Konoha Has a Demonic Spirit

I am here from [WeChat] to transfer positions. I saw the end of World War I, the second generation of Raikage was killed by Golden Horn and Silver Horn, and then Konoha developed rapidly... How to say it. I was very excited at first because the writing style suited my taste and I was immediately amazed. At that time, I just wanted to read those hundreds of chapters and then support the author with the support of Qidian. Com. Of course, this is after reading those hundreds of chapters. It can only be said that the world framework and background settings are becoming more and more complex. The overall length is top-heavy. What I am very satisfied with right now is the relationship between Tsunade and the protagonist. Hindering world peace and national values. The author is having a hard time. But how to put it... I personally get a membership card on WeChat, so I don't subscribe to read. I usually don't have much spare money. But I am not a troll specifically here to blackmail the author. This comment is my first time to go back to the starting point and post it. I just want to give the author some advice. For light novels, it would be better if the system is simpler... After all, writing light novels does not require you to take a PhD... Then, I browsed around the comment area and found that many book friends had the same opinions as me. So I didn't write many useful suggestions. Anyway, I'm usually free, so I'll give it a try. If everything goes smoothly, I will come back to the starting point to provide support. After all, by next month and a half, I will only have a few hundred living expenses left... So, if I can't read it because it's too complicated, I will directly miss this book. Mengxin said that if I have nothing, I can't do anything to support the author...

Author: When will you write a new novel? I like magic and all-encompassing cards, this type of novel. I think the novel Magic and All-Things Cards is very interesting, and it is completely different from the novels I have read before. 😁😁😁

The clear stream of Naruto literature explains all the unreasonable things in the original world. The reasons are brain-consuming and the storyline is smooth and has few flaws.

This book is really long-winded and feels like reading information. Various explanations for various settings. . It's very boring, the words are empty and boring.

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Everything about the setting is good, but the writing style is too out-of-the-box (almost every sentence is criticized), it would be nice to be a little more serious.

If someone says: The reviewer said that the novel is too scary and poisonous to persuade him to withdraw, how should the curator retort? Everyone is welcome to brainstorm.

Will this girl become irritated after eating the venomous transformation? I'm really looking forward to Tsunade wearing a sailor suit.

To be honest, I have read a few Naruto fanfics recently, and the more I read them, the more I feel that Sarutobi Hiruzen is nothing. For example, Danzo, the pot king, is even more disgusting in his patronage and indulgence.

I suddenly remembered the magical race crossing that I had watched before, and I felt that there was some truth in the analysis. First of all, the Divine Tree is the source of chakra, which is equivalent to the Great Dao, and the combination of Kaguya and the Divine Tree is equivalent to Pangu. The Six Paths seal Kaguya and seal the Divine Tree, the Ten-Tails, into his own body, which is equivalent to Hongjun who is in harmony with the Heavenly Way. Then in order to disperse the consciousness of the Ten-Tails (Kaguya), he distributes the chakra to the world and splits the power of the Ten-Tails into nine tailed beasts. At this time, the weak and missing part of the Great Path is equivalent to the Tianyan Four-Nine. There is always a little uncertainty, so there are always variables. By the time the Six Paths appear in the original work, he may be stronger and does not need a physical body. The combination of Yin and Yang can exist independently and endlessly, becoming an energy life, and the level of life will be different. This can be seen from the fact that he said that he gave his power to Naruto and Sasuke, but he still showed up and summoned the Kage Kage using the Earth Reincarnation. Giving his power to others does not affect his power, at least it does not affect his GM authority. Kaguya did not escape the Six Paths calculation throughout the whole process. Speaking of his chakra consciousness and his son Everything can be preserved. There is no reason that his younger brother can't do it. I can only say that his younger brother is too naive and was tricked. Moreover, I think Asura and Indra's chakra are not necessarily unconscious. Maybe they are all the tricks of his son from the Six Paths. After all, Black Zetsu cannot be detected. How could he take the bait without bait? Well, this is just a bit of imagination

I can't last ten minutes with just one chapter.

