I Stacked the Steel of the Heart in the Knights

You have so many passionate labels. The Steel of the Heart is this and that, but the first few chapters ended up like this, which I personally felt was a bit inappropriate. It gives people the feeling that something is wrong. In this day and age, it won't work for you to trick people in and then kill them. And to be honest, this kind of crazy suppression and then adding buffs to the protagonist feels a bit outdated. But there may be many people who like it, so you come up with a bunch of passionate tags. This may cause people who like to read this kind of book not to read this book, and then people who don't like to read this book will be attracted and then run away. Anyway, they think your writing is very strange.

You're lying. You're not stacking steel at all. You're just playing tricks.

I just want to ask, has the protagonist been brainwashed by someone from another world? I shout about bullshit chivalry every day, thinking that my power comes from this. But really? Shouldn't the protagonist rely on Brother Tongzi to awaken his power? Without Brother Tongzi, can the protagonist with this garbage physique awaken his great power? Feng Bu can't help but be moved by someone from another world every day. No... Buddy, as long as Brother Tongzi is here, you can still awaken whether you participate in the training camp or not! If it were Brother Mi Youtongzi, even if you participated in the training camp, you would be just a loser who was bullied every day.

The villain's goal: to seize power and establish authority and become the leader The villain's actions: send the opposition people to die and suppress the effective force of the opposition. To highlight one thing, we are not afraid of the opposition rising, but we are afraid that you will not resist. Highlight a man who can become the leader, even if half of the knights die. Even the opposition camp accounts for more than half of the strength of this war frontline camp. This logic really makes me laugh to death.

The title of the book is very good, but it's a pity that the author's writing skills and brain are not good.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, not giving stacks of steel, golden fingers are almost non-existent, I want both, but I want to write a medieval Warhammer mixed dnd style western fantasy, but I am afraid that no one will watch it and make a gimmick of heart steel. The plot and the setting are separated. Some people say that being a knight is actually just a fool. However, in the setting, becoming a knight requires not only physical fitness but also noble moral character and a strong will. Can a villain with noble moral character and a strong will become a knight like the one you wrote? If it is really written according to this setting, neither side can be said to be "evil" but a battle of lines. Then the villain can still shine. If you don't write it like this, just write that talent and strength determine whether you become a knight or not. Why, is it still an adaptive knight? The knights on the protagonist's side are majestic and upright, but the knights opposite the protagonist are despicable? It is reasonable for you to set up a knighthood and have wizards and mages accompanying the group. It is entirely because the plot requires a villain, but the problem is that the plot is not exciting at all and has many bugs. (Including the big lord's daughter who came to the front line and didn't have any personal bodyguards. Aren't you afraid of being robbed by the enemy on the way? As soon as the opponent hits you and is affected by AOE, you will jump straight to the corpse) Also, you big lord is really hungry. The protagonist is a wanderer who can enter the knight training camp. You can imagine what the level of the knight training camp is. The big lord also picks up unnecessary things from the knight training camp and recruits them from there, right? The equipment in LOL is still out of stock. Jia Xiu can come up with something that increases movement speed. I even recognize the force of nature. I read the beginning, but I haven't read the follow-up yet, but I have lost the desire to read it. If you feel that it hurts and the impact is not big, you can delete the post. If your level is high and I am blind, if there is a reversal in the follow-up, you can frame it for me to let other readers scold me. That's it.

The clichés of old-fashioned Western fantasy knight stories are basically those from ten years ago. The descriptions are very passionate, but the plot content is more focused on the protagonist. It is difficult to understand what the author is thinking. Oh, by the way, the most important thing is that the author gave the protagonist an awesome plug-in, Heart of Steel. But such an awesome plug-in makes the protagonist a mess💩. I seriously doubt the author's skills in playing League of Legends. Maybe the author has never won League of Legends and Heartsteel. Can't play

The details, the data are indeed too poor. There are many inconsistencies in the data. It is also difficult to understand the 10-year-old awakening system. A 13-year-old cannot lift twenty kilograms of things. Is twenty kilograms difficult? It is just picking up. There are also 20 kilograms of steel boots. Do they really need to be so heavy? Will it not greatly affect the activities?

The author uses a fantasy writing method that most readers hate (crazy progress in the early stage, inexplicable villains and natural disasters, the protagonist always comes back from adversity, teammates never believe and react, brainless conflicts create a cheap feeling) is a complete failure. This path dependence will make your writing easier, but it will also make the book you write less and less read.

Dude, you are purely screening readers. The name is Knights + Meng Stack + Heart of Steel. The full title is I stack the steel of the heart fiercely in the Knights. The readers who come in are those who read light novels, cool novels, and have played LoL. Hammer fans, you didn't mention it at all. When I came in, I saw it was Warhammer. You are trying to persuade readers who only play lol. Hai Wen also dissuades readers who want to read light novels.

Happy. Sidon can avoid the protagonist's camp but cannot, and the author's social experience is approximately zero.

