Return to 2005

Let me tell you a few shortcomings of this book! First, the text is often not divided into paragraphs. A dividing line is fine. It looks very awkward. Second, can the timeline be made clearer? Can you write about the past few days and months? Also, can you write it in a different location? For example: in the afternoon, the protagonist went from school to a tutoring class. If you explain it, we readers can understand it better.

Just say it briefly. After reading Chapter 70, I felt that the plot was weak, so I didn't read it. 1. Compared with current novels, this book has a slow start. Although it is about urban life, the slow start is still fatal. 2. The first plot is about making money by barbecue. To be honest, the idea of ​​BBQ is very down-to-earth and immersive. But on the other hand, this idea is a failure. There are many ideas to earn start-up capital. Why choose barbecue? The novel originates from life but is higher than life. If it is too close to the earth, it will become vulgar. You can make money with another idea, and you can also show up all the supporting roles you need, so why choose barbecue! In the plot of Lijiang City, Wang Rong and Xiaoke met a young lady with a background. Use a slightly more high-end idea to connect with these people very well. 3. Go to the university town to set up a training class for the plot. This is because the plot requires it. You need to get in touch with the principal. There are so many beauties, so it's understandable. But regarding the setting of this book to make money quickly, it is contradictory. 4. The way in which new characters appear is not very clever and a bit unconvincing. As for a novel, it will be unreadable if the characters are always the same, and readers will get bored. New characters appear to mediate the situation and add to the plot. 5. The writing is good, but the writing is too detailed. You should skip over what needs to be skipped, and be careful about what needs to be detailed, so that the article has a rhythm, not the rhythm of the plot, but the article. 6. It's still an old problem. The writing is too realistic. Although life writing should be realistic, there is a limit. If you don't write it to the right point, it will float. If you write it, it will simmer. Choose the middle one. The writing style should be adjusted, or changed to one that suits the writing style. Finally, the author does not lack writing power, but only lacks a little imagination to develop the plot. You can watch more urban TV series to collect plots and character traits. Wishing you a great fire!

This Qiao Qiao is really strong enough to persuade him to quit. He feels like he has a low IQ and is rubbing against the ground.

I can't understand what I'm writing at all. No wonder it's not popular.

This is the book that I have read so far that best suits my taste. I hope it won't be tj, and keep writing.

After looking through it, I found that the reservations were all less than 100 yuan, absolutely amazing!

It was a bit boring to read, so I turned it out and looked at the introduction and realized that I had read the wrong book. 😌

I hope the author himself will see this message: There is a typo in this book, "take advantage" should be "Cheng"! ! ! ! ! ! Basically every chapter! ! ! ! !

I'm here, I brought some paper

I found that I read more than 800 chapters. The male protagonist has not graduated from college yet. He is either going to have sex or on the way to have sex every day. Can his kidney still be used after graduating from college?

Overall, it's okay. There are some minor issues. Some chapters are disconnected. I hope the timeline is clearer. There are also some people who say they don't like having a harem. Let me ask, which man in the world doesn't want to have a harem? It just depends on whether you have the strength or not. There are so many problems in reading a novel, and you still pretend to be innocent. Can you believe that some women like to read harem plots more than us men? Reading novels is just yy

Seeking rebirth 2006 to 2020 Harem Entrepreneurship Article

A very rich Zhou Anan wanders around without being kidnapped. The author's IQ is indeed in line with my expectations! Have you heard that "there is no airtight wall in the world"?

The writing is a piece of shit, not as good as those who are engaged in technological development and have mastered the development of small and medium-sized enterprises. The country described by the author is a gangster with no one in charge, and the second-generation officials can easily put people in jail. The wealthy family wants the protagonist to work for him as a white glove, and the protagonist is like a piece of garbage. Anyone can step on it, and he has a little power. He has no power. When he encounters an official who has the power to block the protagonist's company, the protagonist's first reaction is to ask a rich girl to invest in the protagonist's stock. Just like a dog, the family will kill the protagonist if they are dissatisfied with it. The protagonist is like a god of mold, looking for all outrageous things on him. Does this mean that the country described by the author is not as good as the United States? What you wrote is worse than an antique dealer's treasure hunt. You don't even have your own overseas troops.

Overall, it was very enjoyable to watch! But! The only bad thing that I can't accept is that little Qiao Qiao. Every time I see it, I skip it without hesitation! It feels like it doesn't advance the plot at all, it's just a waste of words! Poison someone to death! It is recommended that the author write less about Little Qiao Qiao. Maybe the author thinks that writing about Little Qiao Qiao will make the male protagonist appear to be very caring, but that is not what readers see!

