Fight, Villain

Come on, author, I will update 3,000 a day.

Ahem, I've read more than half of this novel before leaving a review. It's probably a bit long. I read your comment, haha. To be honest, when I read a book, I read the comment section first. If it's good, ahem, then I'll read it. Well, there are mixed reviews in your comment area. Many people said that you wrote too carefully, but when I read it, I felt that it was just right. This is the first fairy-cultivation novel that I have read that I can fully understand. The other ones either span too much and are a bit incomprehensible. Or it's just to highlight the pig's feet and forcibly reduce the intelligence of the supporting characters, making it like watching a group of prostitutes. The author's writing style is quite good, the pig's feet are not too big, the IQ is on the line, and the plot is very coherent. At this point, I want to talk about the following settings, which I feel are very good. Especially the setting that turns Yin Qi, Yang Qi, Tao Heart, and Buddha Heart into Tai Chi Bagua, I like it the most. Although it is not completely successful yet, I am already here looking forward to success in the future. I'm a little excited just thinking about it. The only drawback is that Pig's Feet has experienced so many things in the world, so when can she return to Langya world?

Maomaojiang, let me give you a little suggestion: divide it into more paragraphs to make the article look more open. It's so densely packed that it's too hard on the eyes. The first paragraph can be divided into more pages, the second paragraph looks very refreshing, and the third paragraph is more comfortable to read and has a better reading experience.

It's nice to watch, but some things are vaguely written, such as asking the heroine to protect the Son of Destiny, and going to an ancient battlefield. The problem is how to know where the Son of Destiny is and in which realm. Why should we judge who is the son of destiny, but go to the ancient battlefield? They should all be places of great power! Why did you go to the mortal world? Is there something wrong with my understanding🤨

Come on, the book is good, I'm optimistic about you.

See Chapter 8. The author's writing style is very vivid, there is a kind of tranquility and innocence in the little girl's perspective, and the setting is also very thoughtful. He is an author who likes little girls very much. As for what the author thinks is wrong, this is a normal structural conflict. A child's perspective on the world must be fantastic and irrational, such as Alice in Wonderland. The drama performance of Hunan Xiaoxianrou shows that if children interpret an orderly and reasonable society, it is best to be family-oriented. You can adjust the relationship in the cultivation world to be very relaxed and resource-rich, and greatly expand the area and level of her home, which will be more suitable for the protagonist. The fast and slow rhythm brings out the feeling and highlights the preciousness of family, even if you are a single parent. You can slow down her yard, life, and travel to a micro speed, lower her age line, and write about a very ordinary and warm life, so as to have more reality. There is another problem. Characters that are not needed for the structure need to be mentioned in one stroke without giving their names. The first few chapters still need to be refined. The aunt and the judge have too much writing, and the little girl is playing in the yard. The two roles of yin and yang can be explained. It's best to give her some naughty playmates, then. . . Beat the naughty kid hard, haha. Clumsy works of each other

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I don't know how many readers will be dissuaded by the cover and title of the book. I am hesitating whether to read it or not. Do you want to watch it?

I have passed by this book title many times, and I just jumped in today with the attitude of giving it a try. Result. . . Surprisingly good and honest article! Very well written! ! ! I have just read more than 20 chapters. It feels very smooth and has a clear structure! The settings are reasonable and detailed, such as setting the conditions for seizing a house. Although it is only a small detail, it makes the rules of this world more detailed and full! From what I can see so far, there is no cold poisonous feeling at all. I feel like I have soaked in the real pregnancy spring 😍 Come on 🌹

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I would like to make my review longer. The writing is not bad. Although it is a little immature in the first few chapters, it is a little better in the later chapters. The pace of plot development is better than most of the articles, and there is not much problem with logic. The only thing that I can't get past is the battle between gods and spirits through refining qi, and the appearance of so many magic weapons is really quite dangerous. I think it's a bit weird to go through it easily. I've read more than a hundred chapters so far, so it's okay.