Be My Disciple

I still hope that this book will be written. It is my favorite master style, such as the ancestor. It would be best to write more characters. Don't waste this subject by writing it as a one-person fantasy.

The story about the three apprentices is really bad. The protagonist saves her and teaches her how to cultivate herself. But soon she dares to contradict the protagonist. The author still has a soft spot for her. Isn't it fun to be the first apprentice and the second apprentice? Or is it because the third apprentice is a woman and has been staring at writing

He hates Yan Qiuxue, he is very murderous, he claims to be protecting his sister, but he always hurts his sister's body, he is self-righteous, he always gives up, he seduced Luan Xue'er, but he never mentioned it later, and she even harmed the other person's pregnancy and made Yan Rouxue take the blame! 😤

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The third and fourth apprentices are simply a failure. Without these two apprentices, the quality of this book would be much higher.

Accepting that old man as an apprentice at the beginning is a qualified start, but accepting that woman as an apprentice instantly became a third-rate novel

Things were going well up front, but Luan Xueer jumped off a cliff to persuade him to quit. As a teacher, there is an innocent person who didn't reflect on himself at all because his apprentice died? As if nothing happened, is this immortal so self-centered?

I like this book very much. Well, I would like to give you some advice. Although the protagonist is very difficult in the early stage and lacks resources, he still needs to have dignity and cannot lower his status to grab the things of the younger generation. (Even if you rob, there should be a disguise) Also, I hope there won't be any ambiguous plot between the protagonist and the female disciple. This really shouldn't happen! Once a teacher, always a father. I really can't stand it when a father and his daughter get together. Yes, I like Chang Qing and Xuan Yi very much, and I hope they can have more scenes. In short, I hope Shan Chan can write a better story.

Luan Xueer must be too miserable. Why did the protagonist abuse her so much? I didn't tell her before she was alive. She jumped off a cliff and died, and her soul was imprisoned and she was tortured every day with thousands of swords piercing her heart. Luan Xueer did something so outrageous that she deserves to suffer like this.

My focus is not on female disciples, but on the little ants and saplings. How could it be so fun for a female disciple to cultivate little ants and saplings? But that's not why I don't have a girlfriend.