God-Level Mechanical Hunter of Online Games

The first requirement for a qualified game novel is rigor and rigorous data, but this novel is obviously unqualified. Another point is that there are an unusually large number of typos in this novel. They are everywhere, which greatly affects the reading experience. I couldn't stand it after reading more than thirty chapters.

I have read about a hundred chapters. The advantage is that the writing is basically fluent and the plot is okay. The disadvantage is that no matter when and where there are people jumping out to act as mentally retarded passers-by.

Congratulations to this book for winning the title of the novel with the most typos of the year. The author closed his eyes while typing, and the readers relied on guesswork to read. Flowers of culture and style

It's not easy to mess around with starting authors, especially small authors, new authors, trainees, and apprentices can say they have read the entire book! 🤭 I have read hundreds of them so far, and I personally feel that there are indeed a lot of bad points, but the overall structural design is okay. Maybe the author's writing style cannot control his unconstrained and grand layout ideas. If you like it, watch it; if you don't like it, leave it! But I still like the author quite a lot. I recommended it with 7 votes today. I used to like playing Warcraft Hunter, Mechanical Hunter, and collecting various pets!

If you are mentally retarded, pretend to be B. If your IQ is not online, don't slap me in the face. I originally wanted to watch you fight monsters, but at a class reunion, you pretend to be B and you can pk the game in seconds. The game is opened by your family. The master has not even appeared in the novice village. How many levels of alts can you pk across the novice village? Even if there is a pk system page, then you must have a certain bottom line in your forced pretense and decisively abandon the book.

This book, how should I put it, has a very large structure, integrating many games, Warcraft, Diablo, etc. The world view structure seems very grand, but basically only a part of it has been written. The ending also feels quite rushed, and there is basically no emotional line. Overall, it can be used as a fun article to pass the time. There are also quite a few typos. However, the logic is quite passable, nothing seems too rigid, and everything is fairly rounded out. It's almost a three out of five.

I have only read more than 87 chapters. The book is very good and very interesting, but I just can't think about it while reading it.

Author, you gave up quality for the sake of efficiency... It really makes us look for trouble. It's so popular…

By the way, with such a big background, you only wrote it in the 1960s, and you are about to end it. There are still a lot of holes to fill 😡

The writing on games is pretty good, come on, please keep writing!

The start is too weak, the class reunion is just a routine, and the meaning of opening two accounts is unclear. The worldviews I recognize include World of Warcraft and DND, but the sewing is not very good. As a virtual online game novel, there are too many parts of the real world, and the writing is average. The villain's facial makeup is severely distorted, almost all of which involve a cycle of pretentiousness and slap-in-the-face routines. The ending was unfinished, and I couldn't continue writing until the end, so I forced myself to make dumplings. The alien part is really outrageous. The natives of the slave society look down on the earthlings in the interstellar era, so they forcefully create conflicts to promote the plot.

There are constant typos, which makes me upset; even though I have fully subscribed, I gave up reading the pirated version; I dare to ask your name, the poor monk is ninety-five-two-seven

1. In Chapter 406, Scheduling, the protagonist directs the NPCs from the light camp to fight against the ancient god's clone with the player. The player's professional terminology is used throughout the process. No one among the thousands of people found out that he is a player. Afterwards, the NPC was shocked. It turned out that the protagonist was pretending to be an NPC. I really wanted to laugh when I saw this. 2. On the one hand, it emphasizes the magical reality, but on the other hand, in Chapter 427, the protagonist attacks with a musket on the bottom of the sea? ? ? It's a key musket, it's under the sea, and it's the kind of musket that loads one ammunition per shot. Will water not enter the ammunition compartment when you load it? ? This clip is really a slap in the face, and it's also magically realistic. 3. Chapter 489, the first time I fought against the first BOSS Ten Thousand Husband in the 25-player group version. This BOSS used Zhan Ge. After the group is destroyed. The second time I fought the BOSS, the weapon became a big sword, emmmm, I was really speechless. 4. Chapter 523, the protagonist's guild's fire spell, 4 skills destroyed a 3-star silver hero with 10W of health? ? ? What is the concept of 10W? A junior leader only has about 40 HP. I don't believe that the equipment of other top guilds is much worse than this Muzi. Some of the elite professions are even stronger. I keep seeing here that no one except the protagonist can single-handedly defeat a leader above level 15. I feel really ridiculous. 5. I forgot. I read the book carefully and there are still a lot of bugs. Some of them I didn't remember after reading it. I was too lazy to flip through the book and read it from the beginning. I only saw chapter 500.

