Nightmare Corrosion

The latest chapter should be the original transformation into a fairy. Upstairs, the author writes it very carefully, and the story's bright and dark lines are very exciting. Coming from the West to the East, I feel like I am a god in the prehistoric times. The book review area and this chapter say that a group of people are chattering. If you don't like it, just go to the upper right corner. If you look at the free book and criticize the author, you can love whoever you want. People who don't usually post book reviews just can't stand it anymore. Come on, author!

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist is becoming more and more brainless, and the supporting characters are basically above the IQ level. Watching a good book slowly turn into a stinker makes me feel heartbroken.

The further back I look, the more tired I feel boring

The halo of the protagonist is a bit obvious. It is normal for the author to give the halo to the protagonist. After all, the protagonist is still the protagonist if he does not have the halo. But you must have foreshadowing. Whether there is foreshadowing or not is two different things. Without foreshadowing, it feels like the author is forcibly completing the plot. Let's talk about the protagonist's blood. The protagonist feels like he knows everything. He knows what his blood does. He also knows that his blood can affect others. Of course, it may be that the author took it too much for granted and didn't write it out, thinking that readers might also think about it. An author is most afraid of self-pleasure. He thinks that the plot arrangement is perfect, but it may not be so in the eyes of our readers. Foreshadowing is important.

The author still takes things for granted when writing books. The background is well written, but the protagonist is too little polished and the logic does not make sense. I suggest you start writing more slowly in the future and not be too hasty.

How did you fight? I think there should be an average order of 1,000 to 500. 😁

After reading more than 20 chapters, there are many minor points, the plot is still a bit confusing, I can't distinguish the priorities, and there are inconsistencies. Is there no outline for writing a book?

Come on, author, don't be influenced by some boring people. I'm sure you 😁 your book is very good and worth your time to read.

The writing is quite good, more to my liking. I hope the author's outline will not collapse and he can write it well. I look forward to the drama of gods and demons after the world merges.

Come on, author. The book is very good. Don't pay attention to the trolls.

A pretty good book, the author takes his time

The book is actually pretty good, you can read it if you are in a book shortage. The protagonist is a rookie at the beginning, very much a rookie, and his IQ is a bit low. Later, it started slowly, day by day, day by day. At the beginning, this chapter was said to be very discouraging, because many people couldn't stand the protagonist's stupidity at the beginning, and then scolded the protagonist and the author. So when choosing this book, don't think about reading interesting articles. The early stage will be mediocre, but the later stage will be tough. In general, it's okay. The supporting characters generally have higher IQs than the protagonists.

I read a few of them and found that the author's writing was pretty good. For a novice, the writing style is pretty good. The book friends at Qidian are all literary giants. Some of the comments in the comment section are really discouraging, but I generally believe what I see. Don't the authors of some comments delete them?

I just finished reading the first ten chapters and it feels good. I will wait until chapter 11 is completed before reading further.

Limited exemption, you are about to take off 🤭

This book has the potential to become a god 👍👍

According to the collection evaluation, you, the author, have risen. The minimum monthly income is 6,000 😐, which was a bit disappointing to me at first 🔪

I, Lu En, am the protagonist. I am hiding nearby and watching the fight between you two. After the fight, I will come to collect the corpses, but I know that I am just an innocent person, so you people who kill me are bringing disaster to Chiyu. I am unreasonable and not a good person. Damn it. Thirty years of Hedong, Three Years Ten years in Hexi, I must teach you all a lesson in the future, and tell them that I have an old father and a lovely sister, and tell them not to cause trouble, let alone threaten me with my family, otherwise they will be asking for death 😒

