Online Game: Bone Monkey King

The creativity is very good. There is no shortage of great writers in the current Internet writing circle. After reading it for a long time, no matter how awesome it is, I will still feel tired. However, the writing is a bit messy, the upgrades are difficult to understand, and the jumps are a bit large, such as the beginning of the journey to Shushan, which is a bit abrupt. Moreover, this realistic explanation is too simple, the background and environment are vague, the level values ​​of the weapons and equipment in the game are almost impossible to calculate, and there seems to be no main mission. The author suggested that the writer take a look at Evil Shadow. Although the writing style seems very simple now, it was also very popular back then, and the substitution is not so blunt. However, as a semi-online game novel, I still want to read Ye Zi's trilogy. At least it has the concept of numerical values, and the descriptions of weapons and equipment are a little more literary. This is Journey to the West, so what do you think of it? Finally, I hope to become the author of this book, the Eight Hundred Arhats.

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Well, as an old bookworm who has read at least hundreds of millions of words, I would like to express my opinion on this book. This book is very good. I won't go into details about the specific good points. After all, I am not a professional reviewer. Maybe it's the influence of the novels I read before. Let me pick a little thorn in it. Everyone must know that Tathagata is actually the Taoist Master Duobao. As the eldest brother of Jie Jiao, he is the number one disciple of Master Tongtian. He is good at refining weapons and has strong own strength. As the leader of Jie Jiao, it is natural that he cannot be weak in scheming. So I think the Tathagata you wrote is too stupid and weak. Of course this is just a small, innocuous stain. I just hope that when the author writes the book, he will refer more to reality and historical references to make it appear more reasonable. Of course, I might be pushing things a little too far. After all, it takes a lot of time to do this, and it is impossible to achieve the current speed.

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I recommend this book. If fellow Taoists like this style, you can read Rebirth Qi Practitioner. Not bad, but of course there are a lot of flaws. Thanks.

Why is it so similar to the Bone Monkey King in Journey to the West? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Come out, Shenlong, Dragon: What is your wish? Me: I want to destroy the world Long:, Krypton,, your wish is not easy to handle,,, Me: Then I want to watch "The Bone Monkey King" alive Long:, emmmmm,, how do you want to destroy the world?

It's a good book, but there are a few settings in the book that made me feel strange. First, the real world in the book is both scientific and fantasy. Mixing these two styles is an easy failure in game novels. Secondly, in the novel, it is not clear whether the author writes cool prose or concise prose, which makes readers a little confused. Although cool writing is somewhat good (applicable to a wide audience), it is difficult to improve the level of the work; fine writing has a smaller audience range, but the work is highly praised. I don't know which one the author would choose? Third, although the book contains a lot of reality, I don't know why I always skip the reality section and read the game section. The author's ability to write realistic content is limited for now! All in all, this novel is good-looking and can be used as a god. However, the author's choice of style is a bit vacillating. I hope the author can create a unique style. I will continue to support you.

Seeing that the author writes a novel about Journey to the West, I have a guess about "Journey to the West". That is one day in heaven and one year on earth. The current explanation is that one day passes in heaven and one year passes on earth. But I think there is another explanation. That is a different view of time. The so-called life and death, for gods. 24 Hours a day is too short. They spent a day refining alchemy and practicing, but they still had to go to court to order a lot of things. So could it be a different view of time? That is. Our year is only their day.

This introduction is full of character. .

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"Great Sage, what are you going to do here?" "Step into the southern sky and shatter the sky." "If you go and never come back..." "You will never come back!"

"What do you want, the great sage, to go here?" "Tread on the sky!" "If you go here and never come back?" "Just go... Charge money!"

Sun Wukong calls the White Bone Demon Jingjing, and the White Bone Demon calls Sun Wukong Kongkong.

No, no, no, you are the Demon King at the beginning. You need to be domineering. How good is your farming? Soon you go out and show off, and you kill indiscriminately. Your cultivation level must be high. It doesn't matter if everyone is invincible at the same level. What's important is appearance. If you have a coffin at the level of an immortal weapon, if you don't have the tyranny of an immortal level boss, that's it. Nobb

That white-bone spirit from Journey to the West? Could the male protagonist be a crossdresser?

It's so exciting. I didn't go to bed until I watched it last night. I just need to work harder for updates and don't be like others who have entered the palace. Please give me likes if you think the same! ! 😁😁

Can the dialogue in the article be more reasonable? It doesn't matter to the players. The NPCs are all full of modern swear words, and they all like to be in public. They are still people who have cultivated the Tao 😅.

A barking dog gnawed and gnawed it all.

Hungry... Three thousand bones... Isn't this amount too exaggerated?

Will you finally marry the white-bone woman in Journey to the West?

Good book, let's complain about the setting in the article When I read this book from Mechanical Hunter, there is one setting that I still can't stand Except for those next to the protagonist, the onlookers in the article will always have a villain face. Once the protagonist in Mechanical Hunter achieves anything, all the melon-eating crowds Everyone is like "Why is he, who is he?" Or "Isn't it just luck?" "There are a lot of curses" and so on This book is the same now, and the new chapter is like this again. The protagonist is the leader of the demon clan, and the description is "there is a lot of curses in the forum", and the same is true for the previous battle at Huaguo Mountain. I just don't understand. In an era of advanced technology described by the author, would the average quality of the people be even lower than it is now? ? Now when you hear about a stranger's achievements, is your first reaction to go to the forum to scold him, despise him, and show the darkness in your heart? Except for the people who appear around the protagonist, there are almost no people who can look like: We are very proud to have such powerful players in our camp. In other words, the author has almost no (too few) such descriptions Both novels have very good ideas and world views, but I really understand the three views of the people in them. That's all. If you don't like it, feel free to troll me. Don't bring your family, thank you.

Coming from Hunter, [Typo Hunter] once made me give up the book because of typos. Fortunately, I wrote better and better in the future. I hope this book will be better. 11 Recommendation votes every day until it is on the shelves.

Author, have you read the settings? Wasn't it said earlier that only the Lord of Destiny could lie down in the Kunlun Jade Coffin? In the latest chapter, Ah Fu just lay down in it. Did he eat the setting?

It's better for the protagonist, Invincible, to be a little bit quiet before. After all, if others find out, you and I will not be able to live in peace in the future.

It's pretty good, but I just can't stand it. After thinking about it carefully, I felt that I just couldn't get into it. Two points. 1. The main character's background was not explained clearly in Chapters 1 and 2. Vaguely. 2. The protagonist has already achieved a certain level of cultivation when entering the game. I didn't experience it with the protagonist. These two points made me turn the page almost quickly. A chapter in a few seconds. The 50 or so chapters have completely failed to keep up with the plot. I can't even stand it There's also something I don't like. It's a practical question. Can I stop writing and just play the game? It's not that I don't like to see the reality of immortality and invincibility. But it's basically written in a very embarrassing way. There are few exceptions. Let's talk about the protagonist. In reality, he is just a small person. In the game, he is a demon king, the boss who rules tens of thousands of people. How does the protagonist switch states without any sense of contradiction? Even if he doesn't feel bad, I feel bad. I really like game-based novels. Come on, the author.

I have been going out for the past few days and I didn't plan to read a book. If I hadn't seen you post a single chapter, I would have planned to start reading after the vacation. So you have to pay attention to the time it is put on the shelf. If you update it for free a few days and put it on the shelf a few days later, it will feel much better. Well, at least that's how I feel. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on Late night book review, support me