Recruiting Konoha dragon ninjas! There are many job vacancies in Konoha and heroes are needed to apply. What interrogation department or something. For those who are just interested in reading, please give yourself a name that fits the Naruto world. Then talk about gender, age, etc. It's okay if you have experience or something. Please note that this is not a funny or nonsense post! If the answer is inappropriate, I may delete it!

After reading almost 200 chapters, I couldn't help but complain: 1. The monsters that wander around are only in the Land of Fire. The other four ninja villages have nothing to do, and Hashirama is all asleep because of the monsters 2. So many monsters have invaded, and the protagonist has also strengthened Konoha. In the end, the plot is still the original plot of Naruto. There are obviously monsters that can destroy the country (the one who made Hashirama sleep), but the other ninja villages are not under any pressure at all. Yes, desperately attack Konoha 3. Konoha has the equipment, medicine and prosperity provided by the protagonist. It is known as the first ninja village. Cloud ninja and sand ninja attacked. They concentrated most of their strength to resist the cloud ninja village and almost lost. They still have space and time in their own territory 4. In order to ensure that the original plot can continue, various coincidences let the enemy go, such as letting go of the first-generation puppet master, and the intruder enemies destroyed one of Danzo's eyes. Wait The most frustrating thing is that Konoha is already very strong, and with the development of the protagonist, and the addition of equipment, medicine, and medical ninjutsu that appeared in advance, the Kumo ninja was beaten to a pulp -_-||, it was so frustrating, like being fed a mouthful of shit (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻ The author's writing is good, but he doesn't like to abuse the master even a little bit

After the protagonists graduate from school, they will go through a period of genin missions, DC level. If you want to show your face, please sign up. You can also design your own tasks. Just treat yourself as the person who entrusted the task to the Konoha ninja. It can be an ordinary task, or it can be about monsters and the like. Including but not limited to: investigating incidents, finding people/things, driving away wild beasts, exterminating monsters, escorting caravans... The mission shouldn't be too difficult. After all, it's a genin mission, with the highest level being C. Don't be too weird, after all, it has to fit in with the world background. The name is preferably Japanese, or it can be without a surname, or something like Metky. Ouyang Tiezhu, Nicholas Zhao Si, this is definitely not possible! 😃

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The whole book is filled with all kinds of complaints. Can this kind of book become popular? People tend to write more concisely, and generally write less about psychological activities. As a result, fools like you are full of jokes and complaints. Is this Naruto?

News from this newspaper: Recently, Yin Yang Lao is recruiting Yin Yang master apprentices, please don't bother if you are not a chieftain. According to people familiar with the matter, the creature suspected to be the three-tailed creature was brutally beaten by Godzilla in the XXX area. The number of dangerous species has increased, and imperial envoys from various countries have expressed close concern. Children save the world, magical girls from all over the world, five-color teams, light messengers, pet trainers, the number of children being recruited is increasing. The World Top Chef Competition is held in the Kingdom of Whirlpool, and it is reported that legendary kitchen utensils will appear. The nine-tailed demon fox Tamamo Mae once again challenged the tailed beast Nine Tails. The location of the decisive battle between the two sides is unknown. The super-giant creature Golden Turtle is currently sleeping in the desert of the Kingdom of Sand, and there is currently no sign of waking up. The number of the flying dragon community in the Snow Kingdom increased, and the snow ninjas formed the flying dragon riders. Oversized squid is trapped in the sand, and chefs from all over the world are on their way.

Can the author write the story seriously, with less jokes and extraneous things? Write a story well and don't flatter yourself! Memes and self-deprecation that do not fit the style of the painting will only lower the quality of the work. The author wanted to make it funny, but when I saw it, I just felt it was embarrassing.

