Elf NPC Counterattack

The sauce is bubbling, and the roof of this building is lifted by the author.

The characters in the plot are all fine. I hope the male protagonist won't be too virginal or too cold-blooded. It's best if the people around the male protagonist all appear in the original work instead of just adding a bunch of characters. Finally, I hope there will be a female protagonist in the back and I wish the author good luck with the book 🙂.

I don't know if it's a system delay or something else. I voted for recommendation but the total number hasn't changed. I refreshed it several times and it's still the same.

I have only read more than 20 chapters, why do I feel that the probability of the heroine appearing is a bit low.

I've read a lot of Pokémon fanfics, and the Stygmies in them are all assassins. Can the author make a tank Stygmy?

"Player Lanping, what is your secret to becoming a champion?" "I think that today's trainers are too impetuous and have not realized what a trainer should really do." "Then what should a real trainer do?" "A trainer is like a coach who trains professional players. He makes a plan before the game and makes ban selections for the game. Then he should let go and let the players perform freely. You think so, meow meow. ?" "Meow (fart)!" "It seems that Lanping Champion's main force Miao Miao also agrees with this point of view. Lanping Champion's fighting method allows the elves to play their own style and show their own characteristics. It is really a breath of fresh air among many mediocre trainers!" "That's natural. Trainers who can shout out skills don't realize how they can know themselves better than the elves themselves. What about me? That just exposes the stupidity of the elves' tactics. I only need to use my excellent vision, make decisive operations (quickly avoid), and send encouragement to the elves (stand up!). I believe that my elves work very hard for one minute on the field! It is the tacit understanding and bond between me and them that allows us to crush those who can only improvise. The speculative trainer!" "Champion Lanping's speech is really enlightening and thought-provoking! In other words, are all the outstanding performances of Miao Miao planned in advance?" "Yes, all the changes in the battlefield are under my control!" "Thank you, Champion Lanping, for taking the time to accept my interview. Audiences in front of the TV, have you learned?"

At present, I think the biggest problem is that the plot is too complicated, biting off more than one can chew, and the writing is too scattered. The protagonist subdues and cultivates the elves, then guides the players, and completes the settings of this pm game world for the readers. Then he intrigues and cultivates relationships with various famous characters, and then fights and pretends to publish papers. Then he has to follow the system and run tasks to get rewards. He also has to build an industry, be a profiteer and deceive players, and write about the psychological activities of other characters, each player's own thoughts, forums, and the personal experiences of some players. The plot advancement and player activities keep the protagonist and author busy, and here they have to complete various world settings. The result is the same situation as the previous two highlights. So many chapters have been written, but the plot seems to have not moved forward. The core of PM articles include the bond between the elves and the protagonist, the protagonist's own character, how the protagonist trains the elves through special methods, each elf's own story, and how the protagonist's strength suddenly improves. Perhaps the author has written all of these in the article, but they are submerged in countless other plots, and it is difficult for readers to feel that these plots exist.

Personal review, don't interrupt if you don't like it Hongyin's tactical understanding has always led the trend, but I always feel that the new characters and forces are often not deep enough. Hong Yin Da Da's story has a large background pattern, with different forces and characters fighting against each other, but due to limitations of writing and length, it feels not in-depth enough. Because different new characters and forces always pop up all at once, it is difficult to understand without knowledge. Since this book also has more "player" camps, how to deal with it is very difficult. Personally, I prefer to focus on the original characters, and extend the background and elves, which will be more attractive. For example, Boss Itaki's personality charm is very attractive, and the kings of various hall owners are the best if they can be used. They have always been soy sauce in the past. Insert a small number of original characters so that readers can gradually become familiar with them. They can interact with each other through dungeons and fight bosses, which will make people more profound. The swords from the past are better. On the contrary, I have been telling the story of the player recently, and I haven't said a few words about the protagonist and the elves, which makes me tired. The protagonist and the elves didn't have much time to get along before they were able to command and fight the boss easily. It felt too easy. Above

