Escape from the Kuiper Belt

I have to say that the author's language skills and literary literacy are very high, but some shortcomings in scientific knowledge are still quite troublesome. Although Qiding has everything, QWQ should be encouraged to see such a serious science fiction film. However, hard science fiction must first have a relatively solid scientific foundation. Some of the things the author writes are really not in line with current knowledge... Take the opening chapter as an example. Stars can evolve into white dwarfs, neutron stars, and even black holes in their twilight years. But black holes, as one of the stars that stars may evolve into in their twilight years, have a lower mass limit. Only stars exceeding this mass have the opportunity to collapse into black holes. At least I have never heard of a neutron star that can become a black hole... Unless someone artificially compresses it to the Schwarzschild radius... Another example is the issue of day and night on the earth. Is it locked by the sun's tide or something... I don't quite understand... The disaster caused by the earth stopping its autobiography does not use the sun, and can directly wipe humans from the earth. .... There are also hydrogen energy cars, which makes me feel internally injured... The elements are not conserved... Who does the hydrogen combine with when the oxygen escapes... There are many more that I won't list. In short, I have a humble opinion. I don't want to argue, but I just hope that the author can improve this aspect, because if there are too obvious common sense mistakes in hard science fiction, I will be discouraged... At a glance, there are many shortcomings in hard science fiction, and I feel quite embarrassed. But I hope the author can continue writing QWQ

Starting point: There are too few hard-core science fictions out there right now, so it's not easy to have one, but I just can't help it. One: Objects with 0.8-1.4 Times the mass of the sun can only evolve into white dwarfs in their later years. The electron degeneracy pressure can support them and stop collapsing. This is called the Chandrasekhar limit.       1.4-3.2， This is called Oppenheimer's limit! Objects with more than 3.2 Times the mass of the sun will evolve into black holes! Excuse me, are you almost ready for basic physics? Something with a mass ten times that of the sun will definitely evolve directly into a black hole. How about "turning into a dead star, emitting a large mass of material and evolving into the sun". None of this makes any sense? Two: A black hole with ten times the mass of the sun is not even a third-rate black hole. The black hole in the center of the Milky Way, that is, "Sagittarius A" is 4.3 Million times the sun, and it has not done anything to the Milky Way. There is also a bigger "M87"! A black hole with a mass of 6.5 Billion times the sun has an event horizon of only 19.1906 Billion kilometers. At a speed of 300,000 kilometers per second, the event horizon is only 64 light seconds! A black hole ten times the size of the sun can extend the event horizon to seven light-years? In the world of black holes, what is it? Please! At least check out the basic astronomy knowledge before reading this book. Although everyone knows that novels cannot be taken seriously, you still have to be logical and consistent.

Can you continue writing? I think the settings in the first two chapters have common sense issues, unless I write about fantasy in the future.

This book was a bit slow at the beginning and I couldn't read it. Moreover, it is written like popular science, and the dialogues and psychological activities are not rich enough, and it is a bit watery. However, I have a lot of scientific terminology, and I have a lot of strength and savings. I hope to express better fantasy results in my unrestrained science fiction novels to satisfy our curiosity about the world and even the universe.

This chapter says it's gone once it's fired, so I'll just say it here. This book should be a bit of hard science fiction, right? Isn't it true that you don't understand what some of the comments say? That is to say, after a star dies, it turns into a black hole and kills the sun, causing the destruction of eight planets in the solar system, including the earth. The last alien left on the original star comes to earth to help save the earth. He chooses the male protagonist named Hai Ge to cooperate. Hai Ge is an orphan. I guess the aliens may later help him take revenge. Of course, the aliens can live for hundreds of millions of years probably because of some hibernation technology. In fact, it is really good-looking. The key is that I like it because of its big brain!

This book seems to have the feel of a Verne novel, but it is also in line with the current aesthetic of novels. It is not bad and can be read into.

The serious bug that appears in the first chapter of this science fiction novel greatly affects reading The sun itself rotates, and it is still rotating around the center of the galaxy. The orbit of the sun around the galaxy is regarded as an upward line (the universe does not exist up and down), and the earth circles this line and spirals upward chasing the sun. No matter how fast or slow the sun rotates, as long as the earth's rotation is still the same speed, the earth's day and night cycle will still be the same time.

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The first two chapters are necessary to set the stage, otherwise you won't be able to understand it. This is definitely not a beginner's article because you can't just read it from the middle, but it's very interesting to read along. Please keep up the good work, the author😊

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The writing is quite good, and I like the style very much, but this sci-fi is a bit too hard, and there are too many weird settings added by humans. Many sci-fis start out quite helplessly, and the scientific quality of the writing is not enough. The articles written with good logic and smooth settings are almost like a running account.

