me in the first chapter. If every chapter is like this, Platinum is definitely the starting point! ! ! Highly recommend this book!

Ultimate chaos, that is. Maybe I have been feeding the dog for ten years of reading. If I can't understand, it's 😅

Short review After reading twelve chapters, the story is not bad, but the author's writing skills are really torturous. First, an unintroduced noun often appears in the book, and then is described in detail, requiring readers to guess the concept represented by the noun. For example, in the first chapter, Ms. Emma, ​​through the psychological activities of the protagonist, we can guess that she is the laundry manager, maybe the boss, but this increases the reader's dyslexia. Chapter 2, Deborah. In the following article, the two concepts of Miss Ticket Inspector and Deborah have been mixed up, which means that Deborah is Miss Ticket Inspector, but in one sentence, 'Miss Ticket Inspector, is also Deborah. . . . ', And it was natural to bring in Deborah. There is also the tower in Chapter 5, which I guess may be an astrological tower later on. However, it would be better to introduce the tower and the surrounding scenery at the beginning, and then gradually write about the people. There is no need for readers to carry so much burden to read further. The first few chapters are originally intended to introduce the world view. Second, generally speaking, when new concepts appear, they need to be introduced from old concepts. In novels, they are introduced from the protagonist. Therefore, if there is nothing related to the protagonist in the early stage, there is no need to introduce it. The writing is like spreading out from the protagonist little by little. There is no need to highlight a few points in the early stage. The introduction of the concept in this way is more abrupt, and if it does not appear for a long time, the ink and ink that was laid out in the early stage will be in vain. Finally, I wish the author a great success with his next book.

At first glance, it seems okay. In fact, I can accept this kind of slow-paced online novel in the early stage. After all, there are not many good fantasy novels. But the names of the characters are really frustrating. I really can't remember them. Coupled with the style of language narration, I often have to go back and re-read it to understand it. (Strongly recommend the author to change it) The author's description is very sufficient, but this makes the early story progress too slow and dragging. I really like the part where Cecilia died, and I really like the protagonist getting back on her feet after experiencing pain and torture. Also, why does the performance of this book seem to be a bit sluggish now? Is it because no one has read it?

This book is really hard to read. I read it for 3 days and only got to 31 chapters. There are quite a few characters. Sometimes the perspective is cut. After reading several pages, I still don't know who is written in the perspective.

Perfect, I am an apprentice since I am not interested in Western fantasy novels at all. The main reason is that the author gave me a good feeling. Although not many people follow the book, the author still writes seriously. Recently I have lost contact with several of my favorite authors, Eunuch! Oh, it's a bit sad. I wish the author good luck in his postgraduate entrance examination!