During this period, Xianyu was reading everyone's opinions. Except for the mindless comments, I wrote them down in a small notebook while rolling around, trying not to make these mistakes again. However, Xianyu is indeed a novice in coding, and I just read a lot of novels, so some You can only notice the problem after you write it down (the gap between writing novels and reading novels is really huge...). Originally, everyone responded that I wanted to revise the article, but after thinking about it, it might get worse the more I revise it, so I'll leave it to everyone 😭 I would also like to thank my friends who support Xianyu. Thank you for giving me encouragement and motivation. I will try my best to write a good story. For those friends who have no choice but to leave, Xianyu can only roll around and watch you go away. After all, it is difficult to reconcile with everyone. Xianyu is not a talented player, and he cannot write stories and plots that everyone likes (so desperate). He can only accumulate slowly. Friends who can't bear to leave, you can also leave paw prints below to see how many book friends I will lose, and by the way, encourage myself to try to bring you back one day (but don't criticize people~) (I've been a little heartbroken by all kinds of bad reviews recently, I hope everyone will be merciful, thank you all)

Recently, I have been seriously reading. Xianyu has received more than ten modified (deleted) website comments, but I don't have time to go back one by one and compare what is missing. I would like to ask all the book friends to leave a message after they find out, so that Xianyu can go back and modify it. Thank you all!

After reading half of it, I still want to read it, but I have to complain about it. Throughout the whole text, I feel that the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. Although the writing is okay, the handling of various details makes the protagonist feel a bit stupid. One of them is that the protagonist peeks from the side and keeps saying that he has been harmed by the fish pond. He feels very wronged, no! It's like you are watching from the sidelines when two groups of gangsters are fighting. At the very least, you need to be mentally prepared. If you don't have the absolute strength to peek from the sidelines, others will hit you if they don't. You have to be prepared for this when you are peeping, after all, the people inside are not ordinary people. This is written unreasonably. Moreover, the protagonist is not prepared enough. He clearly knows that the people inside can kill him at any time, and he does not even have the most basic plan. At the very least, he should have thought of an escape route first. I think this should be improved. The most important skill point is to ask whether the system can be used in a life-or-death situation. Isn't this something you should know when you first get the system? Just like a killer, you must prepare your own equipment before coming to kill someone. You must know what abilities you have, such as fighting, firearms, and assassination. If you forget your abilities, you will still be a killer with a hammer. In the same way, it feels like the protagonist doesn't care about his golden finger at all. This is your fault. If you don't care, who cares? You should always know the most basic abilities first, and then plan accordingly. If you say that you feel that the previous two skills are not suitable for adding points, so you save the skill points to add points to the powerful skills you will get later, I can understand it. But I feel a bit stupid if you ask the system if you can add more points in the final life-or-death crisis. I hope the author can improve it.

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Books with attribute flow are most afraid of the collapse of the power system. I hope the author can keep good records and never be inconsistent.

Alas, author, you are completely unable to control the family setting. There is a reason why there are so many orphans in the starting point. The biggest poisonous point in the early stage is the younger sister. I knew that my sister was in danger and that children were missing in the slums, but I didn't care. I knew that the enemy would attack my family, but I didn't take any precautions. If something happened, I would get angry and commit an act of rebellion. It's as if the author deliberately wanted to write off his family to death, but he also described the emotions between the protagonist and his sister in a superficial way. The sister is so cute and sensible. That's not how the plot is promoted. Let the author read this chapter and say, you were scolded miserably.

Xianyu is a new cute little girl. If there are any loopholes or mistakes, thank you for pointing them out. Some of the bugs in the previous article have been corrected. I hope you can continue to support Xianyu. Thank you for your support! ∩ _, ,_ ⊂⌒（`Д´)

Why does the protagonist have to let the enemy go every time, only to retaliate and block him again later? Does the protagonist have any attributes?

Hiccup, this is written with family affection. I don't have enough writing skills. I suggest Qidian Orphanage. I can't stand it, so I'll withdraw it first.

I know why this book is not popular 🔥. The style of this pig's feet is similar to Lu Sheng Beast, but it doesn't have the feeling of decisive killing. It always feels uncomfortable.

Will a time-traveler develop feelings for the loved ones of the person being time-traveled? , Are you so funny? For example, if you were cheated on by your girlfriend and the child she gave birth to was not yours, and the person she loved was not you, would you still have feelings for her?

The main character is a retard. There is no brain at all and it is impossible to watch. I just ignored the skill points, and only when I was about to die did I remember, oh, I still have skill points to use.