Chapter 1: A guild in the game can make you deeply in debt and ruin your family in real life? Are you kidding me? I can't think of a way to make people owe money. It's more practical to hire a killer than to make a freelancer deeply in debt. If you are a businessman, you can just run his company, but what do you do to ordinary workers and freelancers? Secondly, if you are reborn to play the game, and you remember the strategies from ten years ago, if you are so good, wouldn't it be better if you just buy the game? How reliable is it to buy the European Cup, World Cup and Asian Cup? How about investing in companies with the money earned from buying football? If you take us back to ten years ago, everyone knows about investing in Alibaba domestically, investing in Apple abroad, and buying some Bitcoins to wait for the 2018 sell-off. As someone who even remembers the strategy from ten years ago and who graduated from the best university in the country, you don't know?

There are always people asking if these books are good or not? It doesn't look good or it doesn't look good. You are awesome. Go ahead and write. Why are you so awesome?                                                                                                                                               Please read the book from 16 years. At that time, novels did not have as many routines as this, and some books had to be read in that year. It is the same reason that you thought animation was good-looking when you were a child, but you think it is childish when you grow up. There are six years from 2022 to 2016. How many books can you read in six years? After reading so many books, you may feel that the routines in this book are a bit boring, but does it matter? In your eyes, Internet articles that you think are awesome are time-sensitive. Are online articles timely? I think online articles are not timely, like the previous Douluo, how miserable the Third Master was scolded (it's quite childish for me to read San Shao's novels now, but when I was in junior high school, I just thought it was very interesting, and it spent my boring time). Once a novel is written, it is written, but people will grow. You should not criticize a six-year-old novel from the current perspective, "Why is it written in such a routine? I'm tired of reading it, it really doesn't work." I hope you can support the author more. It is not easy for the author either.

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1. China will always fight among itself and be looked down upon by others. 2. The protagonist has an aura of ridicule. No matter how powerful he is, others will look down on him. Just like in reality, someone ran 100 meters in 8 seconds. The audience said that this person is lucky. Others know that he is the hunter king, but no one thinks highly of him. There are so many videos leaked. Isn't the protagonist awesome? 3. The enemy has no IQ and no brains. They will hide behind and mock the protagonist. They don't know how to behave. They don't know how to have multiple friends and multiple paths. They must get rid of the protagonist. Many dialogues are extremely mentally retarded. Everyone's first step is to cut off their own back. When they see the protagonist, they will sneer first before talking. 4. I have tolerated these commentaries for a long time. What the article says is that the top commentator, the top commentator among tens of billions of people, looks down on the protagonist, blocks his own way, says that he has a reputation problem, and makes a bet with the female commentator to run naked? I was dumbfounded. There was a commentator in his forties behind him, who was also like this. Come on, doesn't a middle-aged man have any sense of dignity? He directly wants to step on the protagonist without making any preparations in advance. He looks at the protagonist's information and so on. He directly thinks that he is the hunter king promoted by China. This self-righteousness makes me laugh to death. 5. There are so many typos! These are all shortcomings, and they are also some small suggestions I gave. The other party ridiculed, and the protagonist slapped him in the face. It is insulting to the intelligence to have fun like this. For this problem, you can watch Swallowing Starry Sky. It is very comfortable to watch in the middle and late stages. The protagonist's strength has steadily improved and there are no enemies. I also thought of the heroine. After watching this movie, I became more and more comfortable. I am convinced that Thieves in the World is really the originator of the novel, but I didn't expect the heroine to confess so quickly. However, there is also a woman who has a tendency to have a harem, but until more than 500 chapters, it is all about the game, and there is no reality at all. You can write more about reality, because the game changes your reality.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I gave up. I really couldn't stand the protagonist's archery skills. They were so good that they violated the laws of physics. Especially the refracted arrows. Theoretically, they can keep rebounding. But that can only be achieved under ideal circumstances, without considering the hardness of the refraction point, air resistance and other external factors. Author, when you write that the protagonist uses various environments to deflect and kill monsters, you don't consider the impact of the real environment on the deflected arrows. Is this really okay? When digging traps, you think about the fact that the soil can be dug. Why don't you think about the hardness of walls and other things when playing with refractory arrows?😅

