Luanya Bang

The writing is very good~ Come on＾0＾~

It is an exercise book. From a reader's perspective, this book has problems such as "loose plot", "jumping scenes", and "insufficient character creation". Some problems can be remedied by fine-tuning, but revising may take longer than updating the chapter. Therefore, update first and then repair. This book will go through numerous revisions. The revision process can be understood as the growth process of the author, accumulating experience for future creations. Please forgive me 🙏 2019.3.14 Revision: some scene details in the first volume have been beautified, fighting details have been slightly adjusted, and the process of Shuqiu giving the sword has been added, but the plot has not changed. Revision content on March 22, 2019: The text in Chapters 1 to 5 of Volume 2 has been optimized, word order, grammatical errors and typos have been revised, and a small number of detailed descriptions have been fixed. The plot has not changed. Revision content on March 23, 2019: The plot, description, and settings of Chapters 6 to 9 of Volume 2 have been optimized for better understanding, and the plot has not changed.