I Have a World of the Dead

Good idea and interesting. Keep up the good work.

If you don't have diamonds, don't take up the porcelain job. It is recommended that you think about the plot outcome first and then work backwards. If you want to create suspense and create plot without making people feel intellectually subdued, this is the author's only way.

Well, let me express my own opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it First of all, I read the book. Because the book is very creative and the subject matter is very novel, I read it with gusto. I don't think some bugs are worth complaining about. One's thinking will inevitably lead to negligence. But to be honest, I think the pace of this book is a bit too slow. It has dozens of chapters in the first world. Although I think the characters are well drawn, the plot is a bit cliche and there are no great plots. The second thing is that this book focuses too much on the image of the supporting characters, but ignores the emotional and plot lines of the protagonist. Up to now, the protagonist does not even have many friends in the main world, or even family members, which shocked me a little. Well, that's probably it. I hope the author can speed up the pace of the book.

I saw it a little late, otherwise I think another setting could be added: "Because the protagonist is a living person, he will be affected by the world of the undead, and his vitality will be doubled every day" to stimulate the protagonist's struggle. Hahaha, it's okay. I had fun reading a few chapters.

Very nice article, please keep writing.

Nice writing 😜 keep up the good work

The above are my views on the protagonist after reading dozens of chapters.

When you go to the bank to withdraw money and there are consecutive numbers, it means that prices are going to rise. When a normally talkative classmate suddenly stops talking, it means the teacher is here. When everyone has finished eating and stops talking, it means it's your turn to pay the bill. Winning 5 million and not knowing how to spend it means it's time to wake up from the dream. When you see me typing so many words, it means that fate has come to an end and it's time to like it👍

I couldn't help but get out of bed after reading this chapter, and uttered a curse word along the way. I was wrong. I shouldn't read this book now. I should read it to gain weight. Why doesn't Qidian have a function to put a certain book in the cold palace and remind me after a certain number of words? How cool is that?

You haven't read a few chapters of any of the books, and you dare to come to bb without even seeing most of the chapters.

Why are there so many trolls? This book is all about creativity, don't worry about the small details. Do you think this book was written by a team? It must be too much for one person to think through. . .

The king of Azeroth's forced kings, Tyrion, is here.

After reading the current review and reading the comments, I have a different opinion. Someone posted that the positioning is not clear. In fact, if the character is high, the protagonist will appear less and not as strong as now. As for the frequent contact we see from the undead contractors, the author just skipped the middle time. Maybe a few contacts a month is nothing! But one thing I agree with is that why you have to go to the women's restroom in the middle of the night, it's not good to write down the contact before and after.

The writing style is okay, but it has become a construction flow, what should I say? There is no sense of mystery and the positioning of the God of Death's own strength and identity. For example, after reading a hundred chapters, the protagonist is still a loser with a 5-point combat power. This does not reflect the protagonist's intelligence at all? The author positions the protagonist to give people the feeling of a businessman. However, now that he has become the owner of the Death Plane and has no sense of his own abilities or safety, it is a bit boring to see this.

The author's results are so miserable. It's obviously very good-looking, but the author is not the author of Qidian!

The net weight of a one-yuan coin should be about 6.3 Grams, and the relative error is plus or minus 0.3 Grams The specific gravity of iron is 7.8 The specific gravity of gold is 19.32 That is to say, the same volume of gold is 15.6046 Grams Suppose the gold coin we are talking about is the same size as the steel jumper in our hands. So... Now there is a face worth one hundred billion gold coins. Question: The specific weight of face is equivalent to how many gold mines. As a plane, does the earth have such a large total gold output?

Just jump and read. I think Chapter 298 is quite interesting. I will reward you with 100 points. I hope you won't dislike it. There are also some people who like to quarrel. I, who have read a few chapters, can tell the truth. The author's writing style is actually pretty good, but the simple plot does not portray the protagonist as having a super high IQ. Even those great masters cannot cover everything. If you find it interesting, please support it. If you find it uninteresting, just delete it. There is no need to criticize others if you find it unpleasant. Make your comments more tactfully and don't always say poisonous things. Respect the fruits of other people's work. Every great god is a newcomer who comes over to comment in a civilized manner and harmoniously with you, me and others. After all, the purpose of reading novels is to relax and quarrel with others. Wouldn't it make you feel even more unhappy? Life will be happier if you relax your mind.

