Abyss of Stars

I hope the author can fix the personality of each character. There is one detail that I am a little concerned about, that is, the word Yu Hanyi uses when he laughs is shy, well... How should I put it, it is a bit inappropriate. What's more, after all, what novice writers want is writing experience, and these are already available through writing, so the most important thing is persistence, so please give it a try, author! A few more words. I remember that last time I posted something similar to a friend who is new to writing, and then he decisively gave up updating it within two days of posting. I was speechless at the time - however, authors should not be influenced by readers. They should write according to their own situation if they can continue writing. If they cannot continue writing, they should wait until they have time and mood to continue. To put it bluntly, it doesn't matter whether a newbie's writing is good or not, nor does it matter whether anyone can read it. If you convey your ideas in the way you can, there will be no regrets in this trip! 🌹🌹🌹

I knew my writing was terrible, and I wanted to improve it, so I wrote four thousand words every day. But I found that I made no progress at all. Can you guys suggest me some ways. Thank you 🥺