Play in the Sandbox World

The source of poison in this book 1. Charlotte An ordinary woman, who is always chatty regardless of the occasion. All the villains who oppose the protagonist only use one method despite many examples before - kidnapping Sherlock! If you don't want to kill them after being tied up, just leave them there and wait for the protagonist to rescue them. 2. Silly smile Silly smile is how others feel about your smile. Even a very naive person can't laugh in a naive way every time. Can't you sneer? 3. Gentleness Although self-pleasure is a forbidden area, can the author put himself into the protagonist's situation? In an almost desperate situation, and with countless enemies like scandals, you can only smile gently? Is it okay to frown? Is it possible to meditate? 4. Chaos Sandbox, sandbox, sandbox must be the reason why most people read this book, right? The author would greatly trouble you to play Minecraft. You are writing about real-time strategy, not a sandbox.

It poisoned me to death. The protagonist went out to practice and had a naive face throughout the whole process. He often said something like "the protagonist said with a smile". I touched my nose throughout the book. After three sentences, my nose was polished into a mirror. The stronger part is the author's description of the women in the article. . . No one has an above-average IQ. Let's not talk about the protagonist's sister. The black cat who follows him fell in love with her even after they disagreed with her? What about Sophie, like a wise guy who doesn't like her fiancé so she seeks out someone to get revenge on her? Wouldn't the author be more serious in his writing? And that guy in the mine, beating and saying harsh words at the same time, are you a fool? The protagonist in the late stage of chuunibyou is convinced! It's so poisonous that I want to send the author a razor blade!

The emmm theme and cheating are very interesting, but the characters in the whole book are full of intellectual humiliation. The plot of relying on women to cause jealousy is really disgusting. It also makes the protagonist very low, and he dares to persuade him to quit.

The creativity of the book is very good, and the plot is also good. Unfortunately, the writing style is too weak. The way the plot is written at the beginning would be more attractive than the author's way of writing it.

I want to see how to use the sandbox to practice spells in various ways, how to use myself, myself, my own spells to fight, and how to use the sandbox to become a big player. I haven't seen it yet, but in my opinion there are a lot of useless paragraphs and plots. Almighty spells are not exciting enough to write? Is the sub-career not exciting enough? Why do you still write a lot of petty intrigues and sarcastic expressions?

Also, the sister thing is very troublesome, and it may break down in the later stage, and having a sister is a bit toxic, so let her finish the movie. I have read several novels that broke down because of writing about women! There are too many bonuses in that system, and it feels like it is about to become an invincible novel. Let's abuse the protagonist and let him find a border town to study spells. Finally, "Women will make books collapse!!!!"

1. How to retaliate against Chauvin? Answer: Kidnapping Charlotte 2. How to promote the plot? Answer: Kidnapping Charlotte 3. How to forcibly make enemies? Answer: Kidnapping Charlotte 4. So, what is your purpose of kidnapping Charlotte? A group of villains: I don't know either, just tie them up anyway. 5. So, why did you tie her up? A group of villains: I don't know, I will tie them up and not kill them, waiting for the protagonist to rescue me, and then we will get the lunch box. 6. Charlotte is just an ordinary girl. She is a bit pretty, but she still gibbers all day long. Why did you tie her up? A group of villains: I don't know if it was arranged by the author.

It is recommended that the author play the mage profession of "Night of the Full Moon" and "Pixel Dungeon". There are many settings about spells and equipment 😃 Dissociation Ray, Code of Surprises, Book of Witches, Moonlight Code, Arcane Missiles, etc.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel a little uninterested in reading any more. Just a quick aside, the beginning of the first few chapters was pretty good. But the rest was not written at all. As an old bookworm, I have also tried some novels. (It's the kind of writing that I can't even stand.) Although I can't say that I know how to write novels, there is a basic principle: when you want to promote, you should suppress it first. It's okay if it's a bit miserable in the front, but just write down the impact in the back. But this book is a bit depressing (adjective) in the early stage, and when it is about to explode, it is completely dull. It has no explosive points and just passes by as bullshit. (Although I also hate routine writing, a little bit of routine will be more effective.) The rest is full of little calculations and tricks. I think if the author wanted something more conspiracy-like, he could change the background and title of the book, and maybe more people would read it. In this case, the system text was written as a conspiracy text, which really wasted the excitement of the early opening. In the early stage, the protagonist was full of nonsense about "the world's best mage" and "all elements are compatible". As a result, the villains who caused trouble in the early stage could not be dealt with, and they had to rely on conspiracy and scheming. It's equivalent to being unable to complete the first task in Novice Village, and the first wave of monsters that give you experience cannot be completed by yourself. Brother, you are writing a system article. What does the system do? Isn't it the cheat you personally opened for the protagonist? If you're afraid of a crash, just write that you can't beat it. Just run away and focus on practicing your skills. If it doesn't work, you can forcefully give away experience. With all your scheming, you won't be able to kill the mobs in the first round. It's equivalent to being fucked instead of showing off. What about your abusive main text? It doesn't look like it either. I don't know whether the author is writing books as a hobby or writing books full-time. If it is a hobby, then good luck to the author. If it's a full-time job, I advise you to stop writing and find a job.

