Lord of the Black Forest

The female character of Caroline is very unpleasant, and using such an annoying female character to promote the plot completely outweighs the gain.

He couldn't move when he saw a woman, and he even blocked the knife for her, haha, a romantic novel

The writing is a bit dry, the captain is a bit strange, and the protagonist has no goals.

At the beginning, the teammate who didn't know whether he was the heroine or the supporting girl was very unreliable. I had a casual chat with the protagonist who didn't know the details. I felt that it was almost the same as the information I had visited. Then he took it back and asked me to be my teammate. His behavior was rough and rough. I felt like a little girl who was thrown into the internship in her teens. This girl was like a friend... I couldn't trust her as a teammate. She also joined the organization directly without any assessment or test, and she didn't trust the entire administrative system.

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How should I put it? It's okay to let a woman block the knife for the protagonist. It's not OK for the protagonist to block the knife for another woman. It's a licking dog!

It feels like the Lord of Stealing Gods and the Lord of Mysteries

I originally had a good introduction to the book, so I wanted to read it, but after reading it for a month, I didn't write anything and it was like a eunuch.

Brother, please stop writing

As the first novel written by the author, the quality is considered to be excellent, come on