The protagonist is positioned as the God of Death. Have you ever seen that person called the God of Death with such a low standard? He looks like an insurance salesman. You said that if you change the painting style, you can change it to a straight-up funny one. But to be honest, the chapters I've read so far are completely indifferent. It's very embarrassing. The subject matter is okay. There is no character positioning at all, and it feels like you want to write a little bit of everything, but the result is mediocre. Either you just write it as a daily type that is more funny than death, or you use a more high-end type. If a book does not have character characteristics, it is easy for readers who are attracted by the subject matter to lose. There are few cool points in the article, no laughs, and no sense of intelligence. For example, the excuse given by the female corpse in the toilet is that she lost a bet, which is never mentioned in the article, so she went to the women's toilet. This will be very sudden to the reader. Why is it written in a different way, such as knowing that the female corpse is in the toilet? Then I went back to my roommate to bet and lost on purpose, and then I went to the women's room and pretended to find out. It would be much better. It doesn't matter if you can beat the word count and let the readers see that the pig's feet have a brain. The summary is that there is no outstanding point. The only thing is that the subject matter is okay. I hope the author will write well. Come on! I'm not a troll, I just hope the author writes good books and makes more money!

I have been a bookworm for seven years, and this work actually has a good idea (I also looked at the author's previous works), although the results are not ideal! But the author still finished writingｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧, "I really appreciate this author for this"! But due to the continuous development of Qidian, we readers have seen more and more things (I have found some small problems in many places). For example: I want to go to the women's room to look for the ghost in the mirror. 1. If I find it, how should I conquer the ghost? 2. There are ghosts in the main world, so this world should not be so peaceful. There should be some ways to deal with ghosts or there should be some restrictions on ghosts (otherwise ghosts would have done whatever they wanted) 3. The protagonist needs to have some normal people's way of thinking. At least the female ghost has said that there are so many changes. Give me. Give me. Give me.... There is only a weird rag doll and a mop, bucket, and broom in the article. It seems that the choice is ready to be made. Of course, it has been mentioned before that the protagonist has a high IQ, "But all I see is The protagonist has been doing some things that I can't understand (of course, this may be because the level of sitting is too high), but the novel is written in vernacular. If the reader has no idea what the protagonist is doing or the reader feels that his IQ is being forcibly lowered, these They are all things that should not appear I really appreciate the author's insistence that "I only write this review". I really rarely write reviews. If I don't like it, I think we old bookworms will just abandon the book. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is beautiful but the updates are so slow, no matter how full I am.

Author: I want the picture on your cover

You win! You are justice! You lose! That is evil! So justice can defeat evil!

Everyone spoke enthusiastically and put forward valuable suggestions on how to transform different types of undead. I will adopt your excellent opinions into the plot. I hope everyone can help me come up with more creative uses for the undead, and together we can transform the undead into excellent ones! 🌹🌹🌹

No matter how the protagonist upgrades, he always inexplicably encounters someone stronger than him, who has merged the fragments of the two main gods. He is still fooled by others, always assassinated by others, and then fights back. Does it make sense? Just play a routine once, there is no point in playing it all the time.

The title is new, the writing is good, but the main character is trash. The author made the protagonist, the God of Death, so rubbish. The protagonist is like a small steel ball afraid of being smashed by the egg white inside an egg. The author's writing of the protagonist, the God of Death, is so rubbish. If it weren't for the fact that there is no God of Death in reality, the author would never survive the next day.

I feel like this book digs a lot of holes. In my personal opinion, why did the last God of Death die? Another example is the continuous decline and rise of the world of Death. What about the God of Death before Death? There is also the fact that even if there is a God of Death, there must be a god who opposes him. The protagonist is wretchedly developed in the early stage, and will definitely fight with other gods in the later stage. Also, a low-demon world cannot accommodate a higher-level magic system, so what about a high-demon world? What about a more advanced world? I hope to see more pretentious and conspiratorial foreshadowing, please come on, author.

I'm driving a poor man to collect wool, and I don't even think about how much money the poor man can have. . . To compare, an item that costs one yuan can be sold for three or four yuan. If you can just sell it for three or four hundred, the business is still a monopoly. People's income is more than a few thousand, and they are still forced to spend money. It is better to find a few more people and make small profits but quick turnover. Business is all about steady stream of water, there is no way to just stare at the wool and pluck it to death. In reality, this kind of business will definitely not make a profit.

I suddenly discovered that the author actually updates very quickly because one chapter exceeds two chapters of others, so there are actually four updates a day, right?

I stopped reading after reading the character introduction. I was very surprised. Why did the author of Qidian write a strange little girl in the book? Why? How loving are they? Is there no place for their love? Do they have to create such a character to pamper? It's so strange.

I want to say that I have 9 monthly votes. Will I get more points if I vote once? ? ?