Let me talk about the author's major issues in the first chapter. First of all, the earth cannot stop spinning, because at the moment of stopping, many things on the earth will be thrown out of the earth instantly, just like a sudden brake. Think about it, we have to move 40,000 miles a day on the earth. The speed is so great that cars cannot compare. If it stops slowly, the scene from the movie The Wandering Earth will appear. Secondly, no matter how much the sun itself rotates, its relative position to the earth will not change. For example: You run around a glowing ball and you rotate one circle per second. Suddenly the glowing ball started spinning on its own. It does not affect at all the light received by a certain part of your body at a certain time. If your eyes only have a 180-degree viewing angle, then your eyes will look at the luminous ball every one-half second. To sum up, the author himself does not understand science, and we, the readers, do not understand science either. (Also if the earth slowly stops spinning, the tides will scare you to death. I was afraid that the water from the Pacific Ocean would come over and drown me in Sichuan. The volcano would rush out from under my butt.)

I can't tell, maybe it's too hard to chew. Maybe the author wants to write a classical science fiction flow, but it looks more like a personal hero flow.

Heaven and earth are paper and I am a pen, writing songs and poems in the world! Hua Da's acceptance speech moved me so much that I thought there was no acceptance speech waiting here 😜 Is it because quiet people are particularly easy to impress others? Each of your books is full of true feelings, I can't help but praise it! But you are also really a quiet author

The book has been signed and is going through the process. Book friends, hurry up and invest 🤝

I would like to give you a suggestion: put the background introduction at the end and the specific plot at the beginning. This way the book will at least become a small hit, although the current results are barely passable.

The title of the book Escape from Kuiper makes people want to read it, but isn't there also the Oort Nebula? That's the boundary of the solar system, right?

It's rare to see an author fan of Jules Verne, come on, come on

Excuse me... Did I enter the wrong book?

After reading a few chapters, the author just focused on writing about the extremely advanced technology in the future, but completely ignored the feasibility of large-scale promotion.

Science fiction is not a popular science article, and it does not need to be as impeccable as a popular science article. The literary nature and interest of the work are the most attractive elements for readers. I have always seen the latest published chapters in this book and think that the scientific basis is sufficient, and the literary quality and interest are excellent. Of course, there are a few places where scientific theories are borrowed and they can be perfected with slight modifications. Even so, some online readers say they can't understand it?

I think I have discovered the best science fiction book from Qidian, I really like it!

Is there something wrong with Pig's Knuckle's head? He didn't understand anything the Crooked Star Man said, or is he forgetting everything he heard? It's just that he doesn't understand gravity and has never heard of tidal force? In the information age, are you a savage in the mountains?

What is the setting of the protagonist? It's the future world, and you don't even know what a black hole is? And a game of chicken is popping up? Is the protagonist a time traveler or a local resident?

I think it's pretty good. I'll fatten it up before slaughtering it.

There is a question: the sun's collapse should form a white dwarf, not a neutron star (Chapter 2), I hope I didn't see it clearly 🤐 The gravitational field of a neutron star is indeed strong, but it should not form a black hole. I remember that the principle of black hole formation is a super supernova explosion (the term should be correct) rather than the gravitational field of a neutron star that distorts space and time is in Chapter 2 Don't hit me, (I really hope I didn't see it clearly) 😁

When I read the first and second chapters, I was instantly confused. I thought Teacher Liu Cixin had started the book. Then, I exited and took a look, the author was not Teacher Liu! I went back to watch it again, and I collapsed instantly. What was going on with the protagonist? [The persecution paranoia is too serious! Another point is that the author's description of the starting point of the protagonist's birth is too low-end. Living in a world where aircraft are flying in the sky, one does not know many things, so what is the use of this protagonist? Is it just to highlight a group of people who never have enough to eat or learn no matter how developed the society is? [I have to say that if this is a movie script and a TV series, then this movie will at least be a good movie like "The Wandering Earth" or "The Martian"! Unfortunately, from the perspective of the novel, it is a bit too much, too much, and I can't understand many parts. I feel that the protagonist is naive, and his IQ is like those naive heroes in the Avengers. I won't cry until I see the coffin!

Finished? So fast, just in time to start slaughtering 😁

This book will be on the shelves tomorrow. The release time has been changed from 9 am to after 12 noon. Please forgive me! If you want to invest, hurry up, there will be book coins tomorrow! 🙏

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