Elf scholars and elf experts at this time still have an extremely insufficient understanding of the entire elves. Although there are various sponsorships and investments from alliances, companies, or other forces, the progress is not very great. Dr. Omu is one of the founders of the Elf Illustrated Book, but even he is just a rookie among scholars now. He has not yet become the number one scholar in Kanto and the number one authority in the world of elf learning ten years from now. The steel type has not been classified into a single type from the ground type and rock type, and the evil attributes have not been discovered. Most scholars and trainers still believe that the super and ghost types restrain each other. Ibrahimovic still only believes that there are only three evolutionary types, and the fairy attribute is out of the question. Some fairy type moves are still classified in the normal type. If the elf world is a real world, then the elf attributes should belong to certain regional elves. Only a few regional elves have dominant attributes (even elves of the same species in most areas are not born with this attribute). At least a very small number in Alola and Kalos have this attribute. Therefore, dragon-type moves are still effective for these elves, and have not been discovered. Sporadic cases have also been ignored, and elves who can perform elf-type moves do not know that they have inherited this ability, let alone develop attack-type moves. Research on Pokmon characteristics is still in its earliest stages. Some trainers may have discovered the abilities of their own elves based on long-term running-in with their own elves, but they have not realized that this is a universal talent. Regarding the evolution of elves, it will take more than ten years for intimacy evolution and mastery skill evolution to be discovered. Most trainers and scholars only discovered that these elves will suddenly evolve at a certain moment, which is completely unreasonable and discoverable. Some elves evolve when they are very weak, and some are still strong after being trained by trainers. Evolution at a specific location is even more impossible to discover. Evolution with props is somewhat obvious. The source is the Joey clan. Almost all the lucky eggs are in the Joey clan. How to evolve from the good luck eggs would be strange if they didn't know. Moreover, it is a secret that is not passed down by the Joey clan. There are very few outsiders of the Joey family, but someone should still start to study this. Mega evolution started more than ten years later. Mega evolution stones should still be discovered at this time, but they are just regarded as rare collections from ancient times. Although their value is quite high, they are not as expensive as they will be in the future. Beautiful elves like Menas are still considered to have nothing to do with Ugly Fish. The few discovered Menas are all wild and are rare elves from the Hoenn and Sinnoh regions. Because they must meet the conditions of beauty value and beautiful scales, beautiful scales are now only rare collections from the sea. The protagonist knows all this, but the problem is that it doesn't matter if he discovers it once or twice. If an ordinary person discovers it too many times, there will be problems. Sakaki will take action against the protagonist. Even if the protagonist tries his best to hide it, the secret will be leaked sooner or later. If you keep these secrets in your stomach, you will still be a time traveler. If you don't cause trouble, you will still be a time traveler.

Has the author offended someone? Why is the new book blocked?

I'll post the format here, follow your own ideas

I still want to complain, why do I open a new pit after half of a book is written? After the pit is opened, the updates are very slow, and it is easy to get into the palace.

It's true, but I hope it won't be too dark. My favorite is the Pokémon TV version~ I hope it won't be too conspiratorial. After reading a few chapters of the last book, I thought it was too forced, and many people couldn't get it. I hope the author will adopt it~

If the new book can be unblocked, the author will continue to work hard⊙∀⊙!

Ibrahimovic's face turned pale and instantly caused drama. . . Author: Although I can't write a book, I know that Eevee in Pokemon has hair all over her face. Can you use another word to describe it?

Just dock the tail immediately? ? ? ?

It was a book with a good premise at the beginning, but it ended badly.

Why doesn't the author write about the advent of elves' reality~🤭

What the hell? You could just delete it and rewrite it.

The protagonist is too useless, I have no desire to continue watching. He needs good looks but no good looks, but no strength. He was defeated by a girl who got the elf for the first time in the early stage. Don't tell me about talent. There is no logic at all. How can you have talent and still have to train? It's like a genius who is a loser at birth. Can college students please use some logic?

Sorry for asking a question that has nothing to do with this book in the discussion forum. Why did Kirigakure get a 404? When will it come out?

It's a good book, why is it a eunuch? Are there any benefits to having a hasty ending?

Is this book about a group of women who are next to the male protagonist and have no wives?

Is this book still alive?

Meow Meow can learn evil-type moves, but if it doesn't work, he can get the Moon Elf out in advance. After all, the first thing to do when getting Eevee at this time is to use the Three Evolution Stones to get the three evolutionary types. Ice Elf and Leaf Elf need environmental influence, while Moon Elf and Sun Elf need a certain environment to get in touch with each other (one is illuminated by the sun, and the other is illuminated by moonlight). The Soothing Bell will not be worth much at this time. After all, no one knows about intimate evolution. At most, it is a prop that can make the elf feel comfortable. The myth of the invincibility of superpowers and ghosts was broken. A new type of elf, the moon elf, appeared that was completely immune and restrained both. Then the sun elf was discovered. Eevee's evolutionary forms increased to five. As for the remaining three, they will probably not be discovered for a long time in the future, and a new evil attribute was confirmed.

Well, now that the author has let himself go, what do you think? 😏

I have a question. Sirona, the protagonist, and Donggang are the same age, and Donggang is about the same age as Wu Neng. It feels scary after thinking about it. When Xiaogang saw Sirona in the future, he wanted to call Obasan, which made him extremely worried.

Speaking of combination skills I really think we should use a combination of enhanced punch + close combat

I want to say where is the new book hanging here? Why can't I find it?