Pindao was still very interested in the system of the sandbox game. When he saw that it had more than 800,000 words and less than 10,000 recommendation votes, he hesitated for a while and then clicked on the novel. After all, the subject matter was his favorite type. Then Pindao regretted it. He should have believed in the results. There were hundreds of thousands of words, but the recommendation votes were only 10,000. It's obvious that the writing is really bad... It's so messed up that I can't even find the topic. The sandbox system works well with the development of lords. What's the point of going to the academy and encountering a bunch of characters who reduce your intelligence?

Full of intrigue. Those who want to see the sandbox can leave. The protagonist is like a fool.

Where is the sandbox I wrote? I also played with the sandbox. I just wrote a few strokes in the first few chapters and called it a sandbox article. I don't know if I will write it later. It doesn't matter. I can't read it anymore anyway. I just want to tell people who will follow me that this is a book that is selling sheep over dogs.

I came here for the word "sandbox", not for the boring intrigues in school all day long.

This book does not have the soul developed in the sandbox. It is a pity that it is written in a third-rate way when it is clearly a good material.

I seem to have seen this expression of the author somewhere.

I clicked in just for the MC. I was so shocked when I read the comment section that I didn't dare to click on it 😅

This is the first time I have seriously read this kind of novel, hmm~ Wow, this kind of thing is the most annoying, Western medieval fantasy novels or something like that It really hurts my head, I just read Chapter 75. This person's name made me so annoyed It's so spicy, it's so spicy. Pai, isn't it good that everyone has the surname Li, Du, and Zhang~ The surname is so strange Lan Shou... This name makes me dizzy, there is nothing else, just this name, bother, let me sort it out...

It's a good idea to have a mage in a sandbox. After all, a professional construction mage in a sandbox needs to build a mage tower. The combat effectiveness of a mage without a mage tower is one level weaker. But what you wrote is haha. If you don't build a sandbox, you won't make anything. If you still play in a sandbox with a hammer, it's better to chop down slag and slag Hui.

Is the protagonist mentally retarded? The principal of the college told the protagonist that I am very optimistic about you and I will pay attention to you. If you have any questions, you can come to me. Then the protagonist offended a first-level mage with a background and wanted to run away quickly. Where is his IQ? Isn't it safe to have a big boss watching? If you run out, someone will be sent to kill you. There will be no evidence to prove your death.

Someone asked the protagonist how many times he touched his nose. I read Chapter 44 and the protagonist touched his nose seventy-one times. Is there any problem?

I read Chapter 38 and really couldn't read anymore. The beginning was just confusing. Is it because I was afraid that others would not pay attention to me when I built a house in the wilderness? I also asked for recommendations from people I just met not long ago. When I should be keeping a low profile, I always have to do something to attract attention to myself. I know that the woman has a fiancé who is difficult to get along with, but I still dare to meet in private. Several times I said that if I wanted to run away from the campus, I would not dig a tunnel first. And pretending to be stupid sometimes or not. I didn't eat or drink for three days and was still alive among the enemies. The first time he used magic in the school, no one caught him, but the second time, someone did. At first, he refused to talk about the construction and mining functions of the system. Later, he performed crazily in front of people he had known for a few days. There are a whole 38 chapters where he is tortured and has no power to resist, and he doesn't even know about dogs. There is obviously a system, but I almost thought he only had a full range of talents.

It feels like the front is stretched so far and the thread is buried so deeply. The ending feels very sorry for the buried thread.

I was wrong, I thought it was a sandbox novel, but when I saw dozens of pictures, it was still about practicing magic, and the house was still the same matchbox. I felt sorry for the author, so I gave up the book and played Ark.

The plot jumps too much and I can't keep up, especially if I can't keep up with the chapters. I feel like there are missing chapters.

I feel like the protagonist is having trouble with his brain.

I'm really disappointed. I haven't seen such an "ordinary" novel in a long time. The plot is so boring, the writing is equally boring, and I don't even have the desire to read it. Also, isn't the theme of this book sandbox first and then another world? Why is the presence of the sandbox so low? I made it clear that I only read it because of the sandbox, and then everything I saw was just like a time-travel novel, and the writing was very poor.                                          I didn't see what I wanted to see, and it was quite boring. Let me give you a rating of 0.8 (Out of 5)

Have you settled down in school?

Can such a stupid protagonist really survive the struggle between the powerful and powerful classes? Are they all fools? Is it really good to forcibly reduce intelligence? Or you can write that you can be resurrected infinitely! The powerful class will not kill you if they try to play with you! Count the money with you! The purpose is unclear and I can't understand it!

"What is missing?" "The flowers are blooming on the road, and the wild geese have returned." "Can you be more specific?" "It rains at night in Bashan, but the rainy windows have cleared." "Can you be more specific?" "The lights are dim, but I still can't see you."

Question: Will the sound of chopping trees at the beginning attract the attention of the mercenaries? Or is there no sound when using the ability? I only watched the beginning to find out more.