Travel Through Time and Space to Become an Immortal

I originally thought I could continue reading, but it turned out that the heroine set by the author was a top academic in modern times, and after time travel, she was a genius in cultivating immortals. However, in Chapter 38, the heroine repeatedly denied the age of the body she traveled to, and she lacked knowledge in cultivating immortals. I tried to figure it out myself, but I wandered around leisurely, and the questions I asked were either childish or stupid. The author wanted to use characters in the book to explain the question of cultivating immortality raised by the heroine, but it made people feel a bit long-winded, and made people feel that the heroine was an idiot instead of a crazy person. After seeing everyone's previous book reviews, they said that this article was pretty good, so I decided to read it as if it were a story. I barely made it to Chapter 40, and the result. . . . The author is very sorry, I can't stand it any more and abandoned the article.

The literary talent is very rich and the sense of substitution is strong. After reading a few chapters, people can't help but continue reading. It is a great book However, the paragraphs in the first few chapters are a bit long, which will give people a feeling of being pieced together. Friendly reminder: But adjust it appropriately! Come on, I wish your writing career will get better and better, and your novels will get better and better Xiaoxian will pay attention to you silently~ Come on!

Xiaobai has the beauty of Xiaobai, and the taste of greenness. The author's writing still has feelings. As long as it is not pretentious or mentally retarded, the article should be logical and in-depth. Although the writing style is a bit clumsy, it is still very interesting 😁

Hui's heart is dull, with jade appearance and crimson lips. Huixin, it turns out to be such a good name😃😃

The article is good, the story is new, I have collected it and voted for it. I offer you 100 coins to express your support and congratulate the author on his third new book, which is a huge hit🔥! Come on, author!

I envy the heroine, who has reached the pinnacle of life easily 🤓

Emm, this article is a bit new, and the first 10 chapters feel like a daily novel, a bit wordy, and I don't really like stories with male protagonists, because many people can't grasp the IQ of the male and female protagonists, supporting roles, and villains, so I can only say sorry.

I like spring, it brings vitality to people, I like this place, it brings joy to people! Recommend a good book "Pan Shi Zhuan" to my friends!

Yesterday's fifth update, awesome, lots of explosions, come on!

The kind-hearted heroine was deceived by Xiao Hei 🤭

Great book! Already added to bookshelf! Come on!

12 Putts. Recommend, vote for support, seek, refine. Magnificent

Is the author obsessed with word count😳😳😳

The author Jun borrowed the words of the heroine to ask about his knowledge of the world of immortality, and also explained the setting of the author's novel. However, he turned a modern rational academic master into an ignorant and fearless silly Tianbai! Let's analyze the changes in the heroine's mentality: In modern times, the heroine lives in the present - studying hard to get scholarships, working hard to earn money, studying to support herself, which shows that the heroine is mature, rational and even realistic in her thinking! Even though several sisters in the dormitory had fantasized about traveling through time, she was the only one not looking forward to it! As a result, she accidentally traveled through time! Except for just arriving in this world, I felt confused when I got lost in the mountains and wilderness. However, from the moment I met Master Yu, I became a talkative person even before I became a disciple. My excitement, enthusiasm, and liveliness have never diminished... Except that I don't have the awe that I should have for the unknown world, and I don't have the precautions that an orphan should have for strange environments and strange things! In fact, if it were the other sisters in the dormitory, any one of them might behave like this, but the heroine should not! This is a character created by the original family (environment) and formed in the modern world for almost 20 years. How can it be explained by the author's bacteria-releasing oneself? ! I thought it was just a transitional stage. Just wait until the heroine realizes that this is a world of immortal cultivation, starts practicing and integrates into the life here! As a result, after practicing for several years, I have gone down the mountain, but I am still ignorant, fearless (heartless) and behave like an idiot! Okay, I don't like this kind of heroine. As for her subsequent experience in the world of immortality, I won't force it.

I saw it accidentally, it's well written.

Reward 100 points to encourage the author😍😍

Didn't this heroine join a sect? Why did she join that family again? A sect is a sect and a family is a family. What does joining a sect have to do with her family? Don't just pull into the family when you see something good, and make plans when others don't understand.

A new day, a new starting point, come on!

After reading Chapter 13, I can't stand it anymore. Is the heroine going to be silly and sweet?

I feel like a newbie rising to immortality! Identification completed

I scanned the previous chapters a little and suggested not to use too many exclamation points in the dialogue.

After reading this book and seeing some of the heroine's behaviors, I was a little curious about what kind of person the author was. A somewhat naive and cute heroine, what kind of person should her author be? They must also be students. Only students can write such articles, which is quite interesting.

A relatively newbie, he didn't even understand it yet, but he actually picked up a child to raise. It's not that I don't agree with helping others, it's just that you should have a certain attitude. If you raise a child, you may be responsible for his food, clothing, housing, transportation, etc. If a tiger appears in the wilderness with a child, you are sure that this child has no enemies or anything. Your body is still a child, so you are sure that you want to raise this child.