Time in Life

It's well written. Let me give you some suggestions from a reader's perspective. 1 You have quoted a lot of famous quotes and other words in your works. I have to admit that this is great. It also shows that you have sufficient literary reserves. Make good use of this. It is good that you added these, but maybe you should consider some of the public's ideas? Many people have not heard of these famous quotes. This will prevent some readers from being interested in reading, which will lead to a decrease in reading volume. Maybe you don't agree with me, but it wouldn't be a bad thing to refer to it as a suggestion, right? 2 I can't tell the style of your work. It looks like a novel and a prose, and the chapters are too loosely connected and very abrupt. 3 Your work seems a bit jerky. I can't say it is correct, but it is not interesting to read. Some sentences in your article are also a bit difficult to understand. Perhaps it is for my personal reasons that it is a bit difficult to read your article. 4 I can't see the purpose of your work. It may be an oversight, but I hope it can attract your attention. This is my opinion. I hope you can read it carefully. I believe you will succeed. ————From an unknown writer.

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Come on, while reading your article, I am also thinking about the meaning of my life. It is very interesting. My personal motto is: laugh at everything and enjoy life. It's really interesting. I will always follow you. Don't let me down. Don't let everyone down.