Pepper and Luck

It feels pretty good, good luck to the author! I voted for you

I would like to name the difficult star below.

After reading the first chapter, I was a little confused. What is the name of this protagonist? Now it's fifty-two, and now it's forty-nine. You should give me an accurate number. After reading Chapter 2, what is this? Interjection? The plot jumps too fast, making people confused as to what is going on. This first chapter is really a bit poisonous, so I suggest you just tell it honestly. After reading the next few chapters, there are a lot of useless side details. Some unnecessary details that have little to do with the protagonist can be just touched upon. The plot and writing focus on the protagonist. The beginning must be clear, so as not to overwhelm the reader. Advance the topic quickly, otherwise the beginning may seem a bit delayed. Finally, "The Wonderful World of Fantasy" welcomes mutual comments ಠಠ

I was told that the name was not suitable, so I just changed it...

This is the cover...

The author will update soon, it's very interesting