Fists Unbound

Both of them agree. I want to know what kind of book Kangkang is 😏

Came here from some book review section. With two subscriptions, I wrote something on a whim ten years ago. After more than one hundred subscriptions, I committed suicide. I can't hold on until I finish 30 words, but you can make one million, 🐮!

Dear friends, if you are lucky enough to find this book, I hope you can add it to your collection. If you are lucky enough to find it interesting, I hope you can pass it on to the next two recommendation votes. If God bless your soul and you find it touching, I hope you can call your friends and come to support me. I'm so hospitable, Yu Qiannan looks at all the friends coming towards the world in the book. I also try my best to bring this red heart and a cup of aftertaste to my friends.

Let's take a look at the style of Million Words and Two Subscriptions. I haven't read the book yet, but all the supporting characters like you pig's feet are men. What are you thinking?

The male coach is not handsome. He is not handsome and has no sense of substitution.

I read the book for work reasons, so I'm surprised that no one has read this book. In my opinion, there are many reasons. It can be seen from the beginning that it wants to follow traditional martial arts, but it can also be seen from the middle that it wants to add mythological concepts to turn the tide. But, the plot is slow, inconsistent, and the narrative is long-winded, which is terrible for a novel. From what I can tell, I wasn't even interested in what the main character was doing at the beginning. I was given a divination and read it after more than a dozen chapters, but I immediately lost interest in reading it. Later, I just got a feel for the protagonist, Hao Gongming appeared, and after more than ten chapters, I immediately went crazy. I know you want to write a group drama, but you have to have a protagonist. You can use the protagonist as a narrator to take everyone to see their story, but you can't throw away the protagonist and start a new one. The second is that the plot is repetitive. Fighting is indeed necessary, but fighting for the sake of fighting is very boring. The main plot relies entirely on fighting, the characterization is weak, and there is no emotional drama. Not to mention in the middle and later stages, people die for the sake of dead people, one after another. Martial arts are inherently unpopular. When you plan to write martial arts, you should have the awareness that no one will read it, make no compromises, and tell a good story. It's a pity that in the end, we both made compromises and failed to tell a good story.

Come and read the sacred book with a million words written by both of them.

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I came here to review the book, and both of them ordered what book they would like to read The phoenix will come when the sky is high, and the flowers and butterflies will come.

I never dreamed that book reviews would bring so many people here