I just read the first chapter, and I have some thoughts that I'm not happy with. The protagonist is a graduate of the best university. Is he a gamer? I don't think it's a big deal here. After all, in reality, there are several anchors who graduated from famous schools and are doing this. But later, it was said that the guild broadcast live the black equipment of the leader of the second regiment, and was frantically targeted by the enemy guild, causing the own guild to suffer great losses. The own guild began to target the protagonist, making the protagonist heavily in debt and affecting his family. I just want to ask if I used my brain to write this paragraph. . . Which guild has such strict discipline and power that can unify everyone's ideas to persecute one person? The management of the guild are all people with evil views. Can such a guild still develop and grow and have a good reputation, or will the overall image collapse because of the protagonist? How bad is the protagonist, a graduate of the best university, that he doesn't even have classmates, friends, alumni, or teachers to help him when he is in trouble? How low does one have to have an IQ to be in huge debt? How low does your emotional intelligence have to be to be able to favor the leader of the Second Regiment with a bad character when there is not even a single person in the guild to help speak up? How bad do you have to be to be able to work in the gaming industry for a few years, and still be a little guy? Is it worthy of your obvious background? To be honest, there are too many points to complain about, and the author obviously didn't write carefully, so you can make your own judgment.

This book is actually quite good. I have read more than 900 chapters now, but one thing is annoying. The situation of forcing someone to pretend to be 13 is serious. No matter how awesome the protagonist is, the World Championship champion, and various video promotions. No matter where the protagonist goes or what he does, there will be a bunch of people jumping out to question and belittle the protagonist. It feels like I am trying to force the number of words. I can fill a few chapters just by questioning the protagonist.

After reading Chapter 33, Poison Point Routine Rebirth, entering the game as an artifact, jungler, selling money, getting out of the game, getting slapped in the face at class reunions, pretending to be cool In just one sentence, most of the men I met were brainless villains, lolita women, trying their best to make up all kinds of unreasonable things Anyway, I ran away with the brains to see if I couldn't get rid of the poison.

The aura of wisdom reduction is too conspicuous. No matter how powerful or powerful the protagonist is, other players are not convinced. They are not grateful at all after being taught the skills. They are all white-eyed wolves. They act as if they have no brains and just want to trip up the protagonist. They are also morally kidnapped every day, asking him to give up resources for the first kill. The protagonist says he is wrong as soon as he kills. Is this a normal world view? Can't it be done without making the protagonist the enemy of everyone?

The only feeling I felt after reading this book was that I was too tired. The author seemed not to understand what tension and relaxation meant, and forcefully inserted all kinds of taunts to the enemy. There were basically only two chapters, and I was always in a state of anger during the reading process. The show-off and slap-in-the-face plot is not fun at all. All the plots are described, and the main plot and branch plots are mixed together. It is extremely tiring to read. I skipped through the later stages. I think it will be okay if I delete half of this book. At 780 chapters, I can't do it anymore. I gave up.

It's just a pity that the author didn't finish it and only wrote half of it... I originally read this book five times, maybe it could become a god, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch.

Alas, not many people write online game novels nowadays. I think back then...

I'm speechless. Why do the unions in this game want to grab everything? Being scolded by the big guild every day and grabbing bosses and equipment, so many people still like to play in this kind of game environment? After only reading a few dozen chapters, four or five major guilds are chasing the protagonist and scolding me. I don't know how someone as powerful as the protagonist can persevere in this game environment.

All pets that are contracted by the protagonist will become useless after the contract. They are also convinced. The fifth-level world leader cannot beat a group of players with fourth-level silver heroes and junior leaders. They are defeated in an instant. It's so funny.

In a novel written in 2016, the halo of wisdom is too strong to ridicule. It is really disgusting to me.

Damn, the identity reveal of the two girls in the early stage was really poisonous.

I had no money in primary school, so I watched a pirated version, so I came back to re-subscribe.