"Master, who is the most powerful thief in the world?" "It's a woman." "What woman?" "A woman who runs an inn." "Is she very good at qinggong?" "No, she doesn't know how to do qinggong." "Then her finger strength is very good?" "I guess she can do embroidery." "Then what is so powerful about this woman?" "Three years ago, the Thief Saint Bai Yutang passed through Pinggu County in Guanzhong, and his heart was stolen by her in the Tongfu Inn in Qixia Town." The Thief Saint, who once looked down on the world, accidentally met her with a cinnabar face. From then on, he worked as a waiter in a small inn, and never had any chance to be with the world. Once a storyteller came into the inn and talked about the days when the Thief Saint captured the dragon and descended to the nine heavens, stole the twelve volumes of Lingxiao, and lay on top of the clouds holding the bright moon. After the guests had enjoyed themselves, the crowd dispersed, leaving the waiter leaning against the door, making fun of the rouge on whose face? Paitan laughed about the past.

In addition to increasing strength, the author can also explore Naruto's own ninjutsu system. It develops very slowly. The breakthrough point is the seal and taijutsu. There seems to be no other taijutsu except the Eight Gate Dungeon. It is very fragmented and has no structure. The seal is the foundation of the ninja sect. It cannot be ignored. The pursuit in Naruto War I quickly threw away the basics. You can refer to the three secrets of Buddhism, the source of Ninja sect. You can't lose the seals. For building the Naruto system, I recommend watching the Naruto chapter in Endless Broken and Naruto: The Great Sensei for reference (I am not recommending books). I hope the curator can write wonderful Naruto fanfics. I like to sit and read this book.

In view of Chapter 18, book friends said it was Yuhi Hong, so I changed it to Yuhi. But when I was watching the anime, it was called Sunset Red! It's a problem with the translation team. After all, sunset and setting sun mean the same thing. Whether it's Xiri or Sunset Red, I always feel like it belongs to the elderly Yangko team! 😁 Please help me supervise you from now on. If there are any mistakes, I will correct them in time! 🤓

This novel is so poorly written. First of all, the character of Sun Wukong is handled very perfunctorily, and it does not show the despicable and shameless character of Tang Sanzang at all.       ，，，，， For example, why do bras appear in the toilets of Shaolin Temple? Why did Chen Xiang save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his mother? Who made Sha Seng's belly bigger? These questions all show that the author is not familiar with history at all.

Your poison is too strong. There are so many random things coming in. Why are the five ninja villages still so obsessed with it? Anyone who dares to come out to cause trouble will be killed in minutes.

I think that to change the Ninja Village, we need to brainwash, which is to promote that we are working hard to build a better world. If the Ninja Village can't give everyone a better life, why are we gathering together? If you want to preach to ordinary members of a big family like Hinata and Uchiha not to fight just for your own family but for the village, you have to refer to the political commissar. As we all know, a thoughtful and educated army is the strongest. It can be packaged as Ninja (funny). Ninjas with their own ideas and Ninja are the real bosses.

Does demonization and alien lands begin with the appearance of the protagonist Xingluo, or is he just a part of it? Did these mutations gradually spread around Konoha, or did they happen randomly?

Strictly speaking, there are no bad guys in Naruto. Madara wants to create a perfect world, Obito wants to create a world with Lin, Black Zetsu wants to resurrect his mother, and Kaguya just wants to resist the Otsutsuki clan.

This book is the worst one by the author. I can't stand it at all. I've read all the others.

The writing is a little too messy, with too many worldviews integrated. Moreover, the cp was too messy. Sasuke's mother was mixed with the rope tree, and the Uchiha clan was and was not exterminated, whatever. Wouldn't it be enough to just grab two of them? There are more than 1,000 Uchiha clan members, and I don't believe that there is anyone around the same age as Nawaki. And in the entire Naruto world, 3000 to 5000 people die at every turn. With this way of death, if it weren't for the addition of people from other worlds, there might have been no one in the Naruto world.

The magic reform is too serious🙄

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