There are too many problems with the setting. A Heart of Steel is just like a waste. A day of thinking will let you know what I don't eat beef. The Heart of Steel is set at 700 yards and each person can trigger it once within six seconds. It has a 30-second cooldown after being triggered by one person. Each time it increases the health of the attack by 12%, and the equipment comes with 100 attacks. You just think you are a waste. If there is no attack at all, find 30 people and surround you within 700 yards. In this way, except for the first person who needs to wait 6 seconds, the rest can be hit in 1 second. Counting the time wasted in the middle, it can at least double the physique in 10 seconds. There is no upper limit for this. Let alone 6 years, I can use the sun as a yo-yo in one day.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing more than 90 chapters. It's very fragmented. It suppresses the protagonist. Changes the map to suppress the combat power. It tricks the fans of League of Legends into writing. Even if it's Warhammer, there's no point in piecing it together. The heart of the heart is useless. If the gold finger is useless, our readers will lose the pleasure of reading. The heart of the heart just came in just to watch people develop and then kill indiscriminately. There is a problem with the author's writing ideas and he can't write this gold finger. Please use a cheat to write a cool article, such as "As long as I am not mentally down, you can't kill me." There is a three-year period at the beginning of the article. Once it is the development time, I forget it. In the end, it keeps suppressing the protagonist. After changing the map, another four years came. After giving a plot, it went to eleven years later. The protagonist is still rolling in place and upgrading in the first stage of the knight. You wrote it like this and buried all my cool points into the ground. I can't stand it 8886

I can't hold it anymore after reading 15 chapters. The protagonist is simply a tortured clown, and every time the next chapter comes, he gets slapped in the face.

At first, I thought I had found a good book, but as the plot unfolded, I found that I had been forced into a piece of shit. I won't go into details about Goldfinger. Let's talk about the plot. 1. At the beginning, it was said that the mercenary group was only stationed in a province of the empire. But it turned out to be a province of a world in the empire. The world view is getting bigger and bigger. But on the contrary, you, an earth knight with a tooth knocked out, casually found the emperor of the empire. Are all those sky legends dead? 2. There are so many worlds. They are randomly assigned to a place just around the emperor. The world is like a grass-roots team. 3. The creation of Sidon is too contradictory and inconsistent with this big world view. An earth knight is nothing. In the end, it has become a powerful imperial capital and needs a lord to bribe. One day, a small knight order is insignificant. One earth knight has been destroyed one after another. Indeed, it has attracted the attention of the big boss. In short, all kinds of violations have been set to stretch the crotch. The world is written in a strange way, but the plot is indeed a fight in the village, a grass-roots team stirring up shit.

A very good novel, with elements of League of Legends and Warhammer 40k added in. The scenes can be made grander. Can the weapons be changed? It's a bit confusing. An ax is not as good as a spear or halberd.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a passionate novel, but then I came in and you showed me this? If you really don't know how to write, how about learning from Soul of Burning Steel? Take a look at what the big guys write. Basically, you all write the same type of writers.

This book is about abusing the main character, the enemy is suddenly cleansed, I guess there may be a judgment of the country in the future, the character levels are a bit messy, it is irritating but it cools down quickly, there are some places where you can start a conversation, and I have briefly touched on it, but there is no water in the places where it is possible. Summary: This book is suitable for people who want to get things done as long as they burn, who are loyal to the party, who kill the party, and who like fast pace.

There are many problems with the details, but the flaws cannot hide the good points. It is passionate enough, so the flaws in the details cannot cover up the passion, glory, an eternal topic, Warhammer, League of Legends, and Chivalry.

In fact, the author's introduction explains the main tone of the book, greatness. To become a great person, you must have your own beliefs and things that you insist on. It does not mean that you can become a great person by killing and killing, it can only be said that you are strong. This book is actually not bad. It is written in ink. If you can read it seriously, it is still a grain of bread. It is just that there are too few words. It will probably take you a year and a half to read it completely.

It is obviously a world with extraordinary power, but during the war, there was no plan for the low-level forces on both sides to deal with the high-level forces. A low-level person is like he has never seen a high-level person exert force. Seeing a high-level Kai Wushuang is like seeing a heavenly being. He collapses upon impact. It's completely unclear how long the war was going on between the parties.

This book is generally very good. The theme, main expression scenes and battle scenes are well described. There are some flaws in minor aspects and small details. The main reason is that it feels a little too fast, and the scene suddenly becomes very grand. Although I am reading it very happily now, there is always a way that it will become particularly difficult to write later. There are some minor flaws, but the theme is well grasped, and it's worth a read. Come on, the follow-up author, I think the content behind you is quite difficult to write, and it may not be as exciting as the previous one. Looking forward to the following content, please come on, author.

As the title states, Warhammer's Chosen also requires such twists and turns of experience and unyielding will. The difference is that the protagonist has a golden finger and probably won't fall. The main point of this book seems to have little to do with the strength of the heart. Reading just for this may make you feel bored. After all, this is not a cheating book. The main points of interest are the grand world view and the protagonist's growth experience. It can be said that the writing and plot control are very good. If you can read novels other than mindless and refreshing novels, this book is also very good.

A good book, affirmed by an old bookworm. There are some flaws in the plot, but the flaws are outweighed. Which boy doesn't have the dream of a macho man with a hero complex in his heart? To be honest, I almost missed this book. I can only say that I was put off by the title! ! !

It has been several years, but there is only one Reinhardt in my heart

The main character is so boring, and he can fight with everyone for ten chapters or so, and it ends in seconds. Enough water!

Except for a small flaw at the beginning, everything is fine later on. It has begun to have the flavor of a grand world, but the updates are a bit lacking. I hope there will be more updates after it is released. If the subsequent updates are not good, it can attract a group of people. By the way update update update😆😆😆

It feels like two books in an instant, before it was about the awakening of medieval knights, and suddenly four years later it turned into an interstellar war. How did it develop? It didn't come out before this set came out.

So far, I have not seen a novel that can make the heart of steel more enjoyable. The better ones impose various restrictions and cannot be stacked several times in a year, while the worse ones just sell the sheep's head as the dog's meat.

Great author! How can you be a eunuch? Whatever I can't write is an excuse! If you have no inspiration, reading the history of the Kuomintang and the Communist Party will definitely inspire you! They are all passionate young people who work hard for their ideals and beliefs!