I have read more than 300 chapters, and the previous ones are quite good. Starting from about 200 chapters, the protagonist starts to work in the entertainment industry, and then Happy Farm, Weibo, personally feel that it is a bit off track. Nowadays, online articles already need connotation. The author needs to be familiar with or understand a certain industry before he can write something. This is a bit of a hammer and a hammer.

The modern rebirth novels I read back then were all from the 1980s and 1990s. Now this is back to 2005, and the audience has obviously changed. It means I'm getting old too

What era was 2005? The author first searched on Baidu. In 2005, I used two mobile phones. First of all, I am an ordinary person, and the protagonist is still eating sweet potatoes as the staple food.

I came here when I heard it was a harem. Xiaosheng has met all the seniors 🙏

The more I look at it, the less I can stand it. What did you write? This male protagonist's character is really disgusting to me. He started a harem and became a star. He has slept with several celebrities. Who do you disgust? The personal secretary has a male protagonist who is so failed that his boss doesn't like him, so he runs away to fall in love?

I just happened to see the vip before it was put on the shelves, let me talk about my opinions; 1. When I was reborn, I had no passion at all, just daily life, all business was left to friends, and the proportion of friends was included in the money invested in Tencent. I asked myself, I can't do it. I can help my friends in need, but I can't give away one or two hundred million. 2. Qiao Qiao doesn't know what the purpose of writing is? To be honest, there is no way I can like other children like this and be so good to her if she is not my own daughter. It has no role in promoting the plot 3. There is no good dividing line in the article. The scene often changes suddenly when I read it. This is how I feel when I am confused. 4. It is not necessary to make money without telling your parents. It is not necessary for the people closest to you. I believe it is understandable to communicate with your parents. After all, you have written that your mother almost went to college. 5. Qin xx came to the door and actually opened fire, 300,000 a year! What kind of woman do you want? You don't have a girlfriend next to you. You spend 300,000 to buy a woman in three years, and you bought a new house for 580,000! When a man has money, this is not how he spends it As for the plot of this article, there are a lot of things here and there, which makes it uncomfortable to read. After one afternoon, I decided not to read any more. I am not someone who reads pirated copies, so I still hope that the author can make progress and write better in the next book.

A male protagonist who is 166cm tall has no sense of empathy at all. If you still want to have a harem, really, you are thinking too much.

It's a mediocre and enjoyable novel, there's no small climax in three chapters or a big climax in five chapters, but I read hundreds of chapters without realizing it, and it's okay.

I want to know where Li Xueer went? Can you write about this character well? I think this character is more interesting than other female characters. Is there a QQ group? If so, add it so that everyone can chat. It would be better if the author could have a group, like a fan group or something like that.

Are you reborn just to make fun of the powerful? The reality is very helpless, and reading a novel is even worse. The rich people who exceeded tens of billions in 2008 are still like their grandchildren. They are rich and powerful and can be called upon with white gloves. They really think that controlling their own tens of billions of industries is a joke. If the local government does not give the green light to the tens of billions in 2008, then the local government will not protect it. If such a large unicorn does not protect, who will have such a brainless trouble?

This protagonist is just a salty fish, and he was reborn to work for others. Instead of being led by the boss, Miss Yu, in the front, and the reborn senior's Excalibur Capital in the back, the protagonist can be said to be a scumbag. I was reborn without any plans. I was only thinking about buying a house. I was obsessed with buying a house. I knew that the stock returns were high, so I wanted to buy a house. I bought a house by myself earlier, and told Miss Yu to buy a community directly. He knew that The Voice was very popular, but he had no money, so he asked Miss Yu to pay for it, so that he could only get a small profit. Knowing that Meituan would be worth hundreds of billions in the future, they said they didn't want to be involved with the Yu family and asked Miss Yu to run Meituan. Since they don't want to have anything to do with the Yu family, why did the celebrity group give shares to Miss Yu as capital to resist the Yu family? It's not that Excalibur Capital borrowed 1 billion to get the protagonist to engage in the stock market. The protagonist will make money wherever he goes. Look at the rebirth seniors who came out in the early 2000s and had hundreds of billions of dollars in capital. At that time, the protagonist relied on half of the shares of the celebrity group, which was only a few billion RMB.

Just like the title! All the best! ! !

Give me a suggestion. People who can read this kind of book now. Basically they are over 25 to 40 years old. This kind of people don't really like to watch emotional dramas with multiple female protagonists now. The positioning must be accurate. What kind of books should I write for which kind of people?

The writing is very good, down to earth, and the characters are realistic and flesh-and-blood.

I really like this book, I just